雅思英语作文 children 国家是否应该严格控制人口.docx

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雅思英语作文children国家是否应该严格控制人口

SomeGovernmentssayhowmanychildrenafamilycanhaveintheircountryshouldbestrictlycontrolled.Theymaycontrolthenumberofchildrensomeonehasthroughtaxes.IsItsometimesnecessaryandrightforagovernmenttocontrolthepopulationinthisway？

Doyouagreeordisagreewiththispolicy?

Givereasonsforyouranswer.Youshouldwriteatleast250words.

ModelAnswer1:

（Disagreement）

Overpopulationisagreatconcernformanyunder-developedcountriesandthegovernmenttakesmanystepstocontroltheuncontrolledincreaseofpopulation.Inmanycountries,governmentimposerulestorestrictthenumberofchildrenafamilycanhaveandalsorestrictsmanyfacilitiesincaseafamilyhastoomanychildren.Butimposingataxtorestrictthenumberofchildreninafamilyisnotafeasiblesolution.Inmyopinion,otherwaysofcontrollingthepopulationinacountryshouldbeconsideredratherthanimposingthetax.Firstofall,thepopulationisthemainprobleminmostofthethirdworldcountrieswhereasthedevelopedcountriesmostlyhavecontroloverthatissue.Incountrieslikechina,thepopulationisnotaburdenrathertheyhavebeenabletousethelargepopulationasthemainworkforceforthesteadyimprovementofthecountry.Overpopulationinanunder-developedcountrydirectlyrelatedtopoverty,illiteracy,unhygieniclifestyleandcrime.Socontrollingthepopulationinthesecountriesisamustandimposingataxonthepoorpeoplewouldnotbeagoodidea.Thetrendsshowthateducatedupperclassandmiddleclassdonottakemorethantwochildreninthesecountrieswherethepoorpeopleseemslikehavenocontrolonthat.Ifthegovernmentimposesthetaxonthosepoorpeople,theirlifewouldbecomemoremiserable.Icompletelyagreethateachgovernmentshouldmaintainsomepoliciesandshouldimposestrictrulestocontrolthepopulationacountryhasbutincreasingawarenessandimplementingotherpoliciesthantaximposingwouldbebettersolutions.Inconclusion,Icompletelyagreethatthegovernmentofacountryshouldtakeanyinitiativetocontroltheoverpopulationgrowthbuttaximposingtopoorpeopleistheleasteffectivesolutionsincetherearemanyalternatives.

ModelAnswer2:

（Agreement）

Thepopulationisoneofthebiggestproblemsforsomeofthecountriestoday.Thepopulationdistributioniseveryunevenacrossdifferentcountriesandwhilesomecountrieshaveverylesspopulation,someothercountriessufferfromalargenumberofpopulation.TherearecertaincountrieslikeIndiaandChinawhicharetwohighlypopulatedareawhereascountrieslikeIreland,RussiaandSwitzerlandarethinlypopulated.SoIagreethatthecountriesthataresufferingfromthehugepopulationshouldtakestepslikeimposingataxonthenumberofchildrenafamilyhas.Therearevariousproblemsthatappearduetothehugepopulation,likepoverty,unemployment,crimeandilliteracy.Everycountryhaslimitedresourcesandifthepopulationrisesbeyondpermissiblelimit,itresultsinrapidexhaustionoftheseresources.Therefore,Iagree,sometimesitisnecessaryforagovernmenttotakeharshactiontocontrolpopulation.Andoneoftheseharshactionscanbelimitingtheavailablefacilitytothepersonswhohavemorethananapprovednumberofchildrenandtoimposealargeamountoftaxationduetothelargenumberofchildrens/hehas.IndiaandChinaaretheworld’smostpopulatedcountries.Duringthe'70s,thepopulationofbothcountries’populationwasgrowingatrapidrateandinordertocurbitspopulation,chinaimposed1-childpolicyandstrictlyimplementedit.Asaresult,wecanseetheirpopulationgrowthratehasreduceddrasticallyto0.6%perannum,whereasthoughIndiapromoted2-childrenpolicybutdidn’tenforceanypolicy.Ittriededucatingpeopleaboutbenefitsofsmallfamilies,givebenefitstosmallfamilies.Though,theregrowthratedecreasedbutwasn’tsignificantaschina.India’sgrowthrateisstillhoveringaround1.2%perannumanditisbelievedthattheywillsurpassChina’spopulationinnextdecadeorso.ProblemsassociatedwithpopulationarequiteevidentinIndia.Healthcaresystemisabysmal;unemployment,illiteracy,andpovertyarerampant.Onthecontrarily,certainEuropeancountrieshavelesspopulationandencouragetohavemorechildren.Citizensincertaincountriesarealsogivenextragrantsiftheyhavemorethantwochildren.TheaverageageofJapanisover70yearsandJapanesegovernmentencouragespeopletohavemorechildreninordertohavemoreyoungpopulation.Socountrieswhohaveadecentpopulationandareforecastingtodecreasethepopulationinthecomingages,shouldnotadoptthistaxationstrategy.Toconclude,Ithinkitisofutmostimportancethatcountry’spopulationisproportionaltoitsresourcesandtotalareaandtostrikethatperfectbalance,sometimesitismandatoryforthegovernmenttointerveneandimposerulestocontrolthepopulationliketaxingtheindividualswhocontributetoincreasingthepopulationevenmore.

