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外研版英语短文改错

（一）

DearElli,

I’maseniorstudent.IlikemakefriendswithpeoplebutIdomybesttogetonwelleveryone.ButinlastweekIfoundthatoneofmyfriendswroteinherEnglishdiarythatshedislikedmeandthathedidn’twanttobemyfriendanymore.NowshehasstartedtomakefunofmebecauseofI’mfat.I’mkindtoher,butwhycan’tshebefriendofmine?

Otherproblemisaboutmyweight.ShouldIdolessexerciseorusepills?

Anddoyouknowanyotherway?

Pleasegivemesomeadvices.

Yours,

Mary

（二）

DearSir,

IamnowacollegestudentatPekingUniversity.I’mquiteinterestedinthepositionofferingbyyourwebsiteforpart-timeEnglishreporters.IthinkI’mfitthejob.Asastudent,I’vereadalotandhavemanyknowledgeindifferentfield.I’mfondofEnglishanddowellinbothspeakingandwriting.Besides,I’measilytogetalongwithandIenjoyworkingtogetherwithanother.Aboveall,Ionceworkasareporterformycollegebroadcaststation.SoI’msureIcandothejobwellifIwillgetthechanceworkforawebsite.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.

（三）

Haveyoueverheardfromthesaying:

AllworkandnoplaymakeJackadullboy?

Whatthismeansisthatifyoustudyallthetimesyouwillbecomeaboringperson.Youmustgooutandhavingfunwithyourfriends,otherwiseyouwilllosehim.Noonewantstobefriendswiththepersonwhothatonlyworksandstudies.Perhapsyouhaveaconfidenceproblem.Pleasetryrememberthattheworkyoudoisforyourselfratherthanforanyoneelse.Youdonothavetocompeteyourclassmates.Noonecanbehappierinstudyingsevendayandsevennightsaweek.

（四）

DearTracy，

AlthoughI'm16yearsold，butmyfatherstilltreatsmeasacarelesschildren.Hedoesn’tvaluemyopinions.Heisverystrictwithmeandoftenpunishesmeaboutleavingthingslyingaroundinthehousewhilehedidthisalltime.Ithinkhefailstosetanexamplemetofollow.Butheoftensays：

“DoingasIsay，notasIdo.”Evenworse，hepointsoutmypastmistakestoguests，makingmefeelhurting.Ilovemyfather,butIcan’tbearwhathedoes.Ihavebeentriedmanytimestotalkwithhebutheneverlistens.Please,helpme.

（五）

EverymorningStevewenttoworkbytrain.Ashehasalongtrip,healwaysbuysnewspaper.Ithelpsmakethetimepassingmorequickly.OneTuesdaymorning,heturnedoverthesportspage.Hewantedtoseethereportaboutanimportantfootballmatchthenightbefore.Thereportwassointerestingthatheforgottogetoffathisstation.Hedidnotknowitunlesshesawthesea.Hegotonatthenextstation,andhadtowaitalongtimeforatraintogoback.Itwasnodoubtthathearrivedlateattheoffice.HisbosswasangrywhenSievetoldtohimwhyhewaslate.“Workisveryimportantthanfootball!

”,heshouted.

（六）

Whenmyfatherboughtmeacomputerasabirthdaygiftformeinlastyear,Ifeltveryexcited.Asweallknow,computersaregettingmoreandmoreusefullynow.Muchinformationcanbestoredinthem.Wecanalsolearnthathaslatelyhappenedintheworldontheinternet.Inpast,peoplehadtodolotsofworkwhichwasverydangerous.Now,but,computerscandoitinstead.Whenanexamiscoming,Ioftendidsomeexercisesonmycomputer.Thenitwillcorrectitandtellmetherightanswers.Inthiswayitisveryconvenientformetopreparetheexamthanbefore.Thecomputerhasbecomemyrealfriend.

（七）

In10thAprilthisyear,asLiMingwasleavinghishomeinthemorning,hegotintothelifttogetherawoman.Whentheliftgottothefourfloor,itstoppedandamiddle-agedmanenter.Oncethemangotin,hesnatchedthewoman’shandbag.HepulledbothLiMingandthewomanoutofthelift.LiMingrandownstairs.Whenhereachedforthegroundfloor,hesawthemanwalkedout.Hetoldthecaretakeratonceandtheybothfollowedthieftoarestaurantnearbywhichtheymettwopolicemen.LiMingtoldthemallaboutthecaseandthethiefhasfinallycaught.

