英语写作对比的方法文档格式.docx

英语写作对比的方法文档格式.docx

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熟悉比较和对照写作方法的特点、模式及相关写作语块（词组、结构及句子）；

难点：

训练学生对作文主题的思维拓展以及相关语言表达的总结。

二．使用比较和对照写作方法的一般是说明文与论说文，常见的比较对照有两种方式:

1.块状比较方式（blockmethod），先A后B，即A1,A2,A3...；

B1，B2，B3...。

2.逐点比较方式（point-by-pointmethod），AB交错，即A1，B1；

A2，B2；

A3，B3...。

范文一：

CountryLifeandCityLife

Itisreallyhardtosaywhichisbetterthantheother,citylifeorrurallife.Bothhavetheirmeritsandshortcomings.

Livinginthecityhasagreatmanyadvantages.First,youcanenjoyvariouskindsoffoods,bothforeignanddomestic.Second,therearemoreculturalactivitiesinthecity–youcangototheconcert,thetheatre,themoviesorthediscoclubafteraday’shardwork.Butcitylifehasmanyproblems,too.Theovercrowdedpopulation,trafficjam,industrialpollution,andthelackofunderstandingbetweenpeoplemayresultindiseaseandunhappiness.Livinginthecountry,however,youcanwatchthemagnificentsunriseandsunsetandlistentothebirdsinginginthetree.Ifyouwant,youcancertainlyhaveahugegardenwhenasmallgreenspaceseemsaluxuryinthecity.Inthecountry,youdon’thavesomucnworries.Youcanenjoythepleasureofworkbyplantingseedsintheearthandwatchingthemgrowintoflowersandfinallyintofruitsorfood.Butrurallifemaynotbethatperfect.Thingsaregoingsoslowlythatsometimesyoumayfeelthatyouareabsoluteleftbehindinsomeremotecornersoftheworld.Youmayagainmisstheparties,friendsandmoviesinthecity.

Likeanythingelse,countrylifeandcitylifehavetheiradvantagesanddisadvantages.Thebestsolutionmaybethatyouenjoypleasuresofbothlivesandgetridoftheirinconveniences.

范文二：

MiddleSchoolLifeandCollegeLife

Therearemanydifferencesbetweenmiddleschoolandthecollege.First，inmiddleschool，wehavetolistentowhattheteachersaysinclass,tounderstandthecontentofthetext.Butincollege，wemuststudybyourselvesbeforeclass.Ifnot，wecouldn'

tfollowtheteacher.Second，therearelotsofrulesinmiddleschool.Forexample，weshouldweartheuniform，thegirlsmusthavetheirhaircutshort，andwearenotallowedtomakeboy- 

or 

girlfriends.However，incollege，wehavemorefreedom.Wecanweartheclotheswelike.Andthegirlscouldhavelongbeautifulhair.Wearealsofreetomakeboy 

girlfriends.Thethird，inthemiddleschool，wemuststudyfirst.Thatmeanswecoulddonothingbutstudy.Incontrast，wehavetodoeverythingbyourselvesincollege.Thatmeanswemustplanourtimecarefully.Therearealsootherdifferencesbetweenourschoollifeandourcollegelife.Wehavetolearntoadaptourselvestocollegelife.

三．写作步骤

1.写前阶段：

写作提纲

1）对两个对象或一个对象的两个方面进行比较与对照分析，找出相似点/不同之处。

如分析Onlineshopingorin-storeshopping（网络购物还是店内购

Advantages

Disadvantages

Onlineshopping

Convenient;

Cheap;

Alotofselections

Cheated;

Cannotseetheitemsinperson;

In-storeshopping

Personal,talk;

Knowthequality;

Goodforhealth

Expensive;

Time-consuming;

tiring

2.写作阶段：

利用相关资料，组织结构与内容

1）Usefulwordsandphrases:

比较：

like,similarly,likewise,inthesameway,inthesamemanner,equally.

对照：

bycontrast,onthecontrary,while,whereas,ontheotherhand,unlike,instead,but,conversely,differentfrom,however,nevertheless,otherwise,whereas,unlike,yet,incontrast.

2）Usefulexpressions

Ø

Justlikeacoinhastwosides,everytinghasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages,and…isnoexception.

Theadvantagefaroutweighthedisadvantages.

TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.

AmaybepreferabletoB,butAsuffersfromthedisadvantagesthat...

Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.

Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.

AandBhasseveralpointsincommon.

AbearssomeresemblancestoB.

However,thesameisnotapplicabletoB.

AandBdifferinseveralways.

Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.

ThesameistrueofB.

WonderingasAis,ithasitsdrawbacks.

ItistruethatA...,butthechieffaults（obviousdefects）are...

3）UsefulWritingPatterns

（1）块状比较模板：

模板一

Itisreallyhardtosaywhichisbetterthantheother,AorB.Bothhavetheirmeritsandshortcomings.

Ahasagreatmanyadvantages.First,….Second,….Third,….WonderingasAis,ithasitsdrawbacks.Firstofall,….Besides,….

BisquitedifferentfromBinmanyways.Itspositivesidesareasfollows.Firstly,….Sencondly,….Likeanytingelse,Bhasitsfaults,such

as….

Evidently,bothAandBhavetheirpositiveandnegativeaspects.Thebestsolutionmaybethatyouenjoypleasuresofthebothandget

ridoftheirinconveniences.

模板二

Thetopicof____（主题）isbecomingmoreandmore