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作文评分标准

作文

TheCertificateCraze

1、现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试

2、其目的各不相同

3、在我看来……

14分

Itisacommonphenomenonnowadaysthatpeoplehurryfromoneexaminationtoanotherinpursuingallkindsofcertificates.Somepeoplearedeterminedtogetmanycertificatesinarelativelyshortperiodoftimeandpreparingforexamshasbecomethefocusoftheirlife.

Thepurposeoftakingexamsvaries.Somepeoplethinkthatgettingacertificatecanbeaproofoftheirability,whileothersjustwanttogetanaccesstohighereducationoverseas.Stillotherstakepleasureincopingwiththechallengesposedbycertificateexams.Formostpeoplewhowanttopursueabetterlife,obtainingacertificateistheonlychoice.

Inmypointofview,itisthedemandofcertificatesthatleadstothe“certificatecraze”.Thehighcompetitivesocietydrivespeoplemadforcertificatesthatarebelievedtobethevitalweapontowininfiercecompetitions.Forpeoplewhoapplyforadecentjob,arightcertificateprobablymakesthedifferencebetweensuccessandfailure.Thisisalsotruewithstudentswholongforanofferfromworld-famousuniversities.Solongasthereisademandforcertificates,thecrazeforthemisinevitable.

11分

Nowadays,manypeopleespeciallycollegestudentsliketotakeallkindsoftestsforthecertificates,suchasCET4or6,GRE,ComputerTestandsoforth.

Peoplewhotakepartinthesetestshavetheirownpurposes.Somewanttogetthecertificatessothattheycanfindjobsmoreeasily.Someneedthecertificatessothattheycangetthequalificationtostudyabroad.Afewpeoplemaywanttogetthecertificatesjusttoshowofftheirspecialabilitiestoothers.Someotherpeoplewishtoprovethemselvesandincreasetheirconfidenceaftertheysucceedingettingthecertificates.

AsfarasI’mconcerned,it’snotwisetotakepartinsomanytestsandgetthecertificates.Thethingweshoulddofirstistofindoutwhatiswereallyneedandwhatiswereallywanttodo.Andthenwecanstriveforthat.Weshouldn’tcloseoureyesandjustfollowothersaimlessly.Forourselves,takingthetestscancostusalotoftimeandenergy;forthesociety,it’salsoakindofwaste.Collegesshouldalsotakesomemeasurestoleadthestudentstochoosewisely.

8分

Withthepressoffindingjobs,itbecomesmuchmorepopulartogetmorethanakindofcertifications,especiallyforthecollegestudents.WenameitCertificateCraze.TheCertificateCrazedrivesustobebusyinpreparingforavarietyofexamssuchasTOEFL,computerExamandsoon.

However,todifferentpeople,thereasonwhytheywanttogetcertificationsisdifferent.Someofthemthinkit’snecessaryforthemtofindabetterjob.Intheiropinion,thefirmsjudgetheabilityofemployersbythecertificationwhichtheyown.Otherstreatthecertificationastheexamoftheirownability.ButmostofthemjustwanttofollowthetremeofCertificateCraze.

Inmyperspective,theCertificateCrazehasgoodeffectonus,italsoleadsustodoingsomeuselessthing.Withthedevelopmentofsociety,theCertificateCrazerequiresustogetmoreknowledge.Themoreknowledgewehave,thebetterlifewe’llhave.Buttosomedegree,theCertificateCrazealsomakesbadeffectiononus.Itmakesuswastthetimetodosomethingwedon’tneed.WeshouldhaveacorrectattitudetowardstheCertificateCraze.

5分

Currently,alargenumberofnationalfolksespeciallystudentsinuniversitieshaveamazedwiththecertificatecrazesuchlikeGRE,CETandothertech-classcertificatecraze.Seemingly,alargepartofpeoplearelikethosecrazes.

Actually,theyhavenotsameaimstotakepartinthisissue.Somestudentswanttodigmajorinothercountry,sotheyhavetopasssometestssuchlikeGRE.However,somestudentsinsomeextentwanttohuntagoodinvaritykindsoffields.Theyhavetogetthecertificationforamorefruitfuljob.

Frommyindividualpart,weshouldbewisedtoselectoneeffentientcertificatecrazetopass.Moreover,acertificationislessimportantthanyourgenuineabilityinsocial.Wemustknowtheimportanceofabilitybutnotthecertificationonhand.Afterall,weworktouseintelligenceandexperience,notacertification.Ibelievethatwewillmasterourgoalsifwehavegenuineintelligenceandability.Itisnotnecessarytogetacertificationtokillmoretime.Crazeiscraze,abilityisabilityactually.

2分

Howdoyoucettestlastweek?

Thisquestionisfullofourdailylifeeverywhere.Intoday’ssociety,havesomemanykindsofcertificate,thecertificateisveryusedtous.Onadditionofthatpeoplethinkthecertificatecrazesforthestandedtocheckstudent’spower.

Peopleisinterestedofthecertificatecrazehavemanydifferentpurposes.Somestudentsthinkfindagoodjobmaybeoneoftheseneed,theycanusedthecertificategotoagoodschooloruniversity.Othersthinkifgetmorecertificatecrazs,moreoppresiatefromotherstudentsandteacherscome.CertificatecanhelpuseandlettheotherpeopleknowuswhatcanIdoandwhatarewehave.

Inmyopinion,Ithinkthecertificatecrazeisnotsonecessarytoacollegestudents.,manystudentswanttogettoomuchcertificatecrazesothattheysacrificemanystudytimetoresearchthetestswhichcangettheiracertificatecraze.AndIthinkweshouldsetupanewidelofcertificatecraze,whichnotseemthecertificatecrazeastheonlysymboltocaculnateAsweknownastudent.

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体例说明：

斜体与标准答案不同，但可以接受，不扣分

^缺少部分无关紧要的信息，但不影响理解，不扣分

下划线有错误，须扣分

^信息不全，须扣分

8题

Totackletheproblemofgraduationgap,theUniversityofWisconsin-Madisonhelpsminoritystudentsgetoverthestereotypethat______.（theyarelessqualified）

[1分]

1.thattheyarelessqualified

2.（the）minoritystudentsarelessqualified

[0.5分]

1.that/therearelessqualified（局部信息有误）

2.theyarenotqualified（意思不确切）

3.^lessqualified（信息不全）

[0分]

1.qualified（信息错误）

2.theyhavepouredresourcesintopeercounseling（信息错误）

9题

Foryears,privatecollegessuchasPrincetonandMIThaveprovidedminoritystudentswith______duringthesummerbeforefreshmanyear.（preparatorycourses）

[1分]

1.somepreparatory/preparationcourses

2.preparatorycoursesoncampus

[0.5分]

1.prepare/preparingcourses（语言错误）

2.givingthemsomepreparatorycourses（语言错误）

3.somepreparatorycourse（意思不确切）

4.preparatorycoursesontocampus（语言错误）

5.campusandpreparatorycourses（多余信息）

[0分]

1.scholarships（信息错误）

2.bringingminoritiesontocampus（信息错误）

3.accesstocampus（信息错误）

10题

WashingtonandLeeUniversityiscitedasanexampletoshowthatthegapofgraduationratesbetweenwhitesandminoritiescan______.（beclosed）

[1分]

1.beclosedwitheffortandmoney

2.beeliminated/erased/removed

3.disappear/vanish

[0.5分]

1.becontrolled/diminished/decreased/minimized/reduced（意思不确切）

2.closed（语言错误）

3.besmaller（意思不确切）

[0分]

1.havedippedto63%by2007（信息错误）

2.beequal/thesame（信息错误）

复合式听写评分原则及标准

一、复合式听写要求学生在听懂短文的基础上，用听到的原文填写空缺的单词，以及用听到的原文或用自己的语言正确地补全所缺信息。

二、给分标准：

1、36题到43题每题为0.5分。

拼写完全正确的总记给0.5分；凡有拼写错误一律不给分，大小写错误忽略不计。

2、44题至46题每题满分为2分。

答出第一和第二部分内容且语言正确各得1分；完全没有答对问题得0分。

3、阅44题至46题时，应首先判断填入的词语是否能表达原文的意思，如意思完全相反或意思曲解，即使结构和拼写正确也不给分。

三、扣分标准：

1、44题至46题中凡语言错误扣0.5分。

每题语言错误扣分不超过0.5分，凡不得分部分如有语言错误不再重复扣分。

2、44题至46题中，凡有与题目无关的信息扣0.5分；凡信息不全或局部信息有误，扣0.5分。

3、44题至46题中如出现大小写、标点符号错误或明显属于笔误但不影响辩认的拼写错误，均不扣分。

体例说明：

斜体与标准答案不同，但可以接受，不扣分

^缺少部分无关紧要的信息，但不影响理解，不扣分

下划线有错误，须扣分

^信息不全，须扣分

44题

Whohadundertakenthemostexhaustivesearch（1point）wouldbethemostsatisfiedwiththeirfinaldecision（1point）

[2分]

1.whohadundertakenthemostexhaustivesearcheswouldbetheonesmostsatisfiedwiththeirfinaldecisions

2.whohaveundertakenthemostexhaustivesearchwillbethemostsatisfiedwiththeirfinaldecision

[1.5分]

1.whohadundertakenthemostexhaustivesearchwouldbethemostsatisfactionwiththefinaldecision（语言错误）

2.whoundertakethemostexhausted/exhaustingsearcheswillbethemostsatisfiedwiththeirfinaldecisions（语言错误）

3.whohadundertakenthemost^searchwouldbe^mostsatisfiedwiththeirfinal^decisions（信息不全）

4.whohadundertookthemostexhaustedsearchwouldbe^mostsatisfiedwiththeirfinaldecisions（语言错误）

5.whohaveconsideredeverypossibleoptionwillbethemostsatisfiedwiththeirfinaldecision（意思不确切）

[1分]

1.whohadundertaken^mosttriedworkwillbethemostsatisfiedin/about/at/duringthefinaldecision（局部信息有误，语言错误）

2.whohaveundertakenthemostexhaustedsearchwillbethemostsatisfiedinmakingtheirfinaldecisions（语言错误，局部信息有误）

3.whohasundertakenthemostdetailresearchwouldbethemostsatisfiedwiththeirfinaldecisions（语言错误，局部信息有误）

4.whohadtaken^mostexhaustedresearcheswouldbe^mostsatisfiedwith^finaldecisions（信息错误）

5.whohadundertakenalltheoptionswouldbethemostsatisfied^（局部信息有误，信息不全）

[0.5分]

1.whoundertakingthemostexhaustedsearchwouldmakethemostsatisfieddecision（语言错误，信息错误）

2.whotakeafterthejob-huntingresearchmay^moresatisfiedwiththeirfinaldecision（信息错误，语言错误）

[0分]

1.duringthesurveytheyarenotsatisfiedabouttheirdecisions

2.wouldundertakeajobthattheyfeelmostsatisfied

45题

Whythesepeoplefeellesssatisfiedis（1point）thataworldofpossibilitiesmayalsobeaworldofmissedopportunities（1point）

[2分]

1.whytheyfeellesssatisfiedisthataworldofpossibilitieswillalsobecomeaworldofmissedopportunities

2.whythesepeoplefeellesssatisfiedisthataworldofpossibilitiesmayalsomeanaworldofmissedchances

[1.5分]

1.whythesepeoplefeellesssatisfiedisthataworldofpossibilitiesmayalsobeaworldofless/mixedopportunities（局部信息有误）

2.whythepersonfeelslesssatisfiedisthattheworldofp