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昆明市中考英语作文讲解
中考作文备考(培优生)
2015-2019昆明市中考作文题目
2015
A:
Thegoodolddays
B:
Awonderful_____
2016
A:
Dosmallthingswell
B:
Ilove_______
2017
A:
Onedayinmychildhood
B:
My_______
2018
Asmallthing
2019
Onmyparent’sbirthday
2015-2019云南省中考作文题目
2015
Growingupwith…
2016
IHaveLearnedaLotinJuniorHighSchool
2017
ASpecialDay
2018
DoingSomethingNiceto...
2019
AWeekendtoRemember
一、写作类型:
记叙文、议论文、说明文、应用文。
二、评分标准
一档:
(12~15分):
内容切题、层次清楚、语言流畅、基本无语言表达错误。
二档:
(8~11分):
内容切题、层次比较清楚、语言比较流畅、语言表达错误较少。
三档:
(5~7分):
内容基本切题、层次不够分明、语言表达错误较多。
四档:
(1~4分入有一定内容、但语言表达错误很多。
(注意:
书面表达语法错误全卷扣分不得超过2分;单词拼写错误全卷扣分不得超过2分;抄袭卷中阅读材料的,抄袭部分不给分。
)
三、中考作文十字真言:
结构、要点、逻辑、语法、亮点。
(卷面也很重要)
四、写作步骤:
审题、谋篇、造句、遣词、成文、落地、拓展。
五、高级词和高级短语:
1.devote…to替换spend...in
Hespendsallhissparetimeinreading.→
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Hedevotesallhissparetimetoreading.
2.nothingbut替换very
Thefilmwesawlastnightwasveryinteresting.→
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Thefilmwesawlastnightwasnothingbutinteresting.
或Thefilmwesawlastnightwasanythingbutboring.
3.besupposedto替换should
Heshouldhavedrivenmoreslowly.→
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Heissupposedtohavedrivenmoreslowly.
4.dueto替换becauseof
Hearrivedlatebecauseofthestorm.→
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Hearrivedlateduetothestorm.
5.cover(+路程)替换walk(+路程)
Afterwalking10miles,weallfelttired.→
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Aftercovering10miles,weallfelttired.
contributeto替换behelpful/usefulto
6.contributesto替换helpfulto
PlentyofmemoryworkisundoubtedlyhelpfultoEnglishstudy.→
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PlentyofmemoryworkundoubtedlycontributestoEnglishstudy.
7.beof+n.替换adj.
(1)beof(great)importance替换important
Itisimportant.→
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Itisof(great)importance.
(2)beof(high)quality替换good
TheproductsareverygoodandaresoldeverywhereinChina.→
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TheproductsareofhighqualityandaresoldeverywhereinChina.
(3)beof(great)value替换valuable
Thehouseinthevillageisvaluable.→
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Thehouseinthevillageisofgreatvalue.
(4)beof(great)benefit替换beneficial
Takingplentyofexercisecanbebeneficial.→
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Takingplentyofexercisecanbeofgreatbenefit.
8.long/beeagertodosth.替换wanttodosth.;
Iwanttoseeyousoon.→
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Ilongtoseeyousoon./Iameagertoseeyousoon.
9.becaughtupin/becrazyabout/beabsorbedin/beaddictedto/befascinatedby
替换beinterestedin
Heisinterestedincollectingstamps.→
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Heiscaughtupincollectingstamps.
或Heiscrazyaboutcollectingstamps.
或Heisabsorbedincollectingstamps.
或Heisaddictedtocollectingstamps.
10.theotherday替换afewdaysago
AfewdaysagomybrotherandIwenttothecinemabybicycle.→
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TheotherdaymybrotherandIwenttothecinemabybicycle.
11.themajorityof替换mostof
MostoftheintervieweespreferwatchingTVathometogoingtothecinema.→
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ThemajorityoftheintervieweespreferwatchingTVathometogoingtothecinema.
12.bewornout替换betired/broken
(1)Afterfivehours’non-stopwork,wewerealltired.→
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Afterfivehours’non-stopwork,wewereallwornout.
(2)Myshoesarebroken.Pleasebuymeanewpair.→
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Myshoesarewornout.Pleasebuymeanewpair.
13.attendto替换lookafter/takecareof
Mymotherwasveryill,soIhadtolookafterher.→
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Mymotherwasveryill,soIhadtoattendtoher.
14.asamatteroffact替换infact
Infact,Iknownothingaboutthisbook.→
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Asamatteroffact,Iknownothingaboutthisbook.
15.meanwhile替换atthesametime
(说明:
meanwhile一般只放句作状语,要注意哦!
所以当atthesametime放句首时可换成meanwhile,且后常有逗号,放句末时就不行了。
)
Atthesametime,DavidandIhadbrokenupagain.→
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Meanwhile,DavidandIhadbrokenupagain.
16.taketheattitudethat....替换think→
Hethinksthatheisthemostattractiveboyintheclass.
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Hetakestheattitudethatheisthemostattractiveboyintheclass.
17.havetheconfidencethat…替换believe→
IbelievethatIcanachievegreatsuccessinthefuture.
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IhavetheconfidencethatIcanachievegreatsuccessinthefuture.
18.good/great/wonderful
→excellent棒极了的,极好的
→fantastic棒极了的,极好的
→brilliant棒极了的,极好的
→fabulous棒极了的,极好的
→superb棒极了的,极好的
→terrific棒极了的,极好的
→meaningful有意义的
→educational有教育意义的
19.bad
→terrible糟糕的
→tiring令人劳累的tired感到累的
→boring令人无聊的bored感到无聊的
20.beautiful
→attractive有吸引力的
→appealing有吸引力的
→fascinating迷人的,吸引人的
21.difficult
→challenging
22.important
→vital
→significant
→essential
23.we
→Weteenagers....我们青少年...
