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generous（慷慨的；
大方的）；
easy going（随和的）等。
再如：
Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedagoodatmosphere.
→Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedaharmoniousatmosphere.
2．新颖性原则
写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的词汇，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。
Inthecomingthreeyears，ourschoollifewillbedifficult.
→Inthecomingthreeyears，ourschoollifewillbechallenging.
3．短语优先原则
多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。
IwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthesummervacationandI'
dlikeyoutohelpme.
→IwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthesummervacationandI'
dlikeyoutodomeafavor.（全国卷Ⅰ·
书面表达）
4．避免重复原则
尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。
Anystudentwhoisinterestediswelcometoparticipate...Ifyouwanttoparticipate，youcansendyourphotostointlphotoshow@.
→Anystudentwhoisinterestediswelcometoparticipate...Ifyouwanttojoin，youcansendyourphotostointlphotoshow@.
（全国卷Ⅱ·
二、高级词汇积累45例
1．另外besides→inaddition/what'
smore
2．总之inaword→tosumup/inconclusion/insummary
3．但是but→however
4．机会chance→opportunity
5．选择choice→alternative
6．考虑consider→takeintoaccount/consideration
7．最终finally→eventually
8．勤奋的hard working→diligent
9．分发handout→distribute
10．后果result→consequence
11．应该should→besupposedto
12．决定decide→makeupone'
smind
13．理解understand→makesenseof/figureout
14．可用的usable→available
15．使用use→employ/makeuseof
16．艰难的difficult→painstaking
17．改正，修改correct→polish
18．不同的different→various
19．想要want→intend
20．做，从事do→takeup
21．获得get→gain
22．记住remember→keepinmind
23．种类繁多allkindsof→awiderangeof
24．和and→aswellas
25．反对beagainst→objectto
26．厌烦beboredwith→befedupwith
27．忙于bebusyin/with→beoccupiedin/with
28．发生happen→occur/comeabout
29．提高improve→promote
30．重要的important→vital
31．立即immediately→inaflash
32．参加join→participate
33．巨大的large→enormous
34．有意义的meaningful→rewarding
35．许多many→alargequantityof
36．明显的obvious→apparent
37．合适的proper→appropriate
38．丰富的rich→abundant
39．与……不同bedifferentfrom→differ/varyfrom
40．渴望做……beeagertodo→bedyingtodo/longtodo
41．因为becauseof→onaccountof
42．闻名befamousfor→haveareputationfor
43．越来越多moreandmore→anincreasingnumberof
44．感到舒心feelcomfortable→feelatease
45．成功做某事succeedindoingsth.→makeit
[题组过关1]——升级文中加黑词汇
Deareditor，
Withthedevelopmentofeconomy，moreandmore（1.________）Chinesepeoplearemakingatripathomeandabroad，whichmakesusnotonlyenjoymorebeautifulscenerybutalsolearnmoreaboutthecultureandthecustomsoftheplaceswevisit.Unfortunately，someofusshoutloudly，litterorspitinpublic，whichhasharmed（2.________）thegoodreputationofusChinese.
Inmyopinion，whengoingontrips，weshouldbehaveourselvesandobeythecultureandcustomsthere.Besides（3.________），theenvironmentshould（4.________）beprotected.Inthisway，wewillwinrespectforourselvesand（5.________）ourcountry.Finally（6.________），weshouldalwaysremember（7.________）thatitiseveryone'
sresponsibilitytoupholdtheimageofourmotherland.
Yourssincerely，
LiHua
答案：
1.anincreasingnumberof 2.doneharmto 3.Inaddition 4.issupposedto 5.aswellas
6．Eventually 7.keepinmind
句式丰富，表述地道
写作文时应多运用一些高级句式和复合句，并注意句式的灵活多变，让文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，让作文跨上五档线！
一、利用复合句式，提升文章档次
复合句包括定语从句，状语从句和名词性从句（主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句）。
1．增加亮点的定语从句
定语从句的应用可以非常有效地提升表达档次，在写作中如果我们可以把两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句，或者把并列句改为含有定语从句的复合句，这些都能为文章增加亮点。
①IamLiHua，astudentfromChina.IamstudyinginLondonduringthesummerholiday.
→IamLiHua，astudentfromChina，whoisstudyinginLondonduringthesummerholiday.
（2019·
全国卷Ⅰ·
②Thefilmismainlyrelatedtothedevelopmentofourschool.Itwillgreatlyhelpusstudentsknowtheschool'
shistorybetterandappealtoustomakecontributionstoourschool'
sdevelopment.
→Thefilmismainlyrelatedtothedevelopmentofourschool，whichwillgreatlyhelpusstudentsknowtheschool'
sdevelopment.（2019·
全国卷Ⅱ·
③WewillgotoSpringMountainandtherewecanhaveachimb.
→WewillgotoSpringMountainwherewecanhaveaclimb.（2017·
浙江卷6月·
应用文写作）
2．吸引眼球的状语从句
在英语写作中，状语从句是经常用到的句型，它的灵活运用能使作文更具吸引力。
①Secondly，theinconvenienceisnotaproblemifourpurposeistoshareChineseculture.
江苏卷·
②Ifyouhaveanyopinionaboutthefilm，pleasesendemailstostudentunion@.
（2018·
③Wecansetoutearlysothatwewillhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.（2016·
全国卷Ⅲ·
④WhenitcomestotheseasonIlikebest，sp
升级会员 