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本部分为主观试题,分两节:
SectionA和SectionB。
SectionA:
Composition
本节是命题作文,文章题材主要属于说明文、议论文或记叙文的范围。
SectionB:
Note-writing
本节是写便条。
三.测试目的:
按照《大纲》的要求测试学生书面表达的能力。
四.值得一提的是,与2000年的旧《大纲》相比,新《大纲》的以下变化值得关注:
1.短文写作的字数由原来的150字增加到200字;
2.便条写作的分值由原来的5分增至10分;
3.写作部分的总分值由原来的20分增至25分。
由此可见新《大纲》更加重视对考生英语写作能力尤其是英语实用写作能力的考察,这应当引起考生的注意。
此新大纲已由2005年4月开始执行。
2008年高校英语专业四级考试(TEM4)写作部分评分标准
(一)作文评分标准
专业四级考试(TEM4)的作文评分一般采用总体评分(GlobalScoring)的方法。
阅卷人就总的印象给出奖励分(AwardScores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。
满分为15分,9分为及格线。
1.(14-15分)语言流畅,内容充实,词汇丰富,观点明确,条理清楚,结构正确,字数在180-250之间。
2.(12-13分)语言流畅,内容充实,词汇丰富,观点明确,条理清楚,结构正确,但有少量的语法错误。
3.(10-11分)观点清晰,条理清楚,语言流畅,结构正确。
但语言简单,有一些语法及拼写错误或有部分跑题。
4.(8-9分)文章基本切题,语言较通畅,有观点。
但语法错误多,随意,拼写错误较多或句间逻辑推理不够明确或跑题。
5.(6-7分)文章基本切题,结构不符合要求(Introduction,body,ending比例不当);
语言不够流畅,语法错误很多,句间逻辑推理不够明确或跑题。
6.
作文以“我”或“我们”来写,属切题;
一部分以“我”或“我们”,另一部分以“社会”来写,属部分跑题。
(最高11分)
都以“社会”来写,属全部跑题。
(最高8分)
7.自拟题目不管正确与否都不扣分。
8.空白卷打0分。
9.字数少于170或大于250,扣1分;
大于300扣2分。
10.字数字体要写清楚,并写在框内。
此外,阅卷老师的评分还会受到其他一些因素的影响,例如:
是否有具体的事例、名言警句等?
文章观点是否新颖、合乎逻辑?
用词是否丰富?
书写是否工整,卷面是否整洁等等。
(二)便条写作评分标准
从2005年5月起,便条写作分值由原来的5分提高为10分。
以2008年考题为例,便条写作评分主要从以下三方面考虑:
WriteonANSWERSHEETTWOanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:
Jane,yourclassmate,isthinkingofsubscribingtoanEnglish-languagenewspaper.Andyouwouldliketorecommendonetoher.Writeanote,tellingherwhichnewspaperitisanddescribingtwofeaturesofthepaper.
1.格式(2分)
主要包括日期、称呼和结尾三部分,每部分完全正确得1分,出现任何错误都不得分。
分数扣完为止,不倒扣。
(1)日期(Date):
正确形式:
April20,2008;
April20th,2008;
April20;
20April2008;
4/20/2008;
20/4/2008(Apr.也可以,任何一个日期都可以)
位置应在右上角或左上角。
具体日期不限。
(2)称呼(Heading):
DearJane,(或Jane,)
位置应在日期下一行左侧顶头。
(3)结尾(Ending):
Yourssincerely,/Yourstruly,/Sincerelyyours,/Yours,/Sincerely,
Mary(或其他人名)
位置在便条结尾的右下方。
凡不符合上述正确格式或表达有误均要扣分。
(4)格式需前后一致,如全左或全右,若不符合,扣1分。
2.内容(2分)
该便条须包括以下几项内容:
(1)英语报纸的名称(1分)
只要出现报纸名字就给分,不论名字真实与否。
名字没有出现扣1分。
(2)报纸的两个特点或者读者的两点收获(1分)
如果只写了一个特点,不得分。
如果写的两个特点属于同一性质,如“包括国际新闻和国内新闻”,不得分。
3.语言(6分)
首句需用自己正确的语言表达,若完全抄提示“you’rethinkingofsubscribingtoanEnglish-languagenewspaper”,扣1分。
如果格式内容得满分,但语言较差,最多6分。
4.评分总体要求
(1)语言没有严重错误,格式正确,内容完整,语言得体,字数符合要求(50–80),可给9-10分。
(2)便条总字数(包括三部分格式在内)要求约50–60字,不足50字或超过80字(10行或10行以上)扣1分。
(3)便条总分为10分,6分为及格线。
TEM4COMPOSITIONMARKINGSCHEME
BAND
SCORE
DESCRIPTION
5
15--13
EFFECTIVECOMMUNICATIONWITHACCURACIES
Thewritingeffectivelyaddressesthewritingtask.Itdemonstratesawelldevelopedlogicalorganizationalstructurewithclearlystatedmainideasandsufficientsupportingdetails.Ithasalmostnoerrorsofvocabulary,spelling,punctuationorsyntax,anditdisplaysanadequateabilitytousethelanguagewithappropriateness.Nodifficultyisexperiencedbythereader.
