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JohnBrownisLondontaxidriverwholovegoingtothe
Theater.Lastweekhismothergavehimtwoticketsforaplay.
TheticketswereonSundayevening.ThenJohnreadsome
reviewsoftheplay,whichallsaiditwasaterriblyone!
He
wouldn’tgotoseeaplaythatnooneliked
it,Sotwohours
beforetheplaystarted,helefttheticketonthebackseatof
histaxi,perhapssomeonewhowantedseetheplaywouldtake,however,whileJohnwentbackhome,theticketswere
stillthere.In
thefact,therewerefourticketsontheseat.Someonehasplacedanotherpairofticketsontopofthem!
09年
Myclassmate,Joseph,isatpresentinhospitalwithabreakingleg.Hewaswalkingtoschooltheotherdaywhenheletabicycleranrightintohim.Heneverwatches
whereheisgoing,soheoftengetsintothetrouble.
Butheishavinganicetimethere.Hehasacomfortableroom,patientlynurses,andagreatdealoftimetoread.
Somefriendsofhisgotoseehimeveryday,theytake
himlotsofgoodbookandfreshfruit.Heisnotlosinganytimefromschoolbecauseheisbusystudywhathehas
missedinclass.Thedoctorsaysheisrecoveringfastthan
expectedandwillbeoutofhospitalafewweeks.
10年
Mysistersawalovelycupwhenweareshoppingtheotherday.Shelikeditatonce.Thenshebentdownandpickeduptolookatapriceonit.Asshedidthis,lotsofteasplashedonhisT-shirt!
Ihadtotryhardlynottolaughathershockedface!
Mysisterwantedgetoutoftheshopasfastasshecouldwhenashopassistantcameovertous.Itwasturnedouttobeherowncupthatshe’dleftontheshelfbymistake.Theassistantwasclearlyasembarrassingasmysister,forIjustthoughtitwasfunny!
11年
LastSundaymorning,whenlwashavingawalkintheparknearmyhome,Icameacrossacrewmakeanewfilmwithoneofmyfavoriteactor.Ididn’thavemycamerawithmeatthattime,butIrushedbackhometoget.Unfortunately,bythetimeIgotback,theyhavefinishedthesceneandtheactorcouldn’tbeseeneverywhere.Iwasreallydisappointingandabouttoleavewhenhewalkedoutabuilding.Hewasrightthereinthefrontofme!
Icouldn’tbelievemyluck--notonlydidIhadmyphototakenwithhim,buthesignedhisnameonmyshirt!
12年
MyfatherandIstayedattheSouthLakeHotelforaweekwhenwevisitBeijinglastmonth.Itisinthedowntownarea,butitiseasytogotoanywherefromthehotelbypublictransport.Welivedinacomfortablydouble-roomwithabigbath.WhatIlikedbestwerethefreehigh-speedInternetconnectionintheroom.Icheckedmyemailmessageseveryday.IalsosharedformyfriendsmanyphotostakinginBeijing.Thefoodwaswonderfulwithreasonableprices,andweenjoyedseverallocaldish.ItissuchgreathotelthatIwouldrecommendittoanyfriendofmewhoisgoingtoBeijing.
13年
MygrandfatherandIenjoyfishing.OneSundaymorningwegofishingatalake.Wetookoursfishingpolesandheadedforthelake.Assoonaswearrived,sowedroppedthelinesintothewater.Beforewaitingforabouthalfanhour,Iwasbeginningtogetimpatiently.Iwantedtogiveup,andmygrandfathertoldmetowaitalittlelonger.Finally,therewereasuddenpullatthepoleand
fishwascaught.Withinthenextfewminute,mygrandfatheralsocaughtafish.Felthungry,webuiltafirebythelakeandbarbecuedthefish.Itwasdelicious.
改错题考点:
1添加
1.Aretheyearsyouspentatschoolbestyearsofyourlife?
2.JohnBrownisLondontaxidriver
3.Thedoctorsayshewillbeoutofhospitalafewweeks.
4.Somefriendsofhisgotoseehimeveryday,theytake
himlotsofgoodbookandfreshfruit.
5.Thenshebentdownandpickeduptolookatapriceonit.
6.Mysisterwantedgetoutoftheshop
7.Ididn’thavemycamerawithmeatthattime,butIrushedbackhometoget
8.hewalkedoutabuilding
9.Itissuchgreathotel
10.
fishwascaught
2删除
1.Itisabout200milesfarawayfromLondon
2.I’msureyouwillfindoneyoulikeit
3.Theywereusedtowriteontheblackboardandask
usdifficultquestions.
4.I’mgrowingoldandknowwhatI
Wantit.
5.He
it
6.In
thefact,therewerefourticketsontheseat.
7.heoftengetsintothetrouble.
8.Itwasturnedouttobeherowncup
9.Hewasrightthereinthefrontofme!
10.Assoonaswearrived,sowedroppedthelinesintothewater
3动词时态
1.I’llsendmyfriendCharliemeetyouattheairportwhenyouarrived.
