高考英语异构异模复习考案习题 专题14 短文改错文档格式.docx

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IliketravelingandmydreamofpayingavisitforourcapitalcityBeijingcametrueduringtheNationalDayholidaythisyear.IwenttoTian'

anmenSquarewithmyparentsonOctober1,whichwewatchedaflag－raisingceremony.WhileIwatchedtheflagrisingslow,Isangthenationalanthemtomusic,feelingextremelyexciting.Thenwegotosomeotherfamoustouristattraction,liketheGreatWall.StandingontheGreatWall,Ifeltveryproud,thoughtoftheoldsayingthat“Hewhodon'

tclimbtheGreatWallisnotatrueman.”AlthoughIwastired,butIreallyhadagoodtime.

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IliketravelingandmydreamofpayingavisitourcapitalcityBeijingcametrueduringtheNationalDayholidaythisyear.IwenttoTian'

anmenSquarewithmyparentsonOctober1,wewatchedflag－raisingceremony.WhileIwatchedtheflagrising，Isangthenationalanthemtomusic,feelingextremely.Thenwetosomeotherfamoustourist，liketheGreatWall.StandingontheGreatWall,Ifeltveryproud,oftheoldsayingthat“HewhoclimbtheGreatWallisnotatrueman.”AlthoughIwastired,Ireallyhadagoodtime.

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Thereiscommonphenomenonnowadayswhichparentsarrangeeverythingfortheirchildrenandtrytopavethewayfortheirsuccess.Thatisofgreatlyconcern.I'

mstronglyopposedofthiskindof“love”.Foronething,childrenbecomeveryreliantontheirparentsthattheyfailtohaveindependentthoughtsorcreativeidea.Foranother,overprotectingthechildrenorgivingouttoomuchcareisextremelybadforourdevelopmentinthefuture.Ithinkonlybyencouragingthechildrentoovercomedifficultiesanddevelopingbythemselvescantheygrowuptobeingindependentandbecometrulysuccessful.

Thereiscommonphenomenonnowadaysparentsarrangeeverythingfortheirchildrenandtrytopavethewayfortheirsuccess.Thatisofconcern.I'

mstronglyopposedthiskindof“love”.Foronething,childrenbecomereliantontheirparentsthattheyfailtohaveindependentthoughtsorcreative.Foranother,overprotectingthechildrenorgivingtoomuchcareisextremelybadfordevelopmentinthefuture.Ithinkonlybyencouragingthechildrentoovercomedifficultiesandbythemselvescantheygrowuptoindependentandbecometrulysuccessful.

Correction3限时：

July24th,ThursdaySunny

Onthewaytotheclassroom,beautifulscenerycameintomysight.Bothsideoftheroadwerelinedwithaplentyoftrees,greenandtall.Whenraisemyhead,Igotaviewofmanylovelybirdsflyingfreeinthebluesky.ThenIlostinthought.HowIwishedIwereabird,thatcouldgowhereveritwantedanddidwhateveritliked.Impossiblelikeitwas,Istillfeltveryhappy.HowIwasgratefulthathewasamanwhohadtheabilitytoimagineandenjoythehappinessitbrought!

AsIwalkedonslowly,abrightsmileappearedinmyface.

Onthewaytotheclassroom,beautifulscenerycameintomysight.Bothoftheroadwerelinedwithplentyoftrees,greenandtall.Whenmyhead,Igotaviewofmanylovelybirdsflyinginthebluesky.ThenIlostinthought.HowIwishedIwereabird,couldgowhereveritwantedandwhateveritliked.Impossibleitwas,Istillfeltveryhappy.HowIwasgratefulthatwasamanwhohadtheabilitytoimagineandenjoythehappinessitbrought!

AsIwalkedonslowly,abrightsmileappearedmyface.

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Myfatherwasthebiologyprofessor.WhenIwasyounghewasusedtotakemetothebiologylab,thereIsawpigs,catsandotheranimals.Myfatheralsoinfluencedmethroughnaturewalks.Heoftentookmeonawalkinthebackyard.Wewouldcatchfrogs,snakesandfirefly.Heseemedknoweverythingaboutwildlife.Eighteenyearslater,thinkaboutmyfatherandhisinfluenceonmylife,Ifeelveryluckily.IamgratefulthatIgotthechancetolearnfromher.Hehelpsmedevelopmyinterestinallthatwasaliveandsometimesdeadaroundme.

Myfatherwasbiologyprofessor.WhenIyounghewasusedtotakemetothebiologylab,Isawpigs,catsandotheranimals.Myfatheralsoinfluencedmethroughnaturewalks.Heoftentookmeawalkinthebackyard.Wewouldcatchfrogs,snakesand.Heseemedknoweverythingaboutwildlife.Eighteenyearslater,aboutmyfatherandhisinfluenceonmylife,Ifeelvery.IamgratefulthatIgotthechancetolearnfrom.Hemedevelopmyinterestinallthatwasaliveandsometimesdeadaroundme.

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Deareditor，

IamLiHua,astudentfromXinhuaMiddleSchool.Iamwritingtoexpressmyopiniononifmobilephonesshouldbeallowedinmiddleschools.Nowadaysmobilephoneshavebecomeapopularmeansofcommunication.However,manyaschooldon'

tallowstudentstobringmobilephone