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六级作文技巧

 开头

    Aproberbsays, “ Youareonlyyoungonce.” （适用于已记住的名言）

    Itgoeswithoutsayingthatwecannotbeyoungforever.（适用于自编名言）

    Aseveryoneknows,Noonecandenythat…

    Accordingtoarecentsurvey,about78.90fthecollegestudentswantedtofurthertheirstudyaftertheirgraduation.

    主体

    tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finally（强烈推荐）

    tostartwith,next,inaddition,finally（强烈推荐）

    firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast（强烈推荐）

    mostimportantofall,moreover,finally

    ontheonehand,ontheotherhand（适用于两点的情况）

    foronething,foranotherthing（适用于两点的情况）

    incomparison,likewise,similarly,inthesamemanner

    ontheotherhand,conversely,whereas,while,instead,nevertheless,incontrast,onthecontrary,comparedwith …,…

    结尾

    Obviously（此为过渡短语）,wecandrawtheconclusionthatgoodmannersarisefrompolitenessandrespectforothers.

    tosumup,inconclusion,inbrief,onaccountofthis,thus

    Thus,itcanbeconcludedthat…,Therefore,wecanfindthat…

    Obviously,itishightimethatwetooksomemeasurestosolvetheproblem.

    Accordingly,Irecommendthatsomemeasuresbetaken.

    Consequently,tosolvetheproblem,somemeasuresshouldbetaken.

好句~~

    一）比较

    1.Theadvantagefaroutweighthedisadvantages.

    2.TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.

    3.AmaybepreferabletoB,butAsuffersfromthedisadvantagesthat...

    4.Itisreasonabletomaintainthat...butitwouldbefoolishtoclaimthat...

    5.Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.

    6.Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.

    7.AandBhasseveralpointsincommon.

    8.AbearssomeresemblancestoB.

    9.However,thesameisnotapplicabletoB.

    10.AandBdifferinseveralways.

    11.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.

    12.Peopleusedtothink...,butthingsaredifferentnow.

    13.ThesameistrueofB.

    14.WonderingasAis,ithasitsdrawbacks.

    15.ItistruethatA...,butthechieffaults（obviousdefects）are...

    二）原因

    1.Anumberoffactorsareaccountableforthissituation.

    Anumberoffactorsmightcontributeto（leadto）  （accountfor）thephenomenon（problem）.

    2.Theanswertothisprobleminvolvesmanyfactors.

    3.Thephenomenonmainlystemsfromthefactthat...

    4.Thefactorsthatcontributetothissituationinclude...

    5.Thechangein...largelyresultsfromthefactthat...

    6.Wemayblame...,buttherealcausesare...

    7.Partoftheexplanationsforitisthat...

    Oneofthemostcommonfactors（causes）isthat...

    Anothercontributingfactor（cause）is...

    Perhapstheprimaryfactoristhat …

    Butthefundamentalcauseisthat...

三）后果

    1.Itmaygiverisetoahostofproblems.

    2.Theimmediateresultitproducesis...

3.Itwillexerciseaprofoundinfluenceupon...

    4.Itsconsequencecanbesogreatthat...

    四）批驳

    1）Itistruethat...,butonevitalpointisbeingleftout.

    2）Thereisagrainoftruthinthesestatements,buttheyignoreamoreimportantfact.

    3）Somepeoplesay...,butitdoesnotholdwater.

    4）Manyofushavebeenundertheillusionthat...

    5）Acloseexaminationwouldrevealhowridiculousthestatementis.

    6）Itmakesnosensetoarguefor...

    7）Toomuchstressplacedon...mayleadto...

    8）Suchastatementmainlyrestsontheassumptionthat...

    9）Contrarytowhatiswidelyaccepted,Imaintainthat...

    五）举例

    1）Agoodcaseinpointis...

    2）Asanillustration,wemaytake...

    3）Suchexamplesmightbegiveneasily.

    4）...isoftencitedasanexample.

    六）证明

    1）Noonecandenythefactthat...

    2）Theideaishardlysupportedbyfacts.

    3）Unfortunately,noneoftheavailabledatashows...

    4）Recentstudiesindicatethat...

    5）Thereissufficientevidencetoshowthat...

    6）Accordingtostatisticsprovedby...,itcanbeseenthat...

七）开篇

    1）Manynationshavebeenfacedwiththeproblemof...

    2）Recentlytheproblemhasbeenbroughtintofocus.

    3）Recentlythephenomenonhasbecomeaheated topic.

    4）Recentlytheissuehasarousedgreatconcernamong...

    5）Nowadaysthereisagrowingconcernover...

    6）Neverinourhistoryhastheideathat...beensopopular.

    7）Facedwith...,quiteafewpeoplearguethat...

    8）Accordingtoarecentsurvey,...

    9）Withtherapiddevelopmentof...,...

    八）结尾

    1）Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecandrawtheconclusionthat...

    2）Itishightimethatstrictmeasuresweretakentostop...

    3）Itisnecessarythatstepsshouldbetakento...

