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过渡语的应用使句与句，段与段之

间衔接更紧密，更具有连接性。

Therehaslongbeenanationaldebateon…Somepeopleadvocatethatfirecrackers

shouldbebannedbecause….Othersholdtheopposite

opinion.Theybelieve….

Frommypointofview,Iwelcomeso-calledlimitedbanning,whichhasbeenpracticedinsomepartsofourcountry.Ontheonehand,….

Ontheotherhand,….Onlyinthiswaycanwe….

过渡语

过渡语可是词，短语，也可是一个句子。

通过使用过渡语可以使文章更紧凑，脉络更清楚。

过渡语

表示举例说明的过渡语

forexample,forinstance,foronething,toillustrate,asanillustration,acaseinpointLet'

stake…asanexample;

take…forexample

…isatypicalexampleof…

表示递进关系的过渡语

inaddition,furthermore,moreover,besides,also,what'

smore

notonly,butalso,similarly;

another…is

…isalsoafactor

表示对比对照的过渡语

incontrast,bycontrast,ontheotherhand,incomparison,onthecontrary,unlike,like,contraryto,whereas,while,conversely

…differ/varygreatly/vastlyfrom

表示因果关系的过渡语

becauseof,onaccountof,dueto,owingto,thanksto,for,because,since,as,forthisreasontherefore,so,asaresult,consequently,inconsequence,accordingly,hence,thus

Thereasonswhy/for…are/liein…

表示结论的过渡语

tosumup,toconclude,tosummarize

insum,insummary,inconclusion,inall,inaword,inshort,inbrief

Wecancometotheconclusionthat….

Aconclusioncanbereachedthat….

表示转折的过渡语

though,although,however,nevertheless,nonetheless,eventhough

Aseverythinghastwosides,weshouldnotneglecttheothersideofthecoin

Let'

slookattheothersideofthecoin

ReferenceModel

（1）

Therehaslongbeenanationaldebateonfirecrackers.Somepeopleadvocatedthatfire-crackersshouldbebannedbecausewehadheardoftoomanyinstancesoffirecrackersinjuringpeopleandcausingfires.Othersholdtheoppositeopinion.Theybelievefirecrackers,apartfromcreatinghappyatmosphereandbringgoodluck,havebecomepart

ofournationaltradition.Howcanwedoawaywiththiscustomwhichlabelsouridentity?

Frommypointofview,Iwelcomeso-calledlimitedbanning,whichhasbeenpracticedinReferenceModel

（2）

somepartsofourcountry.Ontheonehand,thelocalgovernmentatalllevels,canorganizelarge-scalepartiesinwhichfirecrackersareleftoffonnationalholidaysespeciallytheSpringFestival.Onthehand,thespecialisthimself,whomakesthishiscareer,takesontheresponsi-bilityoflettingoffthefirecrackersonceremoniesandparties.Onlyinthiswaycanwewardoffdangerwhileretainingthehappinessbroughtaboutbyfirecrackers.

OnOverseasStudy

1.有人认为出国留学［微博］是个人发展的最佳选择;

2.也有人坚持在国内也能实现自己的理想;

3.我的看法。

参考范文：

Withthedeepeningofreformandopening-upofourcountry,manypeopledreamofgoingabroadforfurtherstudy.Theyinsistthattherearemoremodernresearchfacilities,worldfamousprofessorsandexcellentenvironmentinsomeforeigncollegesanduniversities,whichlayaperfectfoundationfortheirfuturedevelopment.However,therearestillmanypeoplewhofavorstudyingathome.Theyarguethat,foronething,studyingabroadistooexpensiveandthereforedoesn'

tpayoff.Foranother,therearenolanguageandculturalbarriersiftheystudyinourcountry.Justastheoldsayinggoes,"

Everyadvantagehasitsdisadvantage,"

soIbelievebothopinionsareacceptableinsomesense.Ifstudentshavethechancesandfinancialresources,theyshouldseizetheopportunitytogoabroadandbroadentheireyes.Ontheotherhand,ifconditionsdon'

tpermit,theycanpursuetheirstudiesattopuniversitiesinourcountry.Whatcountsisnottheplacewheretheystudy,butwhattheycanlearn.

ShouldCET-4（6）BeAbandoned

1.有人认为应该废除大学英语四（六）级考试;

2.其他人认为应该保留四（六）级考试;

TherehasbeenaheateddiscussionaboutwhethertokeeptheCollegeEnglishTestBand4（6）intheuniversities.SomepeoplearguethatthetesthasbecomeanobstacletotheteachingofEnglishoncampuses,whileothersmaintainthattheadvantagesofthetestoutweighitsdisadvantages.Asfarasthefirstgroupofpeopleareconcerned,theygivethefollowingarguments.Foronething,manystudentsspendmostoftheirtimepreparingforthetest,thereforetheirfocusisnotonlearningEnglishbetterbutongettingahighmark.Foranother,manyteachersdon'

tconcentrateonhowtoimprovethestudents'

abilities.Theyonlycarehowmanyoftheirstudentscanpassthetest.However,therearemanypeoplewhobelievethetestshouldstay.Tobeginwith,thetestisthemosteffectivewaytomeasurehowwellthestudentshavelearnedEnglish.What'

smore,wecancomeupwithsomewaystolessenthenegativeeffect.AsfarasIamconcerned,each

sideisrightinacertainway.WehavetokeepthetestsostudentswillhavebettermotivationtolearnEnglish.However,wecan'

tattachtoomuchimportancetothescoresofthetest.

