读后续写11小鞋子.pptx

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LOGO,ChildrenofHeaven,读后续写教学案例11,Contents,ReadingforinformationReadingforlanguage,Readingforstructure,FindingcuesforwritingContinuationWriting,ChildrenofHeaven,Reading,Aliandhisyoungersister,Zahra,livedwiththeirparentsinapoorneighborhood.Theirmotherwasverysickandtheirfatherwasstrugglingtofindajob,andtheyhadonlyalittlemoneywithwhichtobuyfood.Astheyhadnotpaidtherentforseveralmonths,thelandlordwasbreathingdowntheirnecks.Oneday,AlitookZahrasshoestoashoerepairmantobefixed,buthelostthemonthewayhome.Itwasntuntilhegothomethatherealizedhehadlosttheshoes.Hewasafraidthathisparentswouldbeangryanddisappointed,sohebeggedhissistertokeepitsecret.ZahraagreedandthetwodecidedtoshareAlisrunningshoes.Zahrasschoolhourswereinthemorning,soshewouldwearthemfirst.Afterschool,shewouldrushbackandgivethemtoAli.Hecouldthenruntohisschool,whichbeganintheafternoon.Althoughheranasfastashecould,Alioftenarrivedlateandwaswarnedbytheschool.,Reading,Aliheardaboutalongdistanceracethatwasheldfortheboysinthecity.Whenhelearnedthatthethirdprizewasanewpairofshoes,hedecidedtotakepart.Heranhomeexcitedlyandpromisedhissisterthathewouldwinherthenewshoes.Thedayofracearrived.Alihadastrongstart,buthalfwaythroughtheracehebegantogettiredandhislegsbegantoache.GettingmoreandmoreexhaustedhethoughtonlyofZahraandhispromisetoher.Dreamingofthenewshoeshewouldwinforhissistergavehimstrength,andhestayedrightbehindthetwofastestrunners,determinedtofinishthird.Suddenly,asthefinishlinedrewnear,anotherrunnercollided（碰撞）withAlifrombehindandhecrashedtotheground.,Readingforinformation,Whathappenedoneday?

Oneday,AlitookZahrasshoestoashoerepairmantobefixed,buthelostthemonthewayhome.Itwasntuntilhegothomethatherealizedhehadlosttheshoes.,WheredidAliandhisfamilylive?

Aliandhisyoungersister,Zahra,livedwiththeirparentsinapoorneighborhood.Howwasthefamilycondition?

Theirmotherwasverysickandtheirfatherwasstrugglingtofindajob,andtheyhadonlyalittlemoneywithwhichtobuyfood.Astheyhadnotpaidtherentforseveralmonths,thelandlordwasbreathingdowntheirnecks.,Readingforinformation,WheredidAliandhisfamilylive?

Theylivedinapoorneighborhood.,Whathappenedoneday?

Helosthisyoungersistersonlypairofshoes.,Howwasthefamilycondition?

Thefamilywasstrugglingtomakeendsmeet.,Readingforinformation,WhywasAliexcitedaboutthelongdistancerace?

Aliheardaboutalongdistanceracethatwasheldfortheboysinthecity.Whenhelearnedthatthethirdprizewasanewpairofshoes,hedecidedtotakepart.Heranhomeexcitedlyandpromisedhissisterthathewouldwinherthenewshoes.,HowdidAlisolvetheproblemandkeepthesecret?

Hewasafraidthathisparentswouldbeangryanddisappointed,sohebeggedhissistertokeepitsecret.ZahraagreedandthetwodecidedtoshareAlisrunningshoes.Didthesolutionwork?

Zahrasschoolhourswereinthemorning,soshewouldwearthemfirst.Afterschool,shewouldrushbackandgivethemtoAli.Hecouldthenruntohisschool,whichbeganintheafternoon.Althoughheranasfastashecould,Alioftenarrivedlateandwaswarnedbytheschool.,Readingforinformation,HowdidAlisolvetheproblemandkeepthesecret?

Hebeggedhissistertokeepitsecret.ZahraagreedandthetwodecidedtoshareAlisrunningshoes.,WhywasAliexcitedaboutthelongdistancerace?

Thethirdprizeoftheracewasanewpairofshoes,sohepromisedhissisterthathewouldwinherthenewshoes.,Didthesolutionwork?

Notreally.Afterschool,shewouldrushbackandgivethemtoAli.Althoughheranasfastashecould,Alioftenarrivedlateandwaswarnedbytheschool.,Readingforinformation,WouldAlistillfinishthird?

HowdidAliperformintherace?

Alihadastrongstart,buthalfwaythroughtheracehebegantogettiredandhislegsbegantoache.However,hestayedrightbehindthetwofastestrunners,determinedtofinishthird.,Didanythingspecialhappenduringtherace?

Suddenly,asthefinishlinedrewnear,anotherrunnercollided（碰撞）withAlifrombehindandhecrashedtotheground.,Readingforlanguage,breathedownonesneck,breathe是呼吸的意思；neck是脖子的意思。

breathedownsomeonesneck连在一起，是对某人盯得特别紧的意思。

例句：

IhaveonecustomerwhoconstantlywatchesmewhileImrepairinghiscar.Finally,Itoldhimthatifhecontinuestobreathedownmyneck,hesgoingtohavetofindanothermechanic.Icantconcentrateonmyworkwithhimaroundallthetime.,Readingforlanguage,Gettingmoreandmoreexhausted,hethoughtonlyofZahraandhispromisetoher.,tiredandhislegsbegantoache.,Dreamingofthenewshoeshewouldwinforhissistergavehimstrength,andhestayedrightbehindthetwofastes