4
12--10
GOODCOMMUNICATIONWITHAFEWINACCURACIES
Thewritingadequatelyaddressesalmostallthewritingtask,thoughitdealswithsomepartsmoreeffectivelythanothers.Itdemonstratesagenerallywelldevelopedlogicalorganizationalstructurewithclearlystatedmainideasandsufficientsupportingdetails.Ithasrelativelyfewsignificanterrorsofvocabulary,spelling,punctuationorsyntax,anditdisplaysanabilitytousethelanguagewithappropriateness.Verylittledifficultyisexperiencedbythereader.
3
9--7
PASSABLECOMMUNICATIONWITHSOMEINACCURACIES
Thewritingadequatelyaddressesmostofthewritingtask.Onthewhole,itdemonstratesanadequatelydevelopedlogicalorganizationalstructure,thoughtheremayoccasionallybealackofrelevance,clarity,consistencyorsupport.Ithassomeerrorsofvocabulary,spelling,punctuationorsyntax,whichmay,fromtimetotime,obscuremeaning,andforthemostpartitdisplayssomeabilitytousethelanguagewithappropriateness.Occasionaldifficultyisexperiencedbythereader.
2
6--4
PROBLEMATICCOGGPROBLEMATICCOMMUNICATIONWITHFREQUENTINACCURACIES
Thewritingonlyaddressessomeofthewritingtask.Itdemonstratesaninadequateorganizationalstructure,andtheremayquiteoftenbealackofrelevance,clarity,consistencyorsupport.Ithasfrequenterrorsofvocabulary,spelling,punctuationorsyntax,anditdisplaysalimitedabilitytousethelanguagewithappropriateness.Somedifficultyisexperiencedbythereader.
1
3--0
ALMOSTNOCOMMUNICATION
Thewritingalmostcompletelyfailstoaddressthewritingtask.Ithasneitheranorganizationalstructurenorcoherence.Almostallsentencescontainerrorsofvocabulary,spelling,punctuationorsyntax,anditdisplaysnoabilitytousethelanguagewithappropriateness.Evenafterconsiderableeffortonthepartofthereader,thetextislargelyincomprehensible.
SampleAnalysis
2007SECTIONACOMPOSITION(35MIN)
Nowadays,theInternethasbecomepartofpeople’slife,andmillionsofyoungpeoplehavemadefriendsonline.
WriteonANSWERSHEETTWOacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:
IsItWisetoMakeFriendsOnline?
Youaretowriteinthreeparts.
Inthefirstpart,statespecificallywhatyourviewis.
Inthesecondpart,supportyourviewwithoneortworeasons.
Inthelastpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.
Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.Failuretofollowtheinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.
Sample1(14Points)
WiththeInternetbecominganindispensablepartofmodernpeople’slife,makingfriendsonlineenjoysitsgreatpopularity,especiallyamongyoungpeople.However,isitwisetomakefriendsonline,asmanyparentsandteachersareworryingabout?
