级高三英语考点13书面表达概要写作解析版Word下载.docx

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thecountrysideisruinedbyroadnetworks;

andthemassannualdeathsbecomesnothingbutanumber,tobeconvenientlyforgotten.

Itishightimeruleswerecreatedtoreducethissenselesswasteofhumanlife.Hereareafewexamplesofsomeofthethingsthatmightbedone.Thedrivingtestshouldbestandardizedandmadefarmoredifficultthanitis;

allvehiclesshouldbeputthroughstricttestsforsafety;

presentdrinkinganddrivinglawsshouldbemademuchstricter;

maximumandminimumspeedlimitsshouldberequiredonallroads.Thesemeasuresmaysoundstrict.Butsurelynothingshouldbeconsideredastoosevereifitresultsinreducingtheannuallossofhumanlife.Afterall,theworldisforhumanbeings,notcars.

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【答案】Onepossibleversion:

Despitethefactthatwearenowlivingahealthylife,weshouldinnocaseignorecaraccidentswhichkillashockinglylargenumberofpeopleannually.Thereasonsforthetragediesaredrivers'

disrespectforhumanlifeandsociety’stolerancefortheirselfishbehavior.Totrytoavoidsuchameaninglesswasteofhumanlife,severemeasuresconcerningdrivers,vehiclesandtrafficlawsandrulesshouldbetakenimmediately.

【分析】

本文是一篇议论文。

由机动车带来的事故给社会带来了巨大的伤亡和伤害，文章认为导致这一悲剧的原因是车辆驾驶员对生命的不尊重以及社会对司机的容忍。

最后给出了一系列严格的建议措施。

【详解】

1.要点摘录

①.Fromthehealthpointofview,wearelivinginawonderfulage。

②.Thousandsofpeopletheworldoverarekilledeachyearandwearequietlysittingbackandlettingithappen.

③.Ithasbeenrightlysaidthatwhenamanissittingbehindasteeringwheel,hiscarbecomestheextensionofhispersonality.

④.Thesurprisingthingisthatsocietysmilesgentlyonthedriverandseemstoforgivehisbehavior.

⑤.Itishightimeruleswerecreatedtoreducethissenselesswasteofhumanlife.

⑥.Thedrivingtestshouldbestandardizedandmadefarmoredifficultthanitis;

⑦.Allvehiclesshouldbeputthroughstricttestsforsafety;

⑧.Presentdrinkinganddrivinglawsshouldbemademuchstricter;

⑨.Maximumandminimumspeedlimitsshouldberequiredonallroads.

2.缜密构思将第1、2两个要点进行重组；

将第3、4两个要点进行整合重组；

将第5、6、7、8、9五个要点进行整合重组。

3.遣词造句

①Despitethefactthatwearenowlivingahealthylife,weshouldinnocaseignorecaraccidentswhichkillashockinglylargenumberofpeopleannually.

②Thereasonsforthetragediesaredrivers'

disrespectforhumanlifeandsociety’stolerancefortheirselfishbehavior.

③Totrytoavoidsuchameaninglesswasteofhumanlife,severemeasuresconcerningdrivers,vehiclesandtrafficlawsandrulesshouldbetakenimmediately.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]：

Despitethefactthatwearenowlivingahealthylife,weshouldinnocaseignorecaraccidentswhichkillashockinglylargenumberofpeopleannually.运用一个复杂的主从复合句对原文第一段进行了概括。

that引导的同位语从句概括了第一句的内容，which引导的定语从句概括了第二、三句的内容。

主句“weshouldinnocaseignorecaraccidents”则对最后一句的观点进行合理转化。

[高分句型2]：

Totrytoavoidsuchameaninglesswasteofhumanlife,severemeasuresconcerningdrivers,vehiclesandtrafficlawsandrulesshouldbetakenimmediately.一个复杂的简单句概括了原文最后一段的所有内容。

首先，用不定式作目的状语概括了第一句的内容；

其次，用现在分词结构“concerningdrivers,vehiclesandtrafficlawsandrules”作后置定语修饰“severemeasures”概括了本段剩余的全部内容。

Writing2（2020·

山东高三期中）

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Parentsusuallyteachtheirchildrenhowtocrossthestreetsafely—bylookingbothwaysforcars.Butdotheyalsoteachthemtoputawaytheircellphones?

Accordingtostatisticsfromyearsofstudies,theyalmostneversayso.Inviewofthis,thecityofHonolulu,Hawaiiwantseveryonetolearnthatlesson.

Textingwhilecrossingthestreetwillsoonbebannedinthecity.BeginningonOctober24，youcanbefinedfrom$15to$99ifyoustepintoaHonolulustreetwhilelookingatyourphone．HonoluluisthefirstmajorU.S.citytobanwhatiscalled“distractedwalking”.Itrecentlypassedalaw,whichsaysnopedestrianshallcrossastreetorhighwaywhileviewingamobileelectronicdevice.

Thelawincludesallelectronicdeviceswithscreens,fromcellphones,tablets,gamingdevices,digitalcamerastolaptopcomputers.However,thelawdoespermitanexception:

pedestriansmayusesuchdevicesinthestreettocallemergencyservicesandrescueworkers,suchasfirefightersandpoliceofficers.

Pedestriandeathshavebeenincreasingastheuseofcellphonesrisesinthepastfewyears.TheGovernorsHighwaySafetyAssociation,orGHSA,sayspedestriandeathsintheUnitedStatesincreased25percentbetween2010and2015.Thattrendcontinuedin2016withthenumberofpedestriandeathsrisingtoalmost6,000,11％higherthanin2015.

OtherU.S.citiesmayfollowHonolulu.ThestateofWashingtonwasthefirsttooutlawdistracteddrivingbackin2007.Now,46otherstatesaswellasWashingtonD．C．，PuertoRico,GuamandtheU.S.VirginIslands,havelawsagainsttextingwhiledriving.

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【答案】

Onepossibleversion:

Despitegeneralguidanceonroadsafety,seldomdoparentsasktheirchildrentosetasidetheirphoneswhentheyneedtocrossastreet.Honoluluhasissuedabanondistractedwalking.Whoeverviolatesitshallfacefinesof$15to$99.However,thelawdoesallowemergencycalls.Withcellphonescausingincreasingpedestriandeaths,moreUScitiesmayfollowsuittoimproveroadsafety.

这是一篇新闻报道。

文章讲述了，檀香山已经颁布了禁止分心行走的禁令，违反者将面临15至99美元的罚款；

但是，法律允许紧急呼叫。

随着手机导致越来越多的行人死亡，更多的美国城市可能会效仿，以改善道路安全。

1要点摘录

①Parentsusuallyteachtheirchildrenhowtocrossthestreetsafely—bylookingbothwaysforcars.Butdotheyalsoteachthemtoputawaytheircellphones?

②Textingwhilecrossingthestreetwillsoonbebannedinthecity.BeginningonOctober24,youcanbefinedfrom$15to$99ifyoustepintoaHonolulustreetwhilelookingatyourphone．

③However,thelawdoespermitanexception:

pedestriansmayusesuchdevicesinthestreettocallemergencyservicesandrescueworkers,suchasfirefightersandpoliceofficers．

④Pedestriandeathshavebeenincreasingastheuseofcellphonesrisesinthepastfewyears．

⑤OtherU.S.citiesmayfollowHonolulu.

2.缜密构思将5个要点进行重组整合。

①Despitegeneralguidanceonroadsafety,seldomdoparentsasktheirchildrentosetasidetheirphoneswhentheyneedtocrossastreet.

②Honoluluhasissuedabanondistractedwalking.

③Whoeverviolatesitshallfacefinesof$15to$99.

④However,thelawdoesallowemergencycalls.

⑤Withcellphonescausingincreasingpedestriandeaths,moreUScitiesmayfollowsuittoimproveroadsafety.

[高分句型1]Despitegeneralguidanceonroadsafety,seldomdoparentsasktheirchildrentosetasidetheirphoneswhentheyneedtocrossastreet.用了seldom放句首，主谓部分倒装结构，后面用了when引导的时间状语从句，对第一段前半部分你进行概括。

[高分句型2]Whoeverviolatesitshallfacefinesof$15to$99.用了Whoever引导的主语从句对第二段进行了概括，表达非常高级。

[高分句型3]Withcellphonescausingincreasingpedestriandeaths,moreUScitiesmayfollowsuittoimproveroadsafety.用了with复合结构概括了最后两段内容。

Writing3（2020·

上海浦东新·

高二期中）

Directions:

Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpointsofthepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

Inschoolsandathome,mostofushavebeenscoldedorevengotpunishedfordaydreaming.Themajorityofpeoplesaythatbydaydreamingwewasteourtimeandenergyonsomethingunproductive.Butmanymedicalstudieshaveshownsomethingdifferent.They’vestressedthefactthatdaydreamingworkswondersonourimagination,creativityandsituation-handlingtechniques.Infact,manyproblemscanbeeasilysolvedifwedaydream.

Thetopmostbenefitofdaydreamingisthatyourmoodgetstherightimprovement.Byseparatingyourselffromtheworldaroundyou,youtendtoenjoythelonelinessinyourmindandgetpeacefromdaydreamingasyouthinkaboutsomethingthatcalmsyou