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英语话题作文
英语话题作文
话题1:
家庭、朋友和周围的人
Part1:
SomeTips
概述:
人物介绍属于记叙文(narration)的写作范畴,写作时要围绕人物组织材料。
所写短文中应包括人物(who)、时间(when)、地点(where)、主要事件(what)等内容。
写作时,要做到主题鲜明,内容清楚,并注意结构的完整性。
技巧点拨:
1.仔细审题,确定主题。
审题四确定:
1)确定类型:
人物介绍
2)确定体裁:
记叙文
3)确定主体时态:
一般现在时
4)确定主体人称:
第三人称
2.合理安排短文的结构层次,组织好所提示内容表达的先后顺序。
3.句子时态要在上下文中有相关性、连续性,要与表达内容一致。
4.审题后要先列出简明扼要的提纲,其次写出草稿,经过修改之后,再正式成文。
一、人物介绍的写作步骤:
1.Age,sex,appearance,character,birthdayandbirthplace
2.Familybackground
3.Educationbackground
4.Bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)
5.Evaluation
二、人物介绍写作常用的词组及句子:
1.Age,sex,appearance,character,birthdayandbirthplace
1)Age:
IwasninewhenmymotherwentbacktoWalestovisitherparents.
MrGregoryGaleisoneofthefewpeopleinEnglandwhoare100yearsold.
Heenteredpoliticsattheageof25.
Atage16,withayearandahalfofschoolingand$3inhispocket,hemovedtoNewYorkCity.
BenFranklindiedin1790at84.
Likemanykidsof16,Iwantedmyparents’timeandattention,butitneveroccurredtomethattheymighthaveneedsandproblemsoftheirown.
Shewasagedsixwhenshefirstwenttoschool.
Ben,aged21,fondofswimminganddriving,hasjustgraduatedfromacollege.
Jeff,30,teachesinbothQinghuaHighSchoolandQinghuaJuniorSchool.
ConsiderChlore,a23-year-oldcollegestudent.
WhenIwasinmyearlyteens,onceIstayedwithmyfamilyinthemountainsforsummerholiday.
Hewasinhislate30swhenhemovedtoEngland.
2)Birthdayandbirthplace:
…was/werebornin…on…
eg.ShewasborninPolandonNov.7,1867.
Bornin1985,heisnowan24-year-oldstudent.
3)Sex&Marriage
eg.Heisamanoffortyandhavea9-year-olddaughter.
Heis35,maleandunmarried.
4)Appearance
eg:
Sheisalovelygirl,witharoundface,bigeyes,whiteteethandlongblackhair.
Heisthin,tallandwearingapairofthickglasses.
5)Height:
eg.Heis1.76meterstall.
Heis176centimeterstall.
Heisreallyatallman,about1.98metersinheight.
6)Health:
eg.Welllookedafter,thechildrenlookhealthy.
Heisnotsostrong,but(he’s)ingoodhealth.
2.Familybackground
…was/werebornin/intoapoor/richfamily
his/herfamilywassopoorthat…
his/herfatherwasverystrictwithhim…
thesonofapoorfamily
whenhewasasmallboy/young
asachild/asaboyof15
duringhis/herchildhood
spendhischildhoodin…
liveahappy/hardlife
eg.AbrahamLincoln,thesonofapoorfamily,wasborninKentuckyonFebruary12,1809.
Bornintoapoorclerk’sfamily,CharlesDickenshadlittleschooling.
3.Educationbackground
beadmittedto…college
graduatefrom…departmentof…university
whenatcollege,hemajoredin…
receiveadoctor’sdegree
goabroadforfurtherstudies
eg.Hestartedschoolin1984andleftschool12yearslater.
HewenttostudyinBeijingUniversityin1984and4yearslaterhegraduated(fromthatuniversity).
Welearnedmanycourses,suchasEnglish,mathsandsoon.
Hegothisbachelor’s(master’s,doctor’s)degreeinmathematicsinApril1998...
4.Bigeventsinone’slife
beinterestedin…/befondof…
workhardat…
serveas…
devotehislifetime/himselfto…
concentratehimselfto…
doresearchabout/into…
makeupone’smindtodosth.
dosthwithgreatdeterminationandperseverance
bestrictinsth.
havea…wayofdoingsth
tryone’sbesttodosth.
encouragesbtodo
fightfor,giveupone’slifeforsb/sth
winaprize/thefirstprizein…competition
receive/obtain/wintheNobelPrizefor…
begoodat…dowellin…
becrazyabout… enjoy…
makerapidprogressin…
setanewworldrecordof…
equaltheworldrecord
win(won)agold/silver/bronzemedal
beselectedto/becomeamemberof…
study/trainhard
gothroughhardship
overcomemanydifficulties
haveagift/talentforlanguage,etc
eg.Hisfavoritesportisswimmingandplayingtable-tennis.
Inhissparetime,helikesreadingandenjoyingtraveling.
He’sgoodatspokenEnglishandevenbetteratusingcomputers.
5.Evaluation
oneofthebest/mostimportant…
setagoodexamplefor…
amodelteacher/worker
berespectedbyeveryone
speak/thinkhighlyof…
behonoredas(anexcellentathlete)
hishardworkbroughthimgreatsuccess
heistheprideofChina.
Hisheroicstoryspreadalloverthecity
makegreatcontributionsto…
Consistency/Perseveranceisthekeytosuccess.
befamous/knownas beregardedas
becomeaworldchampionat…Championships
remembersbforever
anewchapterofhistoryhasbeenturned
LeiFenghasbeenpraisedforhiscommunistspirit.
aninspiringleader
6.描写人物外貌和性格特征
good-looking funny-looking strong-lookingugly-looking ordinary-looking white-haired
blue-eyedwarm-hearted kind-hearted absent-mindedbad-tempered near-sighted
far-sighted astrongwilltall short beautifulpretty lovelynaughty smart wise
cleverbrightdiligentintelligenthardworkinglazy healthy
humorous charming attractive talkativeconfident independent patient
beinconditionbeoutofconditionfinewell
三、语法、句法高分tips
1.A.概况:
尽量用分词短语、同位语结构,使文章简洁,通顺
译:
钟南山1941年出生在广州,他是中国最伟大的医生之一
1)BorninGuangzhouin1941,ZhongNanshanisoneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina.
2)ZhongNanshan,oneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina,wasborninGuangzhouin1941.
B.外貌,性格:
巧用with做定语
译:
我的历史老师是个漂亮女人,她长着两只大眼睛,留着长发
Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwomanwithtwobigeyesandlonghair.
C.教育经历:
注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼
1)MajoringinMaths,hegraduatedfromZhongshanUniversityand4yearslater,hewentabroadforfurtherstudies.
2)GraduatingfromZhongshanUniversity,shewentonfurthereducationandreceivedadoctor'sdegree.
D.生平:
尽量用倒装,非限定定语从句等,润色文章
1)Notonlyisheinterestedinscience,butalsohehasagiftformusic.
2)Hesetanewworldrecordofswimming,whichwonagoldmedalforChinaTeam.
E.评估:
注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组
1)Leifengsetusagoodexample,soallthepeoplespokehighlyofhimandallrespectedhim.
2)HeisoneofthegreatestwritersinChinaandmanypeoplelikehisworks.
四、样本写作
姓名:
刘翔 出生年月:
1983年7月13日
性别;男 出生地:
上海 身高:
1.89米
教练:
孙海平 偶像:
Jordon 专项:
110栏
成就:
2006年7月12日在瑞士洛桑以12秒88破世界记录
爱好:
听音乐,打游戏,看书
自评:
为人诚恳,随和,自信
瑞士洛桑:
Lausanne,Switzerland
写作指导:
1.组织材料,写出句子
1)为人诚恳,随和,自信乐观的男孩刘翔,出生在1983年7月13日上海.
Liuxiang,anhonest,easy-goingandconfidentman,wasbornonJuly13th,1983inShanghai.
2)他的偶像是Jordon,爱好是听音乐,看打游戏及看书.
HehasanidolofJordonandlikeslisteningtomusic,playinggamesandreadingbooks.
3)拥有身高1.89米的他擅长110米栏.
Withtheheightof1.89metres,heisgoodat110Metreshurdles.