    4）Inconclusion,itisimperativethat...

    5）Thereisnoeasymethod,but...mightbeofsomehelp.

    6）Tosolvetheabove-mentionedproblem,wemust...

    7）Insummary,ifwecontinuetoignoretheabovementionedissue,moreproblemswillcropup.

    8）Withtheeffortsofallpartsconcerned,theproblemwillbesolvedthoroughly.

    9）Wemightdomorethanidentifythecause;itisimportanttotakeactionsto..

    10）Takingalltheseintoaccount,we...

写作的重要性  6分最低限，只要结构不出错，得分应该为9分。

    评判作文

    四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。

    内容不跑题即可，注意：

1.不要妄图以情动人；2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。

    结构上牢记总分总：

先写主题句（TopicSentence），再写分论点，最后写总结句（Conclusion）。

    语言最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要模仿和包装。

    基本表达

    人们认为：

itisgenerally/widelybelieved/held/agreedthat

    越来越：

beincreasingly+adj.,beontherise,thegrowingnumberof

    万能理由（Omnipotence）

    1. 方便：

convenient/convenience

    2. 效率：

efficient/efficiently/efficiency

    3. 节省和浪费：

savetime/money/space;economical,thrift

    wastetime/money/space;costly,lavish

    4. 人的心理健康：

independent,cooperative,competitive,

    considerate,confident,creative,sociable,

    perseverance;selfish,isolated,conserative

    5. 人的身体健康：

health,disease,strong,strength,energetic

    6. 娱乐：

colorful,pleasure,joy,recreation,entertainmentm,relax

    tired,boring,lonely

    7. 环境：

environment,pollute,poisonous,dirty

    8. 安全和危险：

safe,danger,risk

    9. 经验：

experience,socialexperience,enterthesociety

    10. 人际：

humane,fair,unfair,help,assist,freedom,freely

    写完之后修改注意：

（内容方面尽量不要修改）

    1、字母大小写

    2、怪符号

    3、单词拼写

    4、主谓一致

    5、动词时态

    6、名词单复数

    六级写作补充范文

    1．（2005年1月六级真题）

    Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteanopenletteronbehalfoftheStudentUnionaskingpeopletogivehelptoastudentwhoisseriouslyill.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

    对病人的简单介绍：

目前的病情和家庭情况

    目前的困难：

无法承担医疗费用，需要护理

    希望捐助；联系方式

    YourHelpNeeded

    Dearfriends,

    Iamwritingtoyou,onbehalfoftheStudentUnion,toaskforyourhelpforLiMing,aschoolmateofoursfromtheDepartmentofComputerScience.Heisseriouslyillnowandhastohaveahearttransplantatonce.Tomakethingsworse,hecomesfromthewestofourcountryandhisfamilyisquitepoor.

    LiMingisnowconfrontedwiththefollowingdifficulties.Tobeginwith,hecan’taffordthemedicalexpenses.Hisfamilydoesn’thaveagoodfinancialbackground.Moreover,hisparentshavealreadybeendeepindebtinordertosendhimtouniversity.Inaddition,hisfamilyisfarawayandheneedssomeonetotakecareofhimdayandnight.Onlywithintensecarecanourfriendrecoverfromhisdisease.

    Onnoaccountcanweseeourfriendsufferordie.Heisindesperateneedofyourhelp,especiallyfinancialdonationstohelphimpayforhisexpenses.Let’sallgivehimourhands.Anyonewhowantstoofferhelpcancontactusat88588858oryoucanemailusby love@.Pleaseactwithoutdelay.

    Yourssincerely,

    ZhangHua

    ChairmanoftheStudentUnion

    2．（2005年6月六级真题）

    Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteashortessayentitledSayNotoPiratedProducts.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

    目前盗版的现象比较严重

    造成这种现象的原因及其危害

    我们应该怎么做

    Usefulwordsandexpressions:

    盗版：

piracy（n.）

    盗版产品：

piratedproducts

    知识产权：

intellectualpropertyrights

    侵犯版权：

infringesb’scopyright;copyrightinfringement

    SayNotoPiratedProducts

    Piracyisaseriousproblemwithwhichthiscountryisconfronted.Inmanyplacesweseepeoplepeddlingpiratedbooksordisks.Actually,piracyhasbecomesowidespreadthatithasseverelyhinderedthedevelopmentofthenation’seconomy.

    Anumberoffactorsaccountfortheproblem,butthefollowingarethemostcriticalones.First,piratedproductsaremuchcheaperthancopyrightedones,sotheyareveryattractivetopeople,especiallyyoungsters,whoarenotfinanciallywell-off.Secondly,withhighlydevelopedtechnology,itisnotdifficulttomanufacturepiratedproducts.Withoneauthorizedcopy,theillegalproducerscanmakethousandsoffakeonesataverylowcost,thusmakinghugeprofits.

    Asaresult,intellectualpropertyrightsareseverelyinfringedupon.Honestproducerswilllosethemotivationtodevelopnewproducts.Meanwhile