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在比较高级别的会议、期刊等,评审系统中包括给编辑的和给作者的评审意见。
本文就这两部分评审以及进行汇总
第一部分:
给作者的审稿意见
1、目标和结果不清晰。
ItisnotedthatyourmanuscriptneedscarefuleditingbysomeonewithexpertiseintechnicalEnglisheditingpayingparticularattentiontoEnglishgrammar,spelling,andsentencestructuresothatthegoalsandresultsofthestudyarecleartothereader.
2、未解释研究方法或解释不充分。
◆Ingeneral,thereisalackofexplanationofreplicatesandstatisticalme
thodsusedinthestudy.
◆Furthermore,anexplanationofwhytheauthorsdidthesevariousexperiments
shouldbeprovided.
3、对于研究设计的rationale:
Also,therearefewexplanationsoftherationaleforthestudydesign.
4、夸张地陈述结论/夸大成果/不严谨:
Theconclusionsareoverstated. Forexample,thestudydidnotshow
ifthesideeffectsfrominitialcopperburstcanbeavoidwiththepolymerformulation.
5、对hypothesis的清晰界定:
Ahypothesisneedstobepresented。
6、对某个概念或工具使用的rationale/定义概念:
Whatwastherationaleforthefilm/SBFvolumeratio?
7、对研究问题的定义:
Trytosettheproblemdiscussedinthispaperinmoreclear,writeonesectiontodefinetheproblem
8、如何凸现原创性以及如何充分地写literaturereview:
Thetopicisnovelbuttheapplicationproposedisnotsonovel.
9、对claim,如A>B的证明,verification:
Thereisnoexperimentalcomparisonofthealgorithmwithpreviouslyknownwork,soitisimpossibletojudgewhetherthealgorithmisanimprovementonpreviouswork.
10、严谨度问题:
MNQiseasierthantheprimitivePNQS,howtoprovethat.
11、格式(重视程度):
◆Inaddition,thelistofreferencesisnotinourstyle.Itisclosebutnotcompletelycorrect.Ihaveattachedapdffilewith"InstructionsforAuthors"whichshowsexamples.
◆Beforesubmittingarevisionbesurethatyourmaterialisproperlypreparedandformatted.Ifyouareunsure,pleaseconsulttheformattingnstructionstoauthorsthataregivenunderthe"InstructionsandForms"
buttoninheupperright-handcornerofthescreen.
12、语言问题(出现最多的问题):
有关语言的审稿人意见:
◆Itisnotedthatyourmanuscriptneedscarefuleditingbysomeone
withexpertiseintechnicalEnglisheditingpayingparticularattentiontoEnglishgrammar,spelling,andsentencestructuresothatthegoalsandresultsofthestudyarecleartothereader.
◆The authors must have their work reviewed by a proper
translation/reviewingservicebeforesubmission;onlythencanaproperreviewbeperformed.Mostsentencescontaingrammaticaland/orspelling
mistakesorarenotcompletesentences.
◆Aspresented,thewritingisnotacceptableforthejournal. Therearepro
blemswithsentencestructure,verbtense,andclauseconstruction.
◆The English of your manuscript must be improved beforeresubmission.Westr
onglysuggestthatyouobtainassistancefromacolleaguewhoiswell-versedi
nEnglishorwhosenativelanguageisEnglish.
◆PleasehavesomeonecompetentintheEnglishlanguageandthesubjectmatte
rofyourpapergooverthepaperandcorrectit.?
◆thequalityofEnglishneedsimproving.
来自编辑的鼓励:
Encouragementfromreviewers:
◆Iwouldbeverygladtore-reviewthepaperingreaterdepthonceithasbe
eneditedbecausethesubjectisinteresting.
◆Thereiscontinuedinterestinyourmanuscripttitled"……"whichyousubm
ittedtotheJournalofBiomedical MaterialsResearch:
PartB -AppliedBiomat
erials.
◆TheSubmissionhasbeengreatlyimprovedandisworthyofpublication.
Thepaper is veryannoyingto readas it isriddled withgrammaticalerrorsandpoorlyconstructedsentences.Furthermore,thenoveltyandmotivationoftheworkisnotwelljustified.Also,theexperimentalstudyisshallow.Infact,Icantfigureoutthelegendsasitistoosmall!
Howdoesyoureffortcompareswithstate-of-the-art?
Theexperimentisthemajorprobleminthepaper.Notonlythedatasetisnotpublished,butalsothedescriptionisveryrough.Itisimpossibletoreplicatetheexperimentandverifytheclaimoftheauthor.Furthermore,almostnodiscussionfortheexperimentalresultisgiven.E.g.whytheauthorwouldobtainthisresult?
Whichcomponentisthemostimportant?
Anyfurtherimprovement?
theauthorshouldconcentratedonthenewalgorithmwithyourideaandexplaineditsadvantagesclearlywithamostsimplewords.
itisgoodconcept,butneedtopolishlayout,language.
Theauthorsdidagoodjobinmotivatingtheproblemstudiedintheintroduction.Themathematicexplanationoftheproposedsolutionsisalsonice.Furthermore,thepaperisaccompaniedbyanadequatesetofexperimentsforevaluatingtheeffectivenessofthesolutionstheauthorspropose.
Apparently,Obviously,Innovation,refine,Inmyhumbleopinion
如果仍然有需要修改的小毛病,一般你可以用
youpaperhasbeenconditionallyaccepted.Pleasereviseaccordingto
reviewcomments.
如果是接受,你可以用
Weareverypleasedtoinformyouthatyourpa