by-PreetiGhuraiya

ModelAnswer3:

（Agreement）

Nowadayshighpopulationandpopulationcontrolhavebecometwobigcriticalissuesallovertheworld.Somepeopleoftoday’ssocietyareoftheopinionthatitisthegovernment’ssoleconcernhowtheywillcontrolthepopulationofthesecountrieswhileothersopposetheideabutmyinclinationistowardtheformer.Ononehand,itisarguedthatitisfamily'sresponsibilitytodecidethenumberofchildrentheywillhave.Themostvitalargumentforthereasonwhichcaninitiallybementionedisthatitistheinterferenceofhumanrightsifagovernmentdecidesthenumberoffamilymember.Itseemshumanbasicrighthowtheybuildandraisetheirfamily.Forexample,financiallysolventpeoplecanraiseabigfamilyandtheymightwanttohavemorechildren.Moreover,nowpeopleliveintheglobalvillageandscattertheskilledmanpowerthroughouttheothercountriesandit’stheprominentsolutionofoverpopulationofanyselectedarea.Toclarifythismatter,JapanisfacingtheproblemofnegativepopulationandBangladeshisovercrowded.IfBangladeshiskilledpeoplemovetoJapantohelpthemindifferentjobsanddevelopment,itwouldbeareallygoodsolutionforbothcountries.Ontheotherhand,thereisaquiteplausiblereasonwhyitisessentialforthegovernmenttotakevariousstepstocontrolpopulation.Whatcanbecitedfirstregardingthisisoverpopulationisthemainproblemfordevelopingandunder-developedcountries.It’stheirprimeconcerntolowerbirthrate.Forinstance,someincentivesforonechildandimposingtaxesformorethantwochildrenarethebestwaystoensureslowerbirthrate.Afurtherpointisthatweareexploitedourresourcesverybadly.Inthefuture,therewillbenonaturalresourcesforcominggenerations.Soinordertomakewiseutilisationofourgas,oilandminerals,weneedtocontrolthepopulation.Lastbutnotleastitisdifficulttomaintainbigfamilyandensurepropereducationforthem.Inanutshelltakingalltheaforementionedprosandconsintoaccount,Ipersonallyopinethatgovernmentshouldcontrolthepopulationofthecountryforthebettermentofthehumancivilisation.

ModelAnswer4:

（Disagreement）

Itisundeniablethatthepopulationsizeofthehumanisexpandingwithasignificantspeed.Thus,thecountry'sbirthcontrolpolicyhasbecomeamajorconcernformanygovernmentsintheworld.Butshouldsuchpoliciescontrolthenumberofoffspringonefamilycanhavethroughtaxes?

Inmyopinion,thatsolutioncouldbereplacedwithmanymoreefficientmethods.Somepeoplebelievethattaxescanlowerthefertilityrateincountriessinceitinvolvesdirectlytoonefamily’sfinancialstate.Thisbeliefhassomemeritsonthesurface.However,withfamilieswhichhavelowincome,especiallytheonesbelowthepovertyline,thereisanextremelylowpossibilitythattheycanmanagetopayextrataxesforhavingmanychildren.Therefore,taxevasionmayoccur,whichleadstoanotherunexpectedproblemthegovernmentstodealwith.Althoughbirthcontrolpoliciesareinevitable,therearemorereasonablemethodsthatgovernmentscanapplyratherthanraisingthetax.Forinstance,sexeducationmaybetaughtatelementaryschools.Sinceelementaryeducatinguniversalisationisbecomingatrend,childrenwouldhaveabetterperceptionaboutsexprotectionandunwantedpregnancy,thusreducingthebirthrate.Anothersolutionistopropagandiseforcitizensthebenefitsofhavingfewchildren,suchasmoreeducationandhealthcarethatasolechildwouldreceive,orlessfinancialpressurehavingonlyonetotwochildren.Tosumup,Itotallydisagreewiththeideaofputtingmoretaxesonlytoreducethecountry'sbirthrate.Instead,morenon-financialpoliciesshouldbetakenplacetoconvincecouplestotheroot,makingthemhavefewerchildrenwithnoobjectionbuttotheirheart'scontent.