2.Wehadto
weresaying.
3.IleftschoolassoonasIcanandstartedwork.
4.therewerefourticketsontheseat.Someonehasplacedanotherpairofticketsontopofthem!
5.Mysistersawalovelycupwhenweareshoppingtheotherday
6.bythetimeIgotback,theyhavefinishedthescene
7.notonlydidIhadmyphototakenwithhim
8.whenwevisitBeijinglastmonth
9.OneSundaymorningwegofishingatalake
4非谓语动词
1.I’llsendmyfriendCharliemeetyouattheairport.
2.NowIreallyenjoystudy
3.Myclassmate,Joseph,isatpresentinhospitalwithabreakingleg.
4.heletabicycleranrightintohim
5.heisbusystudywhathehas
missedinclass.
6.heassistantwasclearlyasembarrassingasmysister,
7.Icameacrossacrewmakeanewfilm
8.Iwasreallydisappointingandabouttoleave
9.manyphotostakinginBeijing
10.Felthungry,webuiltafire
5名词单复数
1.Theyhaveallsortsofcourse
2.Ifoundmostlessonratheruninteresting.
3.。
Lastweekhismothergavehimtwoticketsforaplay.Twohours
histaxi,
4.Theytake
himlotsofgoodbookandfreshfruit
5.withoneofmyfavouriteactor
6.Thefoodwaswonderfulwithreasonableprices,andweenjoyedseverallocaldish.
7.Withinthenextfewminute,
6主谓一致-动词单复数
1.HerearetheinformationaboutManchesterUniversity.
2.JohnBrownisaLondontaxidriverwholovegoingtothe
Theatre.
3.WhatIlikedbestwerethefreehigh-speedInternetconnection
4.therewereasuddenpullatthepole
7形容词副词
1.Iknowyou
areparticularinterestedinHumanRights
2.Ireadbooksatthepubliclibrary,andlateIdecidedtoattendcollege.
3.itwasaterriblyone!
4.Hehasacomfortableroom,patientlynurses,
5.hedoctorsaysheisrecoveringfastthan
expected
6.Ihadtotryhardlynottolaughathershockedface!
7.theactorcouldn’tbeseeneverywhere
8.Welivedinacomfortablydouble-room
9.Iwasbeginningtogetimpatiently
8代词指代
1.Asshedidthis,lotsofteasplashedonhisT-shirt!
-2。
notonlydidIhadmyphototakenwithhim
3.IwouldrecommendittoanyfriendofmewhoisgoingtoBeijing.
4.Wetookoursfishingpoles
9并列连词
1.BothyourauntorIlook
2.Theassistantwasclearlyasembarrassingasmysister,forIjustthoughtitwasfunny!
3.Ididn’thavemycamerawithmeatthattime,butIrushedbackhometoget
4.Itisinthedowntownarea,butitiseasytogotoanywherefromthehotel
5.Iwantedtogiveup,andmygrandfathertoldmetowaitalittlelonger
10从属连词
1.SoIwill
seethatthereisanythingontheirwebsite(网址)
2.whileJohnwentbackhome
3.Beforewaitingforabouthalfanhour,Iwasbeginningtogetimpatient
11介词
1.Wealsohadtodoplentyofhomeworkandhanditontime.
2.Ialsosharedformyfriendsmanyphotos
12冠词
1.Thenshebentdownandpickeduptolookatapriceonit
陕西06-13年短文改错汇编答案
06
76.is
主谓一致
therebe句型主语在后面information为不可数名词
谓语用单数
0677.去far
副词多余
far
修饰形容词或副词
意思是
太….
这里表示
有…..远
78.
√
79.courses
名词单复数
allsortsof….
各种各样的
修饰可数名词复数
80.
去it
代词多余
定语从句中指代重复原句省略了连接代词that作like的宾语
81.particularly
形容词使用错误
副词修饰形容词interested
82.that改if/whether
行文逻辑错误whether/if
引导动词see后的宾语从句
表是否….
83.meet前加to
添加不定式符号to
sendsb.todosth.派某人去做某事….
84.arrive
动词时态错误
when引导时间状语从句
主句将来时,从句用一般现在时
85.or-and
行文逻辑错误
both…and…
两者都…
07
76.添加the
添加定冠词
the+形容词最高级…
表示
最…..
77.lessons
lesson为可数名词
前有most修饰应用复数形式
78.pay
and连接sit
和pay
havetodo。
。
不得不。
79.were去掉
be动词多余
usedtodosth.
过去常常做某事
80.√
81.in
介词使用错误
intime
及时
ontime按时
82.could
动词时态
and连接并列成分
都是过去式
83.later
late是
迟
或者晚的意思
later是随后
后来的意思
84.studying
分词使用
动名词作宾语enjoydoing
喜欢做什么事…
85.It
名词性从句中指代重复
what是连接代词
就代替了it
08
1.loves
定语从句中的主谓一致
谓语单复数有先行词决定
2.
3.for
4.t