BrainDraininChina

1）中国人才流失的现状;

2）对人才流失的看法;

3）如何解决人才流失。

参考范文

CompositionforreferenceNowadays,oneofthemostseriousproblemsChinaisfacedwithisbraindrain.Whileshortagesoftalenttroublemanyuniversitiesandstate-owned

enterprises,millionsoftalentedpeopleeitheremigratetodevelopedcountriesorworkforforeigncompanies.Atthesametime,abigcrowdofwell-educatedpeoplewhoaredeterminedtofollowtheirfootstepstakeTOEFLorGREastheirpassporttotheWest.However,peopleseethisphenomenonindifferentperspectives.SomeholdtheopinionthatChinasuffersalotfrombraindrain.Theyargue,ontheonehand,thatbraindrainconsiderablyweakensourinternationalcompetitiveness.On

theotherhand,theybelievethatthetalentshouldservetheirnativecountryfirst.Incontrast,othershighlighttheadvantagesofinternationalexchangeandcooperation.TheyclaimthatChineseyouthsshouldgoabroadtostudyandgainmoreexperience.What'

smore,thelong-termbenefitswilloutweighlosseswesuffernow.Braindrainposesachallenge.Chinashouldgoallouttoattracttalentedpeopleinordertobettercompeteintheworld.Foronething,decentlivingandworkingconditionsshouldbeofferedtospecialists.Foranother,wehavetobetterdevelopoureconomy,whichisasurebaitforallkindsoftalent.

Intelligence-NatureorNurture

1）有人认为智力是天生的;

2）也有人认为智力是环境决定的;

3）如何更好地发展智力。

Aresomepeoplebornclever,andothersbornstupidOrisintelligencedevelopedbyourenvironmentorexperienceStrangelyenough,theanswertobothquestionsisyes

Ontheonehand,ifwetaketwopeopleatrandomfromthecrowd,itisverylikelythattheirdegreesofintelligencewillbecompletelydifferent.However,ifwetaketwoidenticaltwins,chancesarethattheywillbeasintelligentaseachother.Therefore,aconclusioncanbedrawnthatintelligenceistosomeextentsomethingwearebornwith.Thecloserthebloodrelationshipbetweentwopeople,theclosertheyarelikelytobeinintelligence

Ontheotherhand,though,ifweputtwoidenticaltwinsindifferentenvironments,forexample,wemightsendonetouniversityandtheothertoafactorywheretheworkisboring,wewouldfinddifferencesintheirintelligenceseveralyearslater,whichindicatesthatenvironmentdoesplayacrucialroleinourintelligence。

Justaseverycoinhastwosides,ourintelligenceispartlybornandpartlydeveloped.Thesurewaytodevelopourintelligenceisintelligentparentsaswellasagoodenvironment.

PrivateCars

1）发展私人汽车的好处（提高人们的生活水平;

刺激经济增长）;

2）私人汽车带来的问题（环境污染;

交通事故）;

3）我的看法。

Privatecarshavebecomeanimportantaspectofpeople'

slifeinmanypartsofourcountry,especiallyinlargecitiessuchasBeijing,ShanghaiandGuangzhou.Whiletheybringmuchconveniencetopeople,theyarealsowidelycriticized.Therearesomeargumentsforowningprivatecars.Inthefirstplace,carsallowpeopletomovearoundfreely,whichgreatlyimprovesourlivingstandard.Wecaneasilydrivecarsforsightseeingonweekends.Inthesecondplace,carsareacomfortablewaytotravel,especiallyinbadweather.Lastbutnotleast,thecarindustrycanboosteconomybycreatingmanyjob

opportunitiesinproductionofsteel,rubber,glassandsoon.However,therearealsomanygoodargumentsagainstcars.Firstofall,theypollutetheenvironmentbyemittingharmfulgasesandgivingoutloudnoises.Inaddition,carscausealargenumberoftrafficaccidents,whichbringgreatmiserytothevictims'

families.AsfarasIamconcerned,weshouldlimitthenumberofprivatecarsbyprovidingbettermass

transportationandbetterserviceforthepeople.Everyone

shouldsacrificehisorherowninterestforthecommongoodofthesociety.

1.低碳生活（话题来源：

哥本哈根气候大会）

Direction:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicof“Lo-wcarbonLife”.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow：

1、低碳生活方式受到人们的欢迎

2、低碳生活的意义

3、我们应该,,

Recently,low-carbonbecomesahigh-frequencyandfashionablewordwhichgetsthegreatestconcernintheworld.Low-carbonlifemeansakindoflifestyleinwhichpeopledotheirbesttoreduceenergyconsumptionandcarbongreenhousegasemissions.

Itisofvitalimportanceforthewholeworldtopracticethelow-carbonlifestyle.Firstly,ournaturalresourcesandenergyarelimited;

therefore,itisabsolutelynecessaryforustosaveandprotectthem.Secondly,inordertoprotectourenvironmentfromseriousgreenhouseeffect,weneedalow-carbonemission.Itislow-carbonlifethatenablesournextgenerationstoliveabetterandsuperiorlife.

Whatweshouldbearinmindisthattheearthiscommonhome.Thus,everyoneiswelladvisedtoprac