届英语二轮专项冲刺之专题检测卷三十二 短文改.docx

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届英语二轮专项冲刺之专题检测卷三十二短文改

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（2013·西安模拟）

Skiingismyfavoritesport,eventhoughIhadonlyskiedforfourdaysinmywholelife!

LastyearmyfatherpromisedthatbecausemybrotherVictordidwellinhisexams,hewouldbringusforaspecialholiday.WhenVictorgotstraightA’s,Dadsaid,“Ipromisedaspecialholiday.IthinkIshouldkeepmywords.”Victor’sdreamwastoseereallysnow.SoweflewtoSeoulatChristmasvacation,andthentookabustoMujuResort.Asweclimbupthemountain,wesawsomesnowonthetrees.Webegantoplaysnow!

Nooneinmyfamilyhadevertouchedsnowbefore.Wewerealllikethelittlechildren.Wepickeditup,madesnowballs,andthrewitateachother.

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ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhighschool.Iwashavingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.Ihadaboutfiftydollarinmypockets,andIthoughtaboutleavinghome.IttookmeonlytwoweeksawayfromhomewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick.Livingonmyownisatotaldifferentexperienceforthreemainreasons:

beingmoreresponsible,moredecisiveandmorecreative.BecauseofI’monmyown,Igettodealwithmydutieswithoutbeingtold.Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheiradvices.Intheotherhand,Icanmakemyownfutureplan.Ihavemaderulesformetofollow.

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（2013·绵阳模拟）

LastSaturday,ourschoolhadorganizedalloftheSenior1studentstovisitthechildrenatalocalorphanage.Wetookmanybooksthatwaspopularamongchildren,aswellasmanykindsofschoolsuppliesandtoys,tochildren.Theyweredelightedtoreceivethesegift.Weplayedsomegamestogetherandgiveperformances.Beforeleavetheorphanagewetookphotoswiththemandgavethemourcontactdetailsbutwecouldkeepintouchwithoneanother.

Thatday,eachoneofushadanenjoyabletime.Wegavethechildrentheircareandhelp;forreturn,theygaveustheirsmilesandlove.Thesevoluntaryactivitiesmadeadeeplyimpressiononus.

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（2013·大连模拟）

NowadaysGrade3studentsaregeneralfacedwithalotofpressure,whichisrathercommon.Toreduceit,thefollowedsuggestionsmayhelp.Firstofall,knowexactlywhatleadtoyourpressure,andthenyoucantakemeasurestodealwithit.Secondly,setupagoalwhatisnottoohigh,inanotherwords,don’tputtoomuchpressureonyourself.Thirdly,findawaytorelaxyouoccasionally,forexample,youcanlistentomusic,goswimorjustsimplygowalking.Lastly,makefriendwithothers,suchas,yourclassmates,yourteachers,yourparents.Theywillunderstandyouandcometoyourhelpwhenyouarereallyinthetrouble.Inaword,nevergetyourselfstuckinthepressurefor“impossibleisnothing”.

答案解析

1

答案：

Skiingismyfavoritesport,eventhoughIhadonlyskiedforfourdaysinmy

have

wholelife!

LastyearmyfatherpromisedthatbecausemybrotherVictordidwellin

if

hisexams,hewouldbringusforaspecialholiday.WhenVictorgotstraightA’s,Dad

take

said,“Ipromisedaspecialholiday.IthinkIshouldkeepmywords.”Victor’sdream

word

wastoseereallysnow.SoweflewtoSeoulatChristmasvacation,andthentooka

realfor

bustoMujuResort.Asweclimbupthemountain,wesawsomesnowonthetrees.

climbed

Webegantoplay∧snow!

Nooneinmyfamilyhadevertouchedsnowbefore.We

with

werealllikethelittlechildren.Wepickeditup,madesnowballs,andthrewitateach

them

other.

1.【解析】第一句had→have。

主句谓语动词是一般现在时态，所以，状语从句的谓语动词应该是现在完成时态，不可能是过去完成时态。

2.【解析】第二句because→if。

在that引导的宾语从句中，又包含一个条件状语从句。

在爸爸许诺时，考试还没进行，所以，应该用if引导条件状语从句。

3.【解析】第二句bring→take。

此处的take表示“带我们去”，不能用bring。

4.【解析】第四句words→word。

keepone’sword是固定词组，意为“遵守诺言”。

5.【解析】第五句really→real。

用形容词修饰名词。

6.【解析】第六句at→for。

forChristmasvacation意为“去度圣诞假期”。

7.【解析】第七句climb→climbed。

文章叙述的是过去的事情,故应用一般过去时态。

8.【解析】第八句play后面加with。

playwithsnow意为“玩雪”。

9.【解析】第十句去掉the。

littlechildren表示泛指，其前面不用定冠词。

10.【解析】第十一句第二个it→them。

此处的them指的是snowballs，而不是snow。

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答案：

ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhigh

decided

school.Iwashavingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.Ihadaboutfiftydollarinmy

gettingdollars

pockets,andIthoughtaboutleavinghome.Ittookmeonlytwoweeksawayfrom

homewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick.Livingonmyownisatotaldifferent

whentotally

experienceforthreemainreasons:

beingmoreresponsible,moredecisiveandmore

creative.BecauseofI’monmyown,Igettodealwithmydutieswithoutbeingtold

∧.Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheir

to

advices.Intheotherhand,Icanmakemy