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如果大家注意这些细节的描述,一定会为你的记叙文续写增色!
“感到害怕”的细节描述
当看到那只凶恶的狼时,我感到很害怕。
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述,先将意思表达清楚。
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2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述,注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
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参考答案:
1.Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifeltveryscared.
2.
1)Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifeltsoscaredthat
mythroattightenedandmykneesfelt
weak.
(嗓子发紧,膝盖发软)
2)Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,I
frozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.(吓呆了,不敢动弹)
3)Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,I
wasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorandmypalmsweresweating.
(被深深地恐惧感所控制,手心出汗)
表感到兴奋thrilled
当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋极了。
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1.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,shefeltthrilled.
1)Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,
hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.(激动得两眼放光)
2)Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,
herheartwasthumpingwithexcitement.
(激动得心砰砰跳)
3)Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,
awideexcitementtookholdofher.
(兴奋不能自已)
一听到那个坏消息,她悲伤不已。
1.
Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltextremelysad.
1)Uponhearingthebadnews,
herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.
(心痛,眼泪直流)
2)Uponhearingthebadnews,she,
numbwithgrief,hadtroublespeaking.
(悲伤到失去知觉,不能开口说话)
3)Uponhearingthebadnews,she
feltseizedbyaburstofsadness
andcouldn’thelpcryingbitterly.(被一股悲伤之感控制,忍不住哭泣)
当妈妈亲吻他时,小baby开心极了。
1.Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,thebabywashappy/delighted/fullofjoy.
2.1)
Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,itseemedasifthebaby
wereontopoftheworld.
(非常开心)
2)
Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,
hisface
beamedandhisbrightsmilelituptheroom.
(眉开眼笑;
笑容照亮房间)
3)
hiseyesdancedwithjoyandsweetness.
(欢欣雀跃)
她感到非常羞愧。
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(答案见底部Key1)
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(答案见底部Key2)
Key1:
Shefeltashamed.
Key2:
1)
Shefeltsoashamed
that
she
could
feel
her
faceburning.(脸上滚烫)
2)
Soashamedwasshethatshecould
thebloodrushto
face.
(血液涌上脸颊)
3)
Soashameddidshefeelthatshe
wasclosetotears.
(快哭了)
Sheldon感到非常生气。
Sheldonfeltveryangry.
1)Sheldonfeltsoangrythathe
stormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.
(冲出房间;
狠狠摔门)
Boilingwithrage,Sheldon
shookhisfistatme.(怒火中烧;
挥舞拳头)
Filledwithfury,Sheldonwas
unableto
utterasingleword.
(充满愤怒;
说不出话)
Tony感到很绝望。
Tonyfelthopeless/desperate.
Astheresultofanaccident,
Tony
wassuddenlythrowninto
aworldofdarknessandsankintohopelessness.
(被投入黑暗之中;
陷入绝望)
feltleftout
andwasgettingdesperatewithloneliness.
(感觉被遗忘、忽视)
3)Tony'
sbeliefsinlookingforwardandseeingthepositiveineverything
deserted
him.
1、踉踉跄跄
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2、悄悄地走
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3、猛冲
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