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ThelinegraphbelowgivesinformationaboutthenumberofvisitorstothreeLondonmuseumsbetweenJuneandSeptember2013.
Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.
Writeatleast150words.
TestTip
Checkthehorizontalaxistofindwhetherthegraphreferstopast,present,futureorallthree.
Weusethepresentsimpletodescribethegraph:
Thegraphshows…,Wecansee…
Ifthegraphreferstopastperiodoftime,weusethepastsimple,andifthegraphincludesfuturetimes,weusewilloritispredictedthat.
Lookatthelinegraphandcompletethetextwiththecorrectformsoftheverbsinbracketsandthecorrectprepositions.
Thegraphshows(show)howmanypeoplevisited(visit)threeLondonmuseumsinthesummerof2013.Mostvisitorswent(go)totheBritishmuseumbetweenJuneandSeptember.Thenumberfluctuated(fluctuate)between500and750.Bycontrast,theScienceMuseumandtheNaturalHistoryMuseumreceived(receive)fewervisitors.ThenumberofpeoplewhovisitedtheScienceMuseumdropped(drop)graduallyfrom400thousandto300fromJunetoAugustthenrose(rise)to450thousandinSeptember.Wecansee(see)thatthetrendfortheNaturalHistoryMuseumwas(be)similar.TherewasasharpdropinvisitorsfromJunetoJuly.Thenumberremainedstable(remainstable)inAugustandthenincreased(increase)steadilyinSeptember.
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ThechartbelowshowsthepercentagechangeintheshareofinternationalstudentsamonguniversitygraduatesindifferentCanadianprovincesbetween2001and2006.
Source:
StatisticsCanada,PostsecondaryStudentInformationSystem
InTask1oftheIELTSWritingmodules,youmaybeaskedtodescribeagraphwhichshowschangesoveraperiodoftime.Todothisyouneedtouselanguageexpressingchangeandappropriatetenses.Intheexam,makesureyouleavetimetoedityourwrittenanswer.Youwilllosemarksifyoumaketoomanymistakesingrammarandvocabulary.
Modelanswer
ThechartshowschangesintheshareofinternationalstudentswhograduatedfromuniversitiesindifferentCanadianprovincesoveraperiodof5years.
In2001,thissharehadarelativelynarrowrange,from3%inOntarioto7.0%inNewBrunswick.NovaScotiahadthesecondhighestproportionat6.5%.Fiveyearslater,thefiguresformostprovinceshadrisen,withtheexceptionofAlberta.There,thefiguresfellby1%tojustover4%.
By2006,somepartsofCanadaexperiencedaconsiderableincreaseintheirshareofinternationalgraduates.GrowthinthissharewasespeciallystronginthecaseofNewBrunswick,wherethefiguresrosefrom7%to12%.ThelargestgrowthoccurredinBritishColumbia,whereitmorethandoubledto11%.
Overthisfive-yearperiod,changesintheproportionofinternationalgraduateshavebeenveryunevenacrosstheprovincesofCanada.However,NewBrunswickremainedtheprovincewiththehighestpercentageoverall.
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ThechartbelowgivesinformationabouttheUK'
sageingpopulationin1985andmakespredictionsfor2035.
OfficeforNationalStatistics,NationalRecordsofScotland,NorthernIrelandStatisticsandResearchAgency
ExamTip
InWritingTask1,itisessentialtounderstandwhatthegraphorchartisrepresenting.Lookcloselyattheinformationintheinstructionsaswellasalldetailsofthegraphorchart.
Thegraphinthistaskshowsthepercentageofover65sineachcountryoftheUK.Thefollowingareincorrectstatements:
∙Waleshadmoreover65sthanEngland.(Thegraphisinpercentages,notnumbers)
∙NorthernIrelandhad12%ofover65sin1985.(Thecountriesdonotaddupto100%soNorthernIrelanddidnothave12%ofallover65s.Thegraphshowsthat12%ofthepopulationofNorthernIrelandwasover65.)
ThegraphshowshowthesizeanddistributionoftheUK'
sageingpopulationislikelytochangeovera50-yearperiod.
Overall,theproportionsarepredictedtoincreaseinallUKcountries.In1985,15percentoftheUKpopulationwasover65,butby2035,thiswillaccountfor23percentofthetotalpopulation.
AcloserlookatthedatarevealsthattheageingpopulationisexpectedtorisemoreinsomepartsoftheUKthaninother.In1985,Waleshadthehighestpercentageofpeopleaged65andover,at16percent.Thesecond-largestgroupcouldbefoundinEnglandandthethirdinScotland.Northe