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六级作文技巧
开头
Aproberbsays, “ Youareonlyyoungonce.” (适用于已记住的名言)
Itgoeswithoutsayingthatwecannotbeyoungforever.(适用于自编名言)
Aseveryoneknows,Noonecandenythat…
Accordingtoarecentsurvey,about78.90fthecollegestudentswantedtofurthertheirstudyaftertheirgraduation.
主体
tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finally(强烈推荐)
tostartwith,next,inaddition,finally(强烈推荐)
firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast(强烈推荐)
mostimportantofall,moreover,finally
ontheonehand,ontheotherhand(适用于两点的情况)
foronething,foranotherthing(适用于两点的情况)
incomparison,likewise,similarly,inthesamemanner
ontheotherhand,conversely,whereas,while,instead,nevertheless,incontrast,onthecontrary,comparedwith …,…
结尾
Obviously(此为过渡短语),wecandrawtheconclusionthatgoodmannersarisefrompolitenessandrespectforothers.
tosumup,inconclusion,inbrief,onaccountofthis,thus
Thus,itcanbeconcludedthat…,Therefore,wecanfindthat…
Obviously,itishightimethatwetooksomemeasurestosolvetheproblem.
Accordingly,Irecommendthatsomemeasuresbetaken.
Consequently,tosolvetheproblem,somemeasuresshouldbetaken.
好句~~
一)比较
1.Theadvantagefaroutweighthedisadvantages.
2.TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.
3.AmaybepreferabletoB,butAsuffersfromthedisadvantagesthat...
4.Itisreasonabletomaintainthat...butitwouldbefoolishtoclaimthat...
5.Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.
6.Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.
7.AandBhasseveralpointsincommon.
8.AbearssomeresemblancestoB.
9.However,thesameisnotapplicabletoB.
10.AandBdifferinseveralways.
11.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.
12.Peopleusedtothink...,butthingsaredifferentnow.
13.ThesameistrueofB.
14.WonderingasAis,ithasitsdrawbacks.
15.ItistruethatA...,butthechieffaults(obviousdefects)are...
二)原因
1.Anumberoffactorsareaccountableforthissituation.
Anumberoffactorsmightcontributeto(leadto) (accountfor)thephenomenon(problem).
2.Theanswertothisprobleminvolvesmanyfactors.
3.Thephenomenonmainlystemsfromthefactthat...
4.Thefactorsthatcontributetothissituationinclude...
5.Thechangein...largelyresultsfromthefactthat...
6.Wemayblame...,buttherealcausesare...
7.Partoftheexplanationsforitisthat...
Oneofthemostcommonfactors(causes)isthat...
Anothercontributingfactor(cause)is...
Perhapstheprimaryfactoristhat …
Butthefundamentalcauseisthat...
三)后果
1.Itmaygiverisetoahostofproblems.
2.Theimmediateresultitproducesis...
3.Itwillexerciseaprofoundinfluenceupon...
4.Itsconsequencecanbesogreatthat...
四)批驳
1)Itistruethat...,butonevitalpointisbeingleftout.
2)Thereisagrainoftruthinthesestatements,buttheyignoreamoreimportantfact.
3)Somepeoplesay...,butitdoesnotholdwater.
4)Manyofushavebeenundertheillusionthat...
5)Acloseexaminationwouldrevealhowridiculousthestatementis.
6)Itmakesnosensetoarguefor...
7)Toomuchstressplacedon...mayleadto...
8)Suchastatementmainlyrestsontheassumptionthat...
9)Contrarytowhatiswidelyaccepted,Imaintainthat...
五)举例
1)Agoodcaseinpointis...
2)Asanillustration,wemaytake...
3)Suchexamplesmightbegiveneasily.
4)...isoftencitedasanexample.
六)证明
1)Noonecandenythefactthat...
2)Theideaishardlysupportedbyfacts.
3)Unfortunately,noneoftheavailabledatashows...
4)Recentstudiesindicatethat...
5)Thereissufficientevidencetoshowthat...
6)Accordingtostatisticsprovedby...,itcanbeseenthat...
七)开篇
1)Manynationshavebeenfacedwiththeproblemof...
2)Recentlytheproblemhasbeenbroughtintofocus.
3)Recentlythephenomenonhasbecomeaheated topic.
4)Recentlytheissuehasarousedgreatconcernamong...
5)Nowadaysthereisagrowingconcernover...
6)Neverinourhistoryhastheideathat...beensopopular.
7)Facedwith...,quiteafewpeoplearguethat...
8)Accordingtoarecentsurvey,...
9)Withtherapiddevelopmentof...,...
八)结尾
1)Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecandrawtheconclusionthat...
2)Itishightimethatstrictmeasuresweretakentostop...
3)Itisnecessarythatstepsshouldbetakento...
4)Inconclusion,itisimperativethat...
