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1）考试题型、考试要求、评卷实例

2）口头作文、书信总论

3）书信详解

4）论说文、翻译

5、学习方法：

实力（高分策略）＋技巧（万能框架）

二、考试要求

《大学英语考试大纲》中明确规定：

四级大学英语写作考试时间为30分钟。

要求应试者写出一篇不少于120个词的短文；

写作命题源于日常生活和有关科技、社会文化等方面的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。

其命题方式有：

给出题目、或规定情景、或给出段首句续写、或给出关键词写短文、或看图作文。

要求内容切题，文理通顺，表达正确，语义连贯，无重大语言错误。

6、时间要求：

30分钟

1）审题（3分钟）：

2）写作（25分钟）：

3）检查（2分钟）：

语法（时态、冠词、主谓一致）、拼写、标点

【2005.06】Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay[INhonourofteachersontheoccasionofTeacher'

sDay].Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.向老师表达节日祝贺2.从一件小事来回忆老师的教诲和无私的奉献3.我如何回报老师的关爱

7、字数要求：

120－150词

8、写作主题：

大学校园生活（学习、生活、工作）

9、命题方式：

段首句、提纲、命题、关键词、情景、图表作文

10、具体要求：

1）语言第一位：

表达通顺、无重大语言错误

（1）基础一般：

简单原则、安全第一

（2）基础较好：

句子结构词多变

2）结构第二位：

（1）逻辑性：

A.并列：

and/or/but

B.因果：

because/inthat,since/as,for

C.转折：

but/however

（2）关联词：

3）内容第三位：

Lastnight,Iwaskickedbymygirlfriend.Sheranawaywithasmallwhiteface.Sheismygreenplumandbamboohorse.NowIknowthatloveisblind.Beautyisbutskin-deep.Moneyistherootofevil.However,IonlyregretthatIhavebutonelifetoloseformycountry.Couldyoupleasetellmywhytheinjuredisalwaysme.Itishightimethatyouteachersdevotedyourlovetome.Ifyoudonotgivemefullmark,Iwillcommitsuicideimmediately.

三、评卷实例

11、教材第5页第1篇：

中英思维差异

1）中式思维：

情感分段、读者领会、迂回模式、归纳式思维

2）英式思维：

逻辑分段、作者交代、直线模式、演绎式思维

Mostpeoplethoughtthatreadbooksshouldhavebeenselectived.Butothersbelivedreadingextentivelywascorrection.

Selectivebooksorreadingextensively?

Sure,youcanchoiceonefrompreviousideas,

ononehand,Therearetoobooktoreadforus.Weshouldchoosethosewhichweintrested,anditwouldbehelpfulforus.

onanotherhand.Someone'

sintrestingwaswide.Eachbookcouldbringyouspecificcontainwecouldn'

treadingatonlyonelevel.

Iconfirmedalloftheseideasweregoodbutweren'

twise.

Asareader,themaintaskistodiscovermoreandmorebooksthesecondtaskistoheldsomewhichwonderfulandhelpfulforus.Don'

ttreatthesebookswithracklessabandon.

Thebesttechnologyofreadingisconnect.

12、教材第4页第2篇：

Ithinkreadingnotonlyselectivelybutalsoextensively.Becausethetwosidesarenotcontradict.Ourtimeislimited.Sowecannotreadeverybookintheworld.However,wewillnotbeinterestedineverybook.Weshouldreadthosebooksmaybeusefultoours,readthosebookswhichwelike.Butthosebookswhichwechoosemustbeextensivelysoitcangiveoursallkindsofknowledge,newsandsoon,italsomakeoursbecomeawiseman.Ontheonehandreadingselectivelyletoursnotwasteourtimewhichitislimitted.Moreoveritcanemphasisamongallbooksthatwecanread.Ontheotherhandreadingextensivelycandealwithallkindsofneedinourlife.Theyareallusefultoours.

13、教材第5页第3篇：

Somepeoplethinkreadingshallbechoosed.Becausesomebooksaregoodtohummenbeingsandsomebooksareharmfultopeople.

Somepeoplethinkthatmenshoudreadbookswidely.Becausewidereadingcanhelpmangetmuchknowledge.Andmancanuseittochangetheworld.

Itismypointthatreadingmustbeselectively.Becausereadingisimportanttoman.Somebookscanhelpmanbutsomebookscanleadsomepeopletocrime.ItcanbeseeninthenewspapersandwatchedonTV.Wecanmakefulluseofsomegoodbooksandgainmoreusefulknowledge.Itcanmakeourlifemorebeautiful.wemustgiveupthoseunhelpfulbooks.Theyarenotgoodtous.Readingthemiswastingtimeandmoney.Soreadingselectivelyisanimportantpartinreading.

14、教材第5页第2篇：

Howshouldweread?

Shouldwereadselectivelyorextensively?

Everyonehashisownview.

Somepeoplethinkweshouldreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.What'

smore,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn'

treadthem.Sincewecan'

treadallthebooksandweshouldn'

treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.

Butothersmaynotagree.Theyemphasizethattoday'

ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledgehe'

llhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,wemustreadextensively.

Who'

sright?

Ithinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.

15、教材第4页第1篇：

Whenitcomestoreading,somepeoplethinkthatreadingselectivelyisagoodway,butsomeotherpeopledonotagreewiththem,theythinkthatreadingextensivelyisbetter.

Thosepeople,whothinkthatreadingselectivelyisbetter,believethatgoodbooksareasmanyasbadbooks.Thosegoodbookscangiveuspleasureandknowledge,whilethosebadbookscanonlyleadustothewrongway.So,theysuggestthatweshouldonlychoosethegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadbooks.

But,theotherpeople,whoholdthatreadingextensivelyisbetter,thinkthatonekindofbookscanonlygiveusoneaspectofknowledge.Eventhebestbookonlycontainsonefieldofinformation.So,theycaneasilycometotheconclusionthat"

toknowmore,toreadmore"

.Sotheybelievethatreadingextensivelyisbetter.

Tomypoint,weshouldchoosegoodbookstoreadandreadgoodbooksasmanyaspossible.Bythisway,wecanincreasethequalityandquantityofreading.

题目：

BicyclesAnImportantMeansofTransportinChina.

提纲：

（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及

（2）和汽车的比较

（3）自行车在中国的前途

Score:

14

BicyclesareverypopularinChina.Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwoorthreebicycles.Duringtherushhour,youcanseethatthousandsofpeople-manandwoman,oldandyoung-ridetheirbicyclestoworkandstudy.ThatiswhyChinaiscalled"

thekingdomofbicycles."

Comparedwithcars,bicyclesaresuperiorinmanyways.First,theyarecheap,convenientandeasytoride.Second,ridingbicycleisgoodforhealth.Third,theybringnonoisenorairpollution.Thoughcarsarefasterandmorecomfortable,theyaretooexpensive.Theyconsumeplentyofoilandtheypollutetheair.Sometimes,itisdifficultforadrivertoparkhiscar.Moreovertheyoftencausetrafficjamsandaccidents.

Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.SinceChinaisadevelopingcountryandhasalargepopulation,Ithink,ridingbicycleisappropriatetoChinesepresentconditions.Itwillbeanimportantmeansoftransportationforquitealongtime.

11

Theremillionsofbicyclesintoday'

sChina.Bicyclesareveryimportantmeansoftransportinpeople'

sdailylives.Becausetorideabicycleisverysimple,tobuyabicyclewillnotcostsomuchmoney,toparkabicycleneedsjustasmallroomandtorideabicycledoesnotneedoilbuttherider'

sstrength,biyclesarepopularallovertheworld,especiallyinChina.

Comparedwithacar,abicycleismuchcheaper.ItismoresuitableforChinaasadevelopingcountry.Andabicyclehasalmostcausednopollutionbutacarhas.Onthecountary,abicycleistooslow,itcostsmoretimesthanacar.

IthinkthepopulationofChina'

sbicyclewillbekeptforthelongrun.Becuseitwillbereplacedbyacar,abusandsooninsomedevelopedareasinChina,anditwillbemadeawideuseinthedevelopingareasinChina,thenumberofbicyclesinChinawillbethesameastodaybutIbelievethatit'

squalitywillbeimproved.

8

BicycleisanimportantmeansoftransportinChina.TheimportantreasonofitistheeconomyofChinese.TheuseofbicycleinChinaiswidelybecausepeopleinChinahavenothighwage.Theycanonlyaffordabicycle,andtheyhavenomoneytobuyacarwhichistooexpensive.SoChineseusuallybuyabicycle,anduseittogotowork,orgototravelandsoon.TheotherreasonisthelargepopulationofChina.Allthesemadethebicyclebecometheimportantmeansoftransport.

Thebicycle,comparedtothecar,isnottooexpensiveanditiseasytolearnandtouseanditcansavethesurfaceofputtingit.Itdoesn'

tasktobuildthegaragelikecar.ThispointisveryimportanttoChina,becauseofthelackofland.Itisn'

ttooexpensive,soChinesecanaffordit.Itdoesn'

tneedanyoil,anditcan'

tcausethepolusion.Allofthesearethegoodneedscomparedtothecar.

Inthefuture,bicyclewillbewidelyused.Anditwillbeingooddemand.Peoplewillproducemuchmoremodernbicycles.

5

PerhapstheamountofbicycleinChinaisthelargestintheworld.WhywasitsowidelyusedinChina?

Ithoughttheanswerwas:

thepopulationinChinaistoolargeandthepriceofbicycleismuchcheaper.Thethirdansweristhatthebicycleiseasierinusingthanothertransportations.

Comparingwiththecar,thebicycleischeaperanditiseasierinusingthanthecar,butitsspeedislowerthanthatofthecar.

ThebicyclewillberemainedforalongtimeinChinabutintheenditwillbedisappearedwiththeimprovalofpeople'

slivinglevel.

2

Aseverybodyknow,Chinaabigdevelopingcountry.So,thelivingstandardofpeoplenotveryhighatpresentpeople'

sincomeisnotenoughfortheytobuycarsmotorcycles.Andbikeiseasytoride.Bicycleischeaperbemade.AndIthinkbicycletheusefultooloftransportinChinanow.So,itisquiteporpularandwildlyusedinChina'

scitiesandcountrysidesthanthepersonaltransportation—tool.

Bikeisakindofcleantoolsoftransport.Itnotusegasandotherenergers.Forthisreasonisnotcreatpolution.Butinfactina