优质英语作文的批改范文与评语word范文 15页Word格式.docx

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英语作文的批改范文与评语

　　篇一：

英语批改网作文

　　ThepersonIlove/admiremost

　　要求

　　1.Nolessthan90pointsbyPigai.

　　2.Nolessthan26owords.

　　3.DeadlineNov.3.

　　作文号:

357928教师:

邵春字数:

260~500满分:

100

　　Attitude

　　Forthispart，youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledAttitudebycommentingonthefamoussaying,“Amancansucceedatalmostanythingforwhichhehasunlimitedenthusiasm.”Youshouldwriteatleast260wordsbutnomorethan500words.

357929教师:

100~500满分:

　　第一篇

　　Everyonehassomeoneinhisheartthatheadmiresmost,whomaybeascientist,awriter,amusicianoramoviesuperstar.But,asforme,themostadmirablepersonofmineisChristianRonaldo,whoisoneofthegreatestfootballplayerintoday'

sworld.Ronaldowasbornin1985,HewasplayedfortheManchesterunitedandnowplaysforrealMadrid,whenhewas18yearsoldhebecameamainforceofPortugalnationalteam.Asfortheworld’smostbrilliantsuperfootballstars,henotonlyhasahandsomeappearance,alsohasaspecialskillandefficientscoringability.However,thisisnotreasonwhyIadmirehim,thereallypointletmebehisfansishisgratitudefeelingsandpersistenceofperseverance.

　　Ronaldoisatenderfeelingsmanunderhistoughappearance,themostimportantthingsheteachmeisthatweshouldgratitudeeveryonewhoeverhelpedus,Whenhewas18,ofwhichplayingforManchesterunited，eventhoughhehasunparalleledfootballtalent，hewasalwaysneitherwellwithteamcooperation,norhandleforhisapplauseandcriticism.Atthistime,theManchesterunitedcoachSirAlexfergusongivemostpatientguidancetohim.Latter,WhenRonaldoeverytimehonored,healwaysexpresseshisgratitudetoAlexferguson.“Heisjustlikemyfatherandfriend!

”

　　Moreover,anotherpointheinspiredmeishispersistenceforhispersuit.Fromayouthtotheleaderofthenationalfootballteam,Ronaldoisalwaystosparenoefforttodevotehistimeandenergy,andasforthelifeoffootball.Heisalwaysthefirstcametothetrainingground,thelasttoleave.Now,heisnearlythirtyyearsold,buthestillkeepthehighestlevelonthefield.

　　Insum,itismygeneraldescriptionaboutChristianRonaldoabove,Ilearntobeangratitudepersonwithstrongmindfromhe.nopains,nogains.Onlywhenyouworkhard,youcancometrueyourdream.Theselessonsexerciseagreatinfluenceonmylife.Ronaldo,thankyousomuchfornotonlygivinginterestoffootballtomebutalsoteachingmehowtobeagoodperson.Recently,theNewYear'

sgoldenballplayerswillreveal,Ronaldoremainsatthetop,allisowntohisgratitudementalityanduemittingpersistence,andIwillcontinuetogivemygreatestrespect,HalaMadrid!

　　ThepersonIadmiremost

　　Everyonehassomeoneinhisheartthatheadmiresmost,whomaybeascientist,awriter,amusicianoramoviesuperstar.But,asforme,themostadmirablepersonofmineismydearestmother.Mymotherisanordinarywoman.Sheisnotverybeautifulandalittleheavyaswellasme.Butsometimes,youwillthinksheisverykindandenthusiastic.Althoughshedoesn’thavehigheducation,sheisverycapable.Sheisexcellentinsocialcontactandbargaining.Shelovesmeandmybrother,triestogiveusthecomfortablesurroundingstostudyandlivein.Sheisasensibleperson,butshecan’tstandsomeonescrewingthenumberofmyfamilyover.Nooneintheworldlovesyoumorethanyourmother.Whileshegavemelife,shetakesmeasherconcern.Shedevotesherwholelifetothefamily.Ilearntobeanoptimisticpersonwithstrongmindfrommymother.Shealsoteachesmethatnopains,nogains.Onlywhenyouworkhard,youcancometrueyourdream.Theselessonsexerciseagreatinfluenceonmylife.Althoughmymotherisanordinaryperson,sheisstillthepersonthatIadmiremost.Mom,thankyousomuchfornotonlygivingbirthtomebutalsoteachingmehowtobeagoodperson.Nomatterwhatwillbeinthefuture,Iwillalwaysloveyou.

　　第二篇

　　Altitude

　　Itissaid“Amancansucceedatalmostanythingforwhichhehasunlimitedenthusiasm!

”,wecanknownhowaltitudeplayaimportantroletooursuccess.Apersonwhoeventhoughtakeaextraordinarytalent,hewillhardtogetoutstandingachievementwithoutagoodaltitudetohisworkorstudy.

　　Thesearetwocauseswhyapositivealtitudeissosignificanttoourcareer,ontheonehand,wecanbuildastrongconfidencefromagoodmentalstatefacingunpredictablechallenges,inturn,whichwillunleashyour

　　unlimitedenthusiasmtopushyoutodevotetimeandenergytoyourwork.Beethoven,whoisthegreatestcomposerandpianistinthehistoryofmusic,whoalsoisablindmanatthesametime