（八）

OnedaylastweekIwentawalkinthecountry.Inthemorningtheweatherwaswellandthesunwasshining;theskywasblueandtherewerenocould.Soonacoolwindstartedblownandblackcloudswerecoveredthesunandthenitstartedtorain.Therewerenohousesinsight,butIgotverywet.Afterahourorso,Imanagedtocatchabuswhichtookmehome.ButwhenIarrivedIhasshiveringandIknewIhadcaughtabadcold.Imusthavetakenmycoat.Ihadnothingtodobuttostayathomeandwaitforadoctor.

（九）

Ivisitedmyauntinthecountrysidenearthecityinlastweek.Iwassurprisedtoseethatgreatchangeshadbeentakenplaceinthecountryside.Takemyaunt’sfamilyforexample.Wesupplyprecioustreesandflowerstothestoresinthecityandhaveovertenworkersworkingforthemselves.Theirfamily’sincomereachedasmuch100,000yuanlastyear.Noronlydidtheyhaveahouse,acarandcomputers,theycanalsoaffordatripabroadeveryyear.Whenaskingwhatelsetheyneededmost,theysaidthattheywantedtolearnafewEnglishsothattheycoulddobusinesswithforeignersdirectly.Totheirdelighted,mycousincanusethathehaslearnedfromuniversitytohelpthemwithoverseastrade.

（十）

Thankyouforyoure-mail!

Youaskedmeaboutmyfriendsandhowweliketodo.Well,IguessIdowhatmostpeopletodo.Ilikereadingbooks,watchingfilmsandlistentomusic.Myfavouritesportisvolley-ball.Mostofmyfriendplayvolleyballtogetherwithme.Mybestfriendistwoyearselderthanme.Shegoestoadifferentschool,butwealwaysgettogetherafterschooltotalkandhavefuns.Wesometimesdohomeworktogether.Whataboutyourself?

Tellmesomethingaboutyourself,yourfriendsandwhatyouliketodo.IhadalsoliketoknowsomethingaboutChina.WehavereadChinainschoolandIamveryinterestinginlearningmoreaboutit.Pleasee-mailmesoon!

Lisa

（十一）

HereisaphotowhichI’vekeptformanyyears.Look,thechildinitisme.DoyouthinkitthatIwasverylovely?

Yes.Yousee,Iwasmakingface.Therewasahatonmyheadwhiletherewerenoshoesonmyfoot.IaskedmymotherhowoldIwasthem.MothersaidthatIwasthreeyearsoldinthattime.Canyouseethehouseallmakingofwood?

Thehousewhichwasnewthen,butitisveryoldnow.Iwasborninthisoldhouseandlivedhereforeighteenyears.Ilikelivinghere,becausethereweremanyfriendlyneighbourswegetalongverygoodwitheachother,butit’sagreatpitythatWewillmoveawaysoon.Totellatruth,Ireallycan’tbeartopartfromthem.

（十二）

Goodmorning,everyone.YesterdayIreceivedaletterfromaelderlygentleman.Hetoldmetheotherdayhesawthatsomestudentinourschooluniformcrowdedontoabuswithoutwaitingtheirturns.Onthebustheyrefusetooffertheirseatsforoldpeople.Whatwasworse,theyevensaiddirtywordstoeachother.Iamverymuchsorryforthis.Today’syoutharetomorrow’soldpeople.RespecttheoldandcaringfortheyoungisafinetraditionofourChinese.Everyoneofushavetheresponsibilitytokeepitup.Ihopethatyoucanlearnsomethingthisincidentandyouwillhavegoodmannerswhetheryouareinsideoroutsidetheschool.Thankyou.

（十三）

Hello!

I’mHannah,isformerEditorofKiwibox’sLife&Peoplesection.I’venowmovedandbecametheSeniorEditorofBooks&School.Alittleaboutmeyoumaynotknow:

Iam17-year–oldhighschooljuniorfromArizona.I’vebeenonKiwiboxforJanuaryof2004,whichIbecameareporter.OutsideofKiwibox,myhobbiesincludemusic,writingandjusthangingoutandtrytogetthroughhighschool.I’mreallyhappilytobeapartoftheBooks&Schoolsection.Ilovereadandwrite,sobookreviewsarealwaysalotoffuns.Ifyouhaveanyquestionsorcommentsaboutthissection,I’dlovetoanswerit.Youcanreachmeatgingermulatta.

（十四）

HenryRoycedidnotlikehiscar,thatranbadlyandoftenbrokeