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托福作文中的良性建议模块模板
良性建议模块
1.类型特点
should话题(良性建议类)
题型特点:
若要得到美好结果/避免大的问题,就应当…
Tip1要解决的问题往往庞大复杂
Tip2解决方案通常片面甚至偏激(二合为一,复杂问题被简化)
Tip3解决方案可行性有时欠佳(质疑可行性)
Tip4建议或解决方案不设上限(如果过多会很严重)
Tip5解决方案通常无效(unwarrantedevendangerous)
思路
#先让步—--这样有一定道理(有保留,含蓄)
限制级合理性(HeadingorBody1)
--relatively
--somewhat
--tosomeextent
--insomecases,…
--oncertainoccasions,…
--undercertaincircumstances,
合理性源于目标的速求,解释目标
(从what—--待达成/解决的目标本身发掘理由)
--whatisculture
--whatisnationalgovernment
--whatisleader
--whatistradition
--whatiseducation
得出复杂
※因为…很复杂(大)--complicated
--tough
--sophisticated
因此有理
所以这样做有一定道理—strategy
--channel渠道
--solution
--awayout
*Modeforheading—Proposal
因为艰难所以有所需
!
asisknowtoall…
Inrecentyears,…istough/difficult/serioustoapointwherepeoplecannottackleitwithease,whichmakes…beproposedasasolution.
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Inweighingupboththeprospectivebenefitsandpotentialrisks,however,Ireckonthat题目中的解决方案,asmanyothersimplesolutionstosomemostcomplicatedproblems,wouldbeawkwardinservingasakey.
*Modesforbody
#再反对—质疑解决方案的可行性良性建议,首先可行性
--isthatfeasible?
※thefeasibilityof…isopentoquestion
※the…/inheritednatureofsuchasolution/proposal/suggestionposessomeproblemsthathinder…theblueprintof…frombeingconvertedintoreality
※the…/inheritednatureofsuchasolution/proposal/suggestionposessomeproblemsthatmakesuchaproposalrestontheblueprint
+可能出现的矛盾
!
理论对实践最常见的不可行原因
Theoreticallysoundedas…/itis,inpracticetheimpedimentsthatareexpectedtoencounter,suchasA,B,CandD(可能出现的阻碍),arefatalelementsthatmakethefeasibilityofthissuggestedsolutionvulnerabletoanypossiblechallengeorquestion.
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短期vs长远:
Atpresent/Inshortterm,…mightbeeffective,whileinthelongrun,itwouldturnouttobedisastrous.
单一vs多样:
1.Itwouldbeabigheadache/Itwouldbealmostamissionimpossiblefor....withdiversified....toachieve/sustain/followcertaincommon.../asingle...
2.Itwouldbeagreatmisleadingtotrytodefine....whichfeaturesinmanyformsandispossibletoalterundermanyrealitieswithmerelyone....
简单vs复杂
Themostcomplicated…whichinvolves/requires/demandsacombinationofalleffortsislargelydegraded/simplifiedto...
不变vs万变
Insomecases,/oncertainoccasions,...mightbeeffective/beneficial,whileundermanyothercircumstances,...runstheriskofmessingup..../driving...toadeadend
理论vs实践
Theoretically,...isacceptable,/issounded,whileinpractice,/inreality,itwouldbeawkwardinservingasakey/itwouldmakethingsworseoffratherthanbringingbenefits.
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/单一对多样
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Eg.引出例子…,forexample,…
#thecaseof…/thepersonalexperienceof…canserveasanexample/evidencethatcansubstantiate/solidify/bolster/supportmyclaim(that…)
“半分离”式的例子,下面在简单说一下上面“简单”提到的例子
#…lendcrediblesupporttotheclaimthat(thefeasibility/viabilityisopentoquestion).
+(optional)
再举一个例子
Thecaseof…/thepersonalexperienceof…canberaised(及物)asanotherexamplethatcanstrengthentheviewpoint(anditisthemostevidentin…/underthecircumstanceof…)
#再反对—质疑解决方案的唯一性(大道至简)
※切断解决方案与目标之联系
Inaddition,thereisnopointtoclaimthat(北美最常用)…unexceptionallyservesasthe*exclusiveprerequisite(无一例外的可以作为)for…
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--冲击定义和解决方案间的联系
otherfactors
※significantsolution
strategy
approach
channel
though…is,itcanneverovershadow/omittheeffectivenessofmanyotheraccess
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--冲淡定义和解决方案间的联系
※Otherwaysout/solutions/possibilities/approaches/strategiessuchasA,B,CandDaresignificantfactorsthatshouldnotbeoverlooked.
※SomesolutionssuchasA,B,CandDarealsoindispensableelementsthatplaydecisiverolesinachieving/accomplishing/making…
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Inthiscase/Inthissense,thereexistsnodirectcausalrelationbetweentheformerandthelatter
#继续反对—质疑解决方案的效用
--再次强调问题/主题的复杂性,艰巨性
※Themostcomplicatedtaskof…whichinvolvesamixtureofsolutions
※Themostcomplicatedproblemof…,whosesolutionrequires/demandsacombinationofefforts
※Themostcomplicatedartof…,whichconcernsaseriesofindispensableepisodes,
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islargely/unfortunatelydegraded/simplifiedtoapointwhere…serveasamostapprovedchoice.
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Theeffectivenessandefficiencyofsuchproposalwouldbetherebyminimizedwhilerisksmaximized.
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--进一步反对—如果gotoofar,后果严重
※If/oncetoomuchemphasisisplacedon..,..willruntheriskofbeingmessedup.
※once…goesoutofcontrol/…goestoofar,Pandora’sboxwouldhenceopen.
--赔了媳妇儿又折兵
※Itwillmakethingsworseoff,ratherthanbringingbenefits.
※Thepossiblesolutionsandopportunitiesbroughtaboutbythisproposalarefaroutweighedbythepotentialuncertaintiesandrisks.
※Thepredicablemisleadingandconfusionincurredbythisdefinition/conclusioncanlargelyruleoutanypossibleguidanceandreferenceitoffers.
※Itwillmessup…
※itwillinevitablymislead…
※it/,whichwillinevitablyruntheriskofmakingthingworseoffratherthanbringingbenefits.
※it/,whichwillnotbeimmunetotheriskofmessingup.
--如果不这样,可能会好些
--这样做,会忽略X,但是X很重要
※Thelastthingwearestrivingforisunfortunatelythemostnecessary/significantto…
※tradeAforB
☆Wearetradingeverythingfornothing.
☆Wearetradingouruniquefeaturesforsomethingincommon.
☆Wearetradingthepossibilityofsustainabledevelopmentfortherealityofpresent/short-termbenefits.
#人的因素(op)
tendency
Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionstowardsdifferentthings.
Peoplevaryinginpersonalitiesaswellasbackgroundshavediversifiedtendenciesinturningtosolutions/accesstothesameproblem.
#良性建议
Toguaranteeahealthy…./sustainabledevelopment….,itisessentialfor….to….
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AisB
*AisB(B=n.—function)
=AservesasB
Classservesasmedia.
Booksserveasreference.
*AisB(B=n./adj.)
=Aisaccepted/proved/acknowledgedasB
=Aisaccepted/proved/acknowledgedtobeB
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*Modeforending
Tosumup,
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thepredictableuncertaintiesandtroublesbroughtaboutby…faroutweightheopportunitiesandpossiblesolutionsitmightoffer.
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Whatismore,it'sessentialforuniversities…
偏倚话题
A>B模块组Aismore… thanB话题
A>B(偏倚)表述
emphasizevsemphasis
analyzeanalysis
adviseadvice
*placemoreemphasisonA,ratherthanB
*moreemphasisshouldbeplacedonA,ratherthanB
*AovershadowsB
*AoutweighsB=BisoutweighedbyA
*AshouldbegivenmoreprecedenceoverB/WeshouldgiveAmoreprecedenceoverB
Heading
豪华加强版1@凸显主题,体现侧重@深思熟虑@我的立场
@凸显主题,体现侧重
Inrecentyears,/Atpresent,
#Onceconcerning…
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Asfaras…isconcerned,…
#Insenseof….
#Asisoftenthecase,…
#Underthecontextof…,*AismuchemphasizedtoapointwhereBisovershadowed.
@深思熟虑
*Intakingvariousfactorsintoconsideration,
*Intakingvariousfactorsintoaccount,
*Inweighingupboththeprospectivebenefitsandpotentialrisks,
@我的立场
Tolargeextent,however,IsideontheoppositeoftheclaimthatAoutweighsB.
replaces/takestheplaceofB
+--why?
+--Option1—厚此薄彼
*intertwine相辅相成
*playrespectiveindispensablerolesin各得其所
Asamatteroffact,*theformerandthelatterareintertwinedelementsthatareplayingrespectiveindispensablerolesin….
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--Option2—你死我活
AvsB
A—exist+B—exist=co-exist
*共存原则
harmony—harmonious
#AandBcanco-existinaharmoniousway/manner
#AandBarenot2mutuallyexclusivematters.
#AandBarecompatible
AandBarenot2mutuallyexclusivematters.Asamatteroffact,theformerandthelattercanco-existinaharmoniousway.
豪华加强版2
Heading
Y+O+N
Yes让步
Incaseof…,
Insenseof…,
Underthecontextof…,
Infacing…,
Onceconcerning…,
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#wealwayshaveastrongertendencyindoing/turningtoA
#wealwaystendtodoA
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Although….,
adj.+thoughn./itis,…
adj.+as+n./itis,…
*IndispensablethoughA/itisinservingas
channel
solution
strategytobeachieved,
a/anapproachthroughwhich…isexpectedtobeaccomplished,
referencetobeenhanced,
evidence
record
+Other不可忽视--*overshadow
itcannever*overshadowthesignificanceoftheother…
Thereisnopointtoovershadow/overlookthesignificanceof…
No这种倾斜有害
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Whatismore,theclaim/solutioninwhich…isoveremphasizedwithlittleconsiderationoveranyaltersinsituationorenvironmentwillinevitablyruntheriskofmessingup…
driving…toadeadend.
经济简化版
Heading
1.
IsAin…moreimportantthanB?
Insomecases,itsoundsreasonable.
outweighs
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Inmyview,however,thisclaimsuffersfrommanycriticalflawsthatmakeitunconvincingasitstands.
2.
…Intakingvariousfactorsintoaccount/consideration,Isideontheoppositeoftheclaimthat…andreckonthatbothAandBserveasindispensable…in….ing….
Body
Strategy:
#优先且重点关照B(A>B)
#证明B重要
-为B存在-AforB
-B是标准-BguideA
-B可以带来什么?
Steps
1先让步,关照A—indispensable
2挽救被轻视的B—B重要
3再冲击联系,othersshouldnotbeovershadowed
4如此侧重,效果不好,危害巨大:
找漏洞—
简单vs复杂
单一vs多样
僵