16年改革后英语专四考试新题型材料作文模拟练习及范文分析报告Word文件下载.docx

16年改革后英语专四考试新题型材料作文模拟练习及范文分析报告Word文件下载.docx

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考生可以采取“简短概述材料—评论—总结”的写作模式。

值得注意的是，在写作过程中，概述材料和进行评论缺一不可，否则将可能被扣分。

例题1

PARTVIWRITING

ReadcarefullythefollowingexcerptandthenwriteyourresponseinNOLESSTHAN200WORDS,inwhichyoushould:

1）Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerpt,andthen

2）Commentonwhetherstudentslearnmorefromclassesthanfromotherresources

Youcansupportyourselfwithinformationfromtheexcerpt.

Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,contentsufficiency,organizationandlanguagequality.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.

Dostudentslearnmorefromclassesthanfromotherresources?

WiththeadventoftheInternetandothertelecommunicationstechnologies,thereisavastlygrowingwealthofresourcesavailablefromanimmenserangeofmediaoutlets.Studentshavetheabilitytoabsorbinformationinaquickerandmoreefficientwaywhenresearchingontheirownthroughreadingpublicationsorbrowsingwebpagesonline.Asaresult,somepeoplearguethatstudentsnowlearnmorefromotherresourcesthanfromclasses.

Conductingresearchwithonlinematerialsisanactiveprocess,whichallowsyoungsterstofocusingreaterdetailratherthanpassivelylisteningtoalectureinalargeclassroom.

TheInternetandTVarealsoeasilyaccessibleplatformsforstudentsintheremoteplaceswhereteachingresourcesarenotasabundantasthoseinmoredevelopedregions.

However,teachershavethecapabilityofexplainingtheknowledgeinadeeperwayandnotonlyprovidetheoreticalexplanationbutalsopracticalexperienceaboutlife.Theyhaveaccumulatedalargebodyofintelligencethatisprofoundlymoreprecisethanothersources.Teachersnotonlyfunctionasinitiatorswhoimpartknowledgebutalsoserveassupervisorsorguardians.Theconventionalroleofinstructors,inthisdayandage,hasevolvedtobecomeevaluatorsandfacilitators,guidingstudentsintheiracademicandpersonalefforts.

范文1

Intheinformationage,thetraditionalstudent-teacherrelationshiphasbeenaffecteddeeplyandpeoplebegintodoubtwhetherstudentscanlearnmorefromclassesthanfromotherresources.（介绍背景）Accordingtotheconventionalview,teachersarestilltheprimarysourcefromwhichstudentsobtainprofessionalknowledge,timelyclassinteraction,andeffectivesupervisionfromteachers.（总结第一种观点）Onthecontrary,nowadays,manypeoplebelievethatstudentscanlearnmorefromotherresourcessuchasInternetandTVsincetheyaremoreaccessibleandengagestudentsmoreactivelyinresearch.（总结第二种观点）

Forme,Iaminfavorofthefirstview.（表明立场）Teachersplayanirreplaceableroleineducation,whetherit’sinthepastoratpresent,sincetheynotonlyimpartknowledge,butalsoeducatepeople.（总论据）Foronething,whatstudentslearnfromtheirclassesismoreprecisethanfromotherresourceswhichprovideanenormousamountofdataneededtobesiftedthroughtodeterminewhichinformationisaccurate.（理由一）Foranother,teachersinschoolputtheshapingofpersonalityinaplaceasimportantastheteachingofknowledge,whichishardforstudentstoobtainfromotherresource.（理由二）

Inconclusion,thedevelopmentofcutting-edgetechnologyexertsabigimpactonmoderneducation.However,itcannevereliminatetheneedforhigh-qualityprofessionalsinclassroom.（重申论点）（213words）

例题2

1）Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerpt,andthen

2）Commentonwhetherpeopleshouldchoosetobecomeindoorsy

Shouldpeoplechoosetobecomeindoorsyinmodernworld?

InmoderntimeswhenwecanbuyeverythingweneedontheInternet,andcommunicateandevenworkthroughtheInternet,becomingindoorsymenorwomenissimplyachoiceofdifferentlifestyle.Inthepast,ifyouwanttobuysomething,youneedtogooutofyourhouse,gotothestore,andspendanhourortwochoosingtheproductyouwanttobuy.Butnowyoucanjustsitinfrontofacomputerandclickyourmouse,andtheproductcanbedeliveredtoyou.Beingindoorsycansavepeoplealotoftime.

Beingindoorsycanallowpeopletothinkandworkinapeacefulenvironment.Forexample,writerscanbequitecreativewhentheyarealoneathomewithoutbeinginterrupted.

Somesociologistswarnthattheindoorsylifestylewillmakepeoplebecomeself-centeredandnaive.Ifpeoplestayathomeforalongtime,theywillhavelittleinterpersonalcontactwithothers.Theydonotknowhowtohaveface-to-facecommunicationwithothers,andtheymaybecomeshy,uncomfortable,orself-centeredwhentheyareinvolvedinreal-lifecommunication.Thisindoorsylifestylewillhaveabadeffectontheirnormalinterpersonalrelationshipandtheirnormalwork.

Indoorsymenorwomenspendmostoftheirtimesittinginfrontofacomputer,andtheyseldomattendoutdooractivities.Watchingthecomputerscreenforalongtimewilldogreatharmtotheireyes.Also,manyindoorsypeopledonotliketoattendsportsactivities,andinthelongrun,theirhealthwillgetworse.

范文2

审题思路

本题讨论“宅”生活是否可取。

在具体行文方面，考生应首先简要概述正方观点：

“宅”是现代的一种新型生活方式。

然后概述反方观点：

“宅”有种种弊端。

接下来给出自己的观点：

现代科技是把双刃剑，我们要把握好，适当利用可以使我们的生活更便利，但过度依赖则会对身体有害。

最后总结全文，重申观点。

ShouldWeEmbraceIndoorsyLifestyle?

Withtheglobalizationofmoderntechnology,especiallytheworld-wideaccesstoInternetservice,people’slifestylehasbeengreatlyinfluenced.（介绍背景）Someenjoyindoorsylifestyle.Theyholdthatindoorsylifestyleistime-savingandpeaceful.Incontrast,thoseagainsttheideaclaimthatkeepanindoorsylifestylewilldoharmtopeoplebothpsychologicallyandphysically.（总结材料）

AsfarasIamconcerned,moderntechnologyisadouble-edgedsword.（点明观点）Ifweconsideritasausefultooltoimproveourlife,itwillcertainlybringunprecedentedconveniencetous.WiththeassistanceoftheInternet,onecansavehistimethroughworking,shopping,orcommunicatingwithothersathome.（正方理由一）Also,solitudeisn’talwaysequaltoloneliness.Freefromoutsideinterruption,onecanbecreativeandkeephismindsharp.（正方理由二）Ontheotherhand,toomuchrelianceonorindulgenceintheInternetwillcertainlyhaveanimpactonournormallifeandwork.Forinstance,indulginginsocialnetworkonlinemaycorrodepeoples’socialskills.Tobespecific,theymayfeellostwhentalkingwithpeopleface-to-face,whichmayaffecttheirnormalrelationshipwithfamilymembersandfriends.（反方理由一）What’sworse,sittinginfrontofacomputeralldaylongmeanslittleoutdooractivities,whichmaydamageone’shealth.（反方理由二）

Inconclusion,whileenjoyingallthebenefitsthevirtualworldhasbroughttous,indoorsypeopleshouldalsostepoutoftheirhomeandengagethemselvesintherealworld.（总结上一段）（234words）