5)Thereisnoeasymethod,but...mightbeofsomehelp.
6)Tosolvetheabove-mentionedproblem,wemust...
7)Insummary,ifwecontinuetoignoretheabovementionedissue,moreproblemswillcropup.
8)Withtheeffortsofallpartsconcerned,theproblemwillbesolvedthoroughly.
9)Wemightdomorethanidentifythecause;itisimportanttotakeactionsto..
10)Takingalltheseintoaccount,we...
写作的重要性 6分最低限,只要结构不出错,得分应该为9分。
评判作文
四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。
内容不跑题即可,注意:
1.不要妄图以情动人;2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。
结构上牢记总分总:
先写主题句(TopicSentence),再写分论点,最后写总结句(Conclusion)。
语言最重要,往往使评分产生重大差异,语言要模仿和包装。
基本表达
人们认为:
itisgenerally/widelybelieved/held/agreedthat
越来越:
beincreasingly+adj.,beontherise,thegrowingnumberof
万能理由(Omnipotence)
1. 方便:
convenient/convenience
2. 效率:
efficient/efficiently/efficiency
3. 节省和浪费:
savetime/money/space;economical,thrift
wastetime/money/space;costly,lavish
4. 人的心理健康:
independent,cooperative,competitive,
considerate,confident,creative,sociable,
perseverance;selfish,isolated,conserative
5. 人的身体健康:
health,disease,strong,strength,energetic
6. 娱乐:
colorful,pleasure,joy,recreation,entertainmentm,relax
tired,boring,lonely
7. 环境:
environment,pollute,poisonous,dirty
8. 安全和危险:
safe,danger,risk
9. 经验:
experience,socialexperience,enterthesociety
10. 人际:
humane,fair,unfair,help,assist,freedom,freely
写完之后修改注意:
(内容方面尽量不要修改)
1、字母大小写
2、怪符号
3、单词拼写
4、主谓一致
5、动词时态
6、名词单复数
六级写作补充范文
1.(2005年1月六级真题)
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteanopenletteronbehalfoftheStudentUnionaskingpeopletogivehelptoastudentwhoisseriouslyill.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:
对病人的简单介绍:
目前的病情和家庭情况
目前的困难:
无法承担医疗费用,需要护理
希望捐助;联系方式
YourHelpNeeded
Dearfriends,
Iamwritingtoyou,onbehalfoftheStudentUnion,toaskforyourhelpforLiMing,aschoolmateofoursfromtheDepartmentofComputerScience.Heisseriouslyillnowandhastohaveahearttransplantatonce.Tomakethingsworse,hecomesfromthewestofourcountryandhisfamilyisquitepoor.
LiMingisnowconfrontedwiththefollowingdifficulties.Tobeginwith,hecan’taffordthemedicalexpenses.Hisfamilydoesn’thaveagoodfinancialbackground.Moreover,hisparentshavealreadybeendeepindebtinordertosendhimtouniversity.Inaddition,hisfamilyisfarawayandheneedssomeonetotakecareofhimdayandnight.Onlywithintensecarecanourfriendrecoverfromhisdisease.
Onnoaccountcanweseeourfriendsufferordie.Heisindesperateneedofyourhelp,especiallyfinancialdonationstohelphimpayforhisexpenses.Let’sallgivehimourhands.Anyonewhowantstoofferhelpcancontactusat88588858oryoucanemailusby love@.Pleaseactwithoutdelay.
Yourssincerely,
ZhangHua
ChairmanoftheStudentUnion
2.(2005年6月六级真题)
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteashortessayentitledSayNotoPiratedProducts.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:
目前盗版的现象比较严重
造成这种现象的原因及其危害
我们应该怎么做
Usefulwordsandexpressions:
盗版:
piracy(n.)
盗版产品:
piratedproducts
知识产权:
intellectualpropertyrights
侵犯版权:
infringesb’scopyright;copyrightinfringement
SayNotoPiratedProducts
Piracyisaseriousproblemwithwhichthiscountryisconfronted.Inmanyplacesweseepeoplepeddlingpiratedbooksordisks.Actually,piracyhasbecomesowidespreadthatithasseverelyhinderedthedevelopmentofthenation’seconomy.
Anumberoffactorsaccountfortheproblem,butthefollowingarethemostcriticalones.First,piratedproductsaremuchcheaperthancopyrightedones,sotheyareveryattractivetopeople,especiallyyoungsters,whoarenotfinanciallywell-off.Secondly,withhighlydevelopedtechnology,itisnotdifficulttomanufacturepiratedproducts.Withoneauthorizedcopy,theillegalproducerscanmakethousandsoffakeonesataverylowcost,thusmakinghugeprofits.
Asaresult,intellectualpropertyrightsareseverelyinfringedupon.Honestproducerswilllosethemotivationtodevelopnewproducts.Meanwhile