→Wemiddleschoolstudents...我们中学生...
→WeEnglishlearners...我们英语学习者...
24.Inmyopinion,...
→Frommyperspective,...从我观点看来...
→Frommypointofview,..从我观点看来...
→AsfarasIamconcerned,...就我而言...
→Personally,...在我看来,...
25.so
→...,asaresult,...因此
→...,therefore,...因此
→...,consequently,...因此
26.be
→seem好像是
→appear看起来是
→turnouttobe原来是,结果是
27.very
→extremely极端地
→surprisingly令人惊讶地
28.其他语气性的副词,如absolutely,definitely等。
29.数量词,修饰可数名词agreatnumberof/alargequantityof/avarietyof/varietiesof/agreatmany替换many/alotof/lotsof
修饰不可数名词alargeamountof/alargequantityof/plentyof替换much/lotsof/alotof
六、过渡词
1.分两点拓展:
Foronething,....
Foranother,.....
Ontheonehand,....
Ontheotherhand,...
2.分三点拓展:
Firstandforemost,...
Additionally,...
Lastbutnotleast,...
3.分四点拓展:
Tobeginwith,...
Besides,....
What’smore,....
Finally,...
4.转换话题:
Bytheway,...(顺便一说,...)
5.描述活动过程:
Tobeginwith(一开始),...
Then(然后),...
Afterthat(之后),...
Finally(最后),...
6.一天中的时间:
Earlyinthemorning,...一大早...
Atnoon,...中午...
Twohourslater,...两小时之后....
Lateintheafternoon,...傍晚...
Intheevening,...晚上
Beforefinishingallthework,...在结束所有工作前,...
Thenextday,...第二天...(用于一般过去时)
7.表示时间顺序:
first,then,afterwards,meanwhile,later,firstofall,finally,atlast...
8.表示空间顺序:
near,nextto,farfrom,infrontof,ontheleft,ononeside...
9.表示比较、对照:
like,unlike,suchas,but,however,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,nevertheless,otherwise...
10.表示因果关系:
because,for,asaresult,therefore,thus...
11.表示递进关系:
besides,what’smore,what’sworse,moreover,furthermore,inaddition,ontopof...12.表示并列关系:
and,aswellas,also...
13.表示总结性:
ingeneral,inaword,inshort,onthewhole,tosumup,inbrief,toconclude...
高级句型:
1.三大从句(常用:
宾语从句、状语从句、主语从句、定语从句)
2.Therebe句型。
3.被动语态。
4.It做形式主语或形式宾语。
5.非谓语(doing/todo/done)。
6.同位语
7.with
8.强调句。
2015昆明市
第三节书面表达(满分10分)
A:
Thegoodolddays
B:
Awonderful
要求:
1.请从所给的A、B两个题目中任选其一作答,分值相同。
如选B题,请把题目补充完整再作答,例如:
你可以写“Awonderfulfriend”,“Awonderfulvacation”,“Awonderfulplace”,“Awonderfulgift”等。
2.注意紧扣主题,意思连贯,语言通顺,书写规范。
3.不得使用真实校名和姓名,如需使用名字,请用Mike,Gina等英文字,校名统一用GuangmingMiddleSchool.
4.词数不少于60.
2016昆明市
第三节书面表达(满分15分)
A.Dosmallthingswell
B.Ilove
要求:
1.请从所给的A、B两个题目中任选其一作答,分支相同。
如选B题,请把题目补充完整再作答,例如:
你可以写“Ilovemymother”,“IloveKunming”,“Ilovetravelling”等。
2.注意紧扣主题,意思连贯,语言通顺,书写规范。
3.文中不得使用真实姓名和校名,如需使用名字,请用Mike,Gina等英文名字,校名统一用GuangmingMiddleSchool.
4.词数不少于60.
2017昆明市
第三节书面表达(满分15分)
A.Onedayinmychildhood
B.My_______
要求:
1.请从所给的A、B两个题目中任选其一作答,分值相同。
如选B,请把题目补充完整再作答,例如:
“Mydream”“Myhometown”“Mypetdog”等。
2.注意紧扣主题,意思连贯,语言通顺,书写规范。
3.文中不得使用真实姓名和校名,如需使用名字,请用Mike,Gina等英文名字,校名统一用GuangmingMiddleschool.
4.词数不少于60字。
2018昆明市
第三节书面表达(满分15分)
Asmallthing
提示:
请根据所给题目“Asmallthing”写一篇英语短文,叙述一件你经历过的小事。
要求:
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
3.请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
【参考范文】Asmallthing
Therearemanysmallthingsinlifethatmakeyoumoved.IhadaveryunforgettablethingonJune11th,2012.Itwasasunnyday.Onthewaytoschool,myfrienddidsomethingrudetome.Itmademesad.What'sworse,Igota"C"inmyfavoritesubject.Afterschool,Iwenthomeunhappily.Itwasdarkintheroom.Suddenlythelightswereon,andIheardthesong"Happybirthday".Iwassurprisedtoseemanypeopleandabigcake."Oh,it'smybirthday."Iwassoexcitedandhappy.Itwasmyfirsttimetohaveabirthdayparty.I'llneverforgetthatday.
2019昆明市
第三节书面表达(满分15分)
Onmyparent’sbirthday
某英文网站正在面向全国中学生开展以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动,请你用英文以“Onmyparent'sbirthday”为题目写一篇记叙文投稿,内容为某次你为妈妈或爸爸庆祝生日的经历。
要求:
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上,如在本卷上作答,一律不得分。
【分析】高分句型一:
LastSaturdaywehadabirthdaypartyformymotherathome.
上周六我们在家为我母亲举办了一个生日聚会.haveabirth