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Problem&
SolutionEssay:
Itistruethatchildren'
sbehaviourseemstobegettingworse.Therearevariousreasonsforthis,andbothschoolsandparentsneedtoworktogethertoimprovethesituation.
Discussion(&
Opinion)Essay:
Peoplehavedifferentviewsabouthowchildrenshouldbetaught.Whiletherearesomegoodargumentsinfavourofteachingchildrentobecompetitive,Ibelievethatitisbettertoencourageco-operation.
Opinion(Agree/Disagree)Essay:
Inrecentyearsithasbecomemorecommonforwomentoreturntoworkafterhavingachild.However,Idonotagreethatthishasbeenthecauseofproblemsforyoungpeople.
Myadvice:
Keepyourintroductionshort.Mainbodyparagraphsaremoreimportant.
Conclusion
SeveralpeoplehaveaskedmeaboutconclusionsforIELTSWritingTask2.Themainbodyparagraphsaremuchmoreimportant,sodon'
tworrytoomuchabouttheconclusion;
makeitshort,simpleandfast.
Herearesomeexampleconclusionphrasesfordifferenttypesofquestion:
1.Opinion
Forthereasonsmentionedabove,Ibelievethat...(+repeatyouropinion).
2.Discussion(+Opinion)
Inconclusion,thereareconvincingargumentsbothforandagainst...(topic),butIbelievethat...(ifthequestionasksforyouropinion).
3.AdvantagesandDisadvantages
Inconclusion,Iwouldarguethatthebenefitsof...(topic)outweighthedrawbacks.
4.ProblemandSolution
Inconclusion,itisclearthattherearevariousreasonsfor...(topic),andstepsneedtobetakentotacklethisproblem.
Somepeoplethinkthatmuseumsshouldbeenjoyableplacestoentertainpeople,whileothersbelievethatthepurposeofmuseumsistoeducate.
Discussbothviewsandgiveyouownopinion.
Peoplehavedifferentviewsabouttheroleandfunctionofmuseums.Inmyopinion,museumscanandshouldbebothentertainingandeducational.
Ontheonehand,itcanbearguedthatthemainroleofamuseumistoentertain.Museumsaretouristattractions,andtheiraimistoexhibitacollectionofinterestingobjectsthatmanypeoplewillwanttosee.Theaveragevisitormaybecomeboredifheorshehastoreadorlistentotoomucheducationalcontent,somuseumsoftenputmoreofanemphasisonenjoymentratherthanlearning.Thistypeofmuseumisdesignedtobevisuallyspectacular,andmayhaveinteractiveactivitiesorevengamesaspartofitsexhibitions.
Ontheotherhand,somepeoplearguethatmuseumsshouldfocusoneducation.Theaimofanyexhibitionshouldbetoteachvisitorssomethingthattheydidnotpreviouslyknow.Usuallythismeansthatthehistorybehindthemuseum’sexhibitsneedstobeexplained,andthiscanbedoneinvariousways.Somemuseumsemployprofessionalguidestotalktotheirvisitors,whileothermuseumsofferheadsetssothatvisitorscanlistentodetailedcommentaryabouttheexhibition.Inthisway,museumscanplayanimportantroleinteachingpeopleabouthistory,culture,scienceandmanyotheraspectsoflife.
Inconclusion,itseemstomethatagoodmuseumshouldbeabletoofferaninteresting,enjoyableandeducationalexperiencesothatpeoplecanhavefunandlearnsomethingatthesametime.
Somepeoplebelievethatstudyingatuniversityorcollegeisthebestroutetoasuccessfulcareer,whileothersbelievethatitisbettertogetajobstraightafterschool.
Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.
Here'
smyfullintroductionandconclusion,aswellassomeideasforthemainbodyparagraphs:
Introduction
Whentheyfinishschool,teenagersfacethedilemmaofwhethertogetajoborcontinuetheireducation.Whiletherearesomebenefitstogettingajobstraightafterschool,Iwouldarguethatitisbettertogotocollegeoruniversity.
Paragraph1:
benefitsofgettingajob
Theoptiontostartworkstraightafterschoolisattractiveforseveralreasons.
(IDEAS:
startearningmoney,becomeindependent,gainexperience,learnskills,getpromotions,settledownearlier,affordahouse,haveafamily)
Paragraph2:
benefitsofhighereducation(myopinion)
Ontheotherhand,Ibelievethatitismorebeneficialforstudentstocontinuetheirstudies.
somejobsrequireacademicqualifications,betterjobopportunities,highersalaries,thejobmarketisverycompetitive,gainknowledge,becomeausefulmemberofsociety)
Forthereasonsmentionedabove,itseemstomethatstudentsaremorelikelytobesuccessfulintheirlivesiftheycontinuetheirstudiesbeyondschoollevel.
Severallanguagesareindangerofextinctionbecausetheyarespokenbyverysmallnumbersofpeople.Somepeoplesaythatgovernmentsshouldspendpublicm