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SuchwasElbertEinstein,amanofgreatachievements.议论文
规劝恶习、见解评说
differentpeoplehavegotdifferentattitudestowardsfailure.
differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutsmoking.
opinionsaredividedonthequestion.
60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefee.ontheotherhand,40%thinkthatfeesshouldbecharged.
Therearealwaystwoaspects（方面）toanysituation.
Everythingliveswithoppositeforces.Thesamecanbesaidaboutmoderntechnology,suchasInternet.
Some（foolish）peopleseemto
think/believe/holdtheviewthatsmokingisanenjoyment.Butinfact,smokingdoesgreatharmtopeople’shealth.
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mysuggestionsareasfollows.
asfuturebuildersofourcountry,weshouldmakefulluseofour
timetoworkhard,anddothingstobenefitourcountry.
Tobeginwith,youmustworkhardatyourlessonsandbefullypreparedbeforetheexam（主题句）.withoutsufficientpreparation,youcanhardlyexpecttoanswerallthequestionscorrectly.
一二三原则领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点?
如此罗嗦。
可毕竟还是条理清楚。
考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。
破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
first,second,third,last（不推荐，原因：
的形象词。
再比如：
whentogo,whyhegoesaway?
走出房间，general的词是：
walkoutoftheroom5）附加（多此一举）但是小偷走出房间应该说：
slipoutoftheroom如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲小姐走出房间应该说：
sailoutoftheroom某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他；
小孩走出房间应该说：
danceoutoftheroom或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我老人走出房间应该说：
staggeroutoftheroom们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！
是插入语。
多变句式原则Themanwhomyoumetyesterdayisafriend加法（串联）ofmine.
都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是Idon’tenjoythatbookyouarereading.怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这mrliu,ouroralEnglishteacher,is些，可以在任何句子之间加and,但最好是前后的easy-going.句子又先后关系或者并列关系。
比如说：
其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影asweallknow,spendingtoomuchtimeonTVmayhavebadeffectsonourworkandhealth,especiallyonoureyes.
Therefore,weshouldbeawareof（注意）whentowatch,howtowatch,andwhattowatch.Therearemanywaysofkeepinggoodhealth.Nowadays,taxiesbringpeoplealotofconvenience,butalsocausealotoftrouble.regulationsshouldbelaiddownfortaxidrivers.（应该专门为出租车司机指定交通规则）
Nowmoreandmorestudentsaregettingnear-sightedinschools,
becausetheyhavepaidlittleattentiontothecareoftheireyes.写作的七项基本原则
一、长短句原则工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！
写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。
而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：
asacreature,Ieat;
asaman,Iread.althoughoneactionistomeettheprimaryneedofmybodyandtheotheristosatisfytheintellectualneedofmind,theyareinawayquitesimilar.
如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？
牢记！
强烈建议：
在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；
在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！
文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
主题句原则国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。
否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感！
相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂！
不知所云！
所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！
特别提示：
隐藏主体句可是要冒险的！
俗）
firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally（不推荐，原因：
thefirst,thesecond,thethird,thelast（不推荐，原因：
inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,inthethirdplace,lastly（不推荐，原因：
俗）5）tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finally（强烈推荐）
6）tostartwith,next,inaddition,finally（强烈推荐）
7）firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast（强烈推荐）
8）mostimportantofall,moreover,finally9）ontheonehand,ontheotherhand（适用于两点的情况）
10）foronething,foranotherthing（适用于两点的情况）
建议：
不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！
短语优先原则
写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：
其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单
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