AsfarasIamconcerned,Istronglyopposebeingaddictedtomakingfriendsonline.
Firstly,toomuchattentiontoonlinefriendsdistractsyourconcernstothetruefriendsandfamiliesintherealworld.Ifwelookaround,weoftenfindalotofyoungpeoplestayingonlineandchattingwithonlinefriendsalldaylong.Bythesametime,thecommunicationbetweenthemandthefriendsaroundthemarebecominglessandless.Therefore,theyfeellonelierinreallifeandspendmoretimeonInternet.
Besides,onlinefriendsareoftendisguised.AlargenumberofcaseshaveprovedthatmanycriminalsmakeuseofInternettocheatofmoneyorlove.Eveniftheyarenotcheaters,theytendtobetotallydifferentpersonswhenyougetinactualcontactwiththem.There’salwaysagapbetweentherealworldandtheimaginaryone.
Nevertheless,itisunwisetomakefriendsonline.ThosewhoareindulginginInternetshouldcastyoureyesighttothefriendshipandkinshipinthereallife.Whatyoushoulddoistoseeksolution,butnottoescape.
Analysis
Thisisawell-organizedessaywithahighmark.Inthefirstpart,thewriterintroducesthetopicandclearlypresentshis/herviewinthethesisstatement—“Istronglyopposebeingaddictedtomakingfriendsonline.”Inthesecondpart,thewritersupportshis/heropinionwithtwospecificpoints,whichareexpressedintwotopicsentences.Andsolidevidenceisprovidedwithdetailstoclarifythepoints.Thethesisisreinforcedinthelastpart—“itisunwisetomakefriendsonline.”Afterthat,thewriteralsogivessuggestiontothosewhoareindulginginInternet,whichmakestheconclusionstrongandconvincing.
Theorganizationisclearwithpropertransitions,suchasfirstly,besides,nevertheless.Theessaydemonstratesawelldevelopedlogicalorganizationalstructurewithclearlystatedmainideaandsufficientsupportingdetails.Ithasalmostnoerrorsofvocabulary,spellingandgrammar.Thiswritingeffectivelyaddressesthewritingtask.
Note:
Thewordsinitalicsareeitherwrongornotusedproperly.
Sample2(12Points)
IsItWisetoMakeFriendsOnline?
Nowadays,ithasbeenafashiontomakefriendsonline,andmoreandmoreteenagers,collegestudentsandevenmanyadultswillspendalotoftimechattingwithpeopleontheInternet.ButIdon’tthinkitiswisetomakefriendsonline.
Firstly,mostofpeoplewillnotrevealtheiridentityontheInternet,whichwillnotenableyoutomaketruefriends.Justimagine,ayoungladyyouaretalkingwithmaybeanoldman,andI’msurewewillfeelverybadwhenweareexposedtothetruth.Besides,thefriendsonlinecanbringbadeffecttopeople,especiallyforteenagers.Theunhealthystuffwillbothphysicallyandpsychologicallyinfluenceyoungpeopleand,inacertaindegree,canleadanunproperwaytotheirwholelife.Atlast,makingfriendsonlinecandobadtotherelationshipbetweenyouandyourfamilyandfriendsinreallife.BeingaddictedtotheInternetmakesyouignorethereality.Youwillbeangryaboutyourparents’persuadingandafteralongtime,maybeyouwillfindyouhavelosttheabilityofhowtocommunicatewithothersproperly.
Inaword,itisnotwisetomakefriendsonline.IhopeeveryonecanfocusontherealityinsteadofwastingtoomuchtimemakingfriendsontheInternet.
Thisisanessayinband4.Theauthorhasaclearanddefiniteviewonthetopic.Yetthethesisispresentedabruptlywithoutthesoundlogicwiththeprevioussentence.Thethreesupportingpointsareclearlystatedbutnotwelldeveloped.Forexample,thesecondpointthefriendsonlinecanbringbadeffecttopeople,especiallyforteenagers”isonlyageneralizationwithoutanyexampleorsupportingdetailstoproveit.
Onthewhole,theorganizationisclearandthelanguag