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3)学会团队合作的关键是什么。
Asweallknow,teamworkplaysanimportantpartinoursuccess.However,whatisteamwork?
Withoutdoubt,whatiscalledteamworkmeanseachpersonontheteamshouldworkwithinagroupofpeople,whichisnumberofpeoplegreaterthanone.Certainly,evenifthereareonlytwopeopleinthegroup,theycanbecalledateam.Therefore,itisanessentialrequirementofanyemploymentthatanypotentialemployeeisateamplayer.
Asthesayinggoes:
Manyhandsmakelightwork;
Ifeveryoneismovingforwardtogether,thensuccesstakescareofitself;
Talentwinsgames,butteamworkandintelligencewinchampionships;
Agreatpersonattractsgreatpeopleandknowshowtoholdthemtogether;
etc.Allthesayingsabovewehaveheardornotaboutteamallemphasizethesignificanceofcooperationtoanextent.Therefore,itisnecessaryforustolearntohowtocooperatewithothers,whichwillturnouttobeeasierforustosucceedinouraims.
Ascurrentcollegestudents,playinganimportantroleontheteamnomatterwhatwherethatisfrom.Tomypointofview,eventhepupilsknowtheeffectofcooperation,whichisthereasonwhywecollegestudentsshouldtakeactionrightaway!
What'
smore,itiswellknownthatanygreatprojectcanmakeitwithoutteams.
Soduringmytimeinuniversity,Iwilltakeanactivepartintheteamstoworkhardinordertoachievemoresuccesses.Forinstance,givesomesuggestionsortrymybesttosupporttheteamwork.
Insteadofmerelystudyhardregardlessofthethingsaroundus,somethingthatIthinkisthemostimportantiseverymemberoftheteamhasaveryspecificrole--asacaptain,goalkeeper,striker,midfielderordefender.Apartfromthat,eachmembershouldcareforeachother.Whenoneofthememberismissing,theteamishandicappedandsoon.Onlyinthisway,cantheteamachieveagreatsuccess.
1.1
Asweallknow,teamworkplaysanimportantpartinoursuccess.[修改]
[搭配统计]动名搭配play...part在教材中出现过4525次
[学习提示]易混词汇:
part,piece,section,division,portion,fraction,fragment,segment,share均可表示“整体的一部分”之意。
important的近义表达有crucial/essential。
[批改提示]know近义表达有cognize/recognize/realize/foreknow
1.2
However,whatisteamwork?
[修改]坛是普特www.put
1.3
Withoutdoubt,whatiscalledteamworkmeanseachpersonontheteamshouldworkwithinagroupofpeople,whichisnumberofpeoplegreaterthanone.[修改]
group,crowd,gang,band,mob,throng,masses,swarm均含“群,帮,伙”之意。
[批改提示]people表示“人,民族”。
查看与person的区别。
[批改提示]person表示“人”。
注意与people的区别。
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1.4
Certainly,evenifthereareonlytwopeopleinthegroup,theycanbecalledateam.[修改]
certainly,naturally,ofcourse,surely均有“肯定地,当然”之意。
1.5
Therefore,itisanessentialrequirementofanyemploymentthatanypotentialemployeeisateamplayer.[修改]
profession,job,occupation,trade,vocation,career,work,employment均含“职业”之意。
[批改提示]批改提示,注意potent与potential的区别。
第2段
2.1
etc.[修改]
[搭配统计]动名搭配attract...people在教材中出现过2116次
[搭配统计]动名搭配make...work在教材中出现过3088次
[搭配统计]动名搭配win...championship在教材中出现过14291次
[搭配统计]动名搭配win...game在教材中出现过35020次
athletics,sport,game均有“体育运动”之意。
注意game和match的区别。
2.2
Allthesayingsabovewehaveheardornotaboutteamallemphasizethesignificanceofcooperationtoanextent.[修改]
[搭配统计]动名搭配emphasize...significance在教材中出现过20次
hear,listen,overhear均含“听”之意。
[批改提示]emphasize/accentuate/stress/underline/highlight
2.3
Therefore,itisnecessaryforustolearntohowtocooperatewithothers,whichwillturnouttobeeasierforustosucceedinouraims.[修改]
aim,goal,purpose,end,target,object,objective均有“目标,目的”之意。
[批改提示]learn近义表达有takein/absorb/ingest/acquire
[批改提示]cooperate近义表达有pulltogether/worktogether/joinforces/coordinate/collaborate
第3段
3.1
Ascurrentcollegestudents,playinganimportantroleontheteamnomatterwhatwherethatisfrom.[修改]
[搭配统计]动名搭配play...role在教材中出现过26773次
college,university,institute,school,academy均含有“学院,大学”之意。
3.2
Tomypointofview,eventhepupilsknowtheeffectofcooperation,whichisthereasonwhywecollegestudentsshouldtakeactionrightaway!
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[搭配统计]动名搭配know...effect在教材中出现过252次
act,action,deed,operation,performance均含“行为,行动”之意。
[批改提示]reason表示“原因,理由”。
注意与cause的区别。
thereasonwhy意为:
...的原因是...,属于四六级经典高分句型。
3.3
What'
smore,itiswellknownthatanygreatprojectcanmakeitwithoutteams.[修改]
big,large,great,grand均含“大的”之意。
what'
smore意思是另外,而且…,是四六级经典补充类词组。
第4段
4.1
Soduringmytimeinuniversity,Iwilltakeanactivepartintheteamstoworkhardinordertoachievemoresuccesses.[修改]
[搭配统计]动名搭配achieve...success在教材中出现过1003次
attain,reach,achieve,arrive均有“达到”之意。
4.2
Forinstance,givesomesuggestionsortrymybesttosupporttheteamwork.[修改]
[搭配统计]动名搭配give...suggestion在教材中出现过161次
give,accord,award,confer,grant,endow,present,bestow均含有“给予,赠给”之意。
第5段
5.1
Insteadofmerelystudyhardregardlessofthethingsaroundus,somethingthatIthinkisthemostimportantiseverymemberoftheteamhasaveryspecificrole--asacaptain,goalkeeper,striker,midfielderordefender.[修改]
[搭配统计]动名搭配have...role在教材中出现过6325次
each,every都有“每一个”之意。
[批改提示]very的近义表达有extremely,exceedingly,remarkably,intensely。
5.2
Apartfromthat,eachmembershouldcareforeachother.[修改]
care,mind均有“介意,在乎”之意。
[批改提示]apartfrom在做“除去……,除……意外”讲时,近义表达有withtheexceptionof。
[批改提示]注意carefor和like区别。
5.3
Whenoneofthememberismissing,theteamishandicappedandsoon.[修改]
lose,miss,misplace均有“丢失,遗失”之意。
5.4
Onlyinthisway,cantheteamachieveagreatsuccess.[修改]
Asweknow,ateamteamworkplaysanimportantpartinoursuccesstoadegree.However,whatsuccess.However,whatisteamwork?
Whatteamwork?
Withoutdoubt,whatiscalledteamworkmeanseachpersonontheteamshouldworkwithinagroupofpeople,whichisnumberofpeoplegreaterthanone.Evenone.Certainly,evenifthereareonlytwopeopleinthegroup,theycanbecalledateam.Therefore,itisanessentialrequirementofanyemploymentthatanypotentialemployeeisateamplayer.
Certainly,asplayer.
Manyhandsmakelightwork;
Ifeveryoneismovingforwardtogether,thensuccesstakescareofitself;
Talentwinsgames,butteamworkandintelligencewinchampionships;
Agreatpersonattractsgreatpeopleandknowshowtoholdthemtogether;
etc.Allthesayingswehaveheardornotaboutteamemphasizethesignificanceofcooperationtoanextent.Inshort,extent.What'
smore,itisnecessaryforustolearntohowtocooperatewithothers,whichwillturnouttobeeasierforustosucceedinouraims.
Asthecurrentcollegestudents,playinganimportantroleontheteamnomatterwhatwherethatisfrom.Besides,eventhepupilsknowtheeffectofcooperation,whichisthereasonwhywecollegestudentsshouldtakeactionrightaway!
Itaway!
Atthesametime,itiswellknownthatanygreatprojectcanmakeitwithoutteams.
Soduringmytimeinuniversity,Iwilltakeanactivepartintheteamstoworkhardinordertoachievemoresuccess.Forinstance,givesomesuggestionsortrymybesttosupporttheteamwork.
Meanwhile,somethingthatIthinkisthemostimportantiseverymemberoftheteamhasaveryspecificrole--asacaptain,goalkeeper,striker,midfielderordefender.Apartfromthat,eachmembershouldcareforeachother.Whenoneofthememberismissing,theteamishandicappedandsoon.Onlyinthisway,cantheteamachieveagreatsuccess.
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BeingCreative
Asisknowntous,imaginationisthebeginningofcreation.Youimaginewhatwedesire,youwillwhatyouimagineandatlastyoucreatewhatyouwill.Firstall,anythinguniqueisunderthecreationthatisderivedfromthecreativepeople.Resultfromthecreation,variousthingsmeaningfulstarttoexist.Inshort,creationissoimportantthatwehavetokeepanddevelopittoanextent.
Inmyopinion,creativepeoplehaveagreatdealofphysicalenergy,buttheyarealsooftenquietandatrest.Besides,theycanworklonghourswithgreatconcentrationwhileremainingfreshandenthusiasticallthetime,whichdoesnotmeanthatcreativepeoplearealwaysactive.Infact,theyrestoftenandsleepalot.What'
smore,thekeytosuccessisthatthecreativepeopleknowhowtocontroltheirenergy,whichisnotruledbythecalendar,theclockoranexternalschedule.Whennecessary,theycanfocusitlikealaserbeam;
whennot,creativetypesimmediatelyrechargetheirbatteries,whichisnotabiorhythminheritedwiththeirgenesandwaslearnedbytrialanderrorasastrategyforachievingtheirgoals.
Meanwhile,weshouldnotonlystudyhardbutalsocatchtheopportunitiesinordertobecreativepeople.Only