4)在他的教练孙海平的帮助下他取得了很多傲人的成绩.
UnderthetrainingofSunHaiping,hehasgainedmanywonderfulachievements.
5)他2006年7月12日他在瑞士洛桑以12秒88破世界记录.
Hebroketherecordby12’88onJuly12th,2006inLausanne,Switzerland.
2.扩句成文,构成篇章
①LiuXiang,anhonest,easy-goingandconfidentman,wasbornonJuly13th,1983inShanghai.②HehasanidolofJordonandlikeslisteningtomusic,playinggamesandreadingbooks.③Withtheheightof1.89meters,heisgoodat110metershurdles.④Underthetrainingofhiscoach,hehasgainedmanywonderfulachievements.⑤Hehasgainedmanywonderfulachievementsandoneofachievementsisthathebroketherecordby12’88onJuly12th,2006inLausanne,Switzerland.
3.检查润色
1)时态是否正确
2)人称是否一致
3)是否用5个句子
4)是否漏掉必要信息
5)是否语句连贯
LiuXiang,,anhonest,easy-goingconfidentandoptimisticman,wasbornonJuly13th,1983inShanghai.HehasanidolofJordonandlikeslisteningtomusic,playinggamesandreadingbooks.Withtheheightof1.89meters,heisgoodat110metershurdlesandunderthetrainingofhiscoach,hehasgainedmanywonderfulachievements.Forexample,hebroketheAsianrecordwiththetime13’12in2002,andtwoyearslater,hewonthechampionshipagainin12’91inAthenwhichtiestheworldrecord.Mostexcitingly,hebroketherecordby12’88onJuly12th,2006inLausanne,Switzerland.
Part2:
HaveATry
一翻译下列句子
1.姚老师是我们的英语老师,他今年41岁,瘦高个,带深度眼镜。
2.黄老师是我们的英语老师,她1970年来到我们学校,已经当了30多年的英语老师。
3.达.芬奇(LeonardodaVinci)是16世纪意大利著名画家,科学家。
4.他是一位天才,把科学知识和艺术想象结合起来。
5.《蒙娜丽莎》是一幅享有盛誉的肖像画杰作。
它是达.芬奇的代表作。
6.帕瓦罗蒂(Pavarotti)被誉为“高音C(theHighC’s)之王”,为古典音乐和歌剧的普及做出了杰出贡献。
7.赵普从小家境贫寒,初中毕业后入伍。
8.他24岁下岗,开一家小服装店谋生。
9.安南(Annan)先生出生于1938年4月8日,加纳(Ghana)。
他在加纳、美国和瑞士上顶尖的大学,获得经济学和管理学的硕士学位。
10.安南(Annan)先生为建立一个更有组织、更和平的世界所做出的工作得到大家的承认。
二语法填空
YiJianlian,2.12m1,wasbornonOctober27,1987inGuangdongProvince.In19992talentwasfoundbyalocalcoachbychance,andthenhe3(begin)hisbasketball_4_(train).In2000,5hewasjustthirteenyearsold,hejoinedtheChineseBasketballYoungTeamandbeganto6(know)bymoreandmorepeople.Fouryears7,hewaschosen8amemberoftheChineseNationalBasketballTeamandthentookpartintheAthensOlympicGames.YiJianlianhasbeenplayingintheNBA9June,2007,andisbecominganotherChinese10(internation)basketballstarinthefootstepsofYaoMing.
三基础写作
1.【写作内容】
你校文艺协会最近准备出一期影集,纪念已逝的香港艺人沈殿霞(LydiaShum)。
为了让更多的人了解她,拟在扉页编写一则英文基本信息见下表:
生平
1947年生于上海,60年代初进入演艺圈
知名度
享誉海内外华人圈40多年
形象特点
蓬发,黑框眼镜,乐观,幽默
表演经历
参与拍摄100多部电影及5000多集连续剧
代表作
《欢乐今宵》(EnjoyYourselfTonight)节目
【写作要求】
1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.参考词汇:
蓬松的bouffant黑边的black-rimmed剧集episode;
4.文章的结尾已经给出,不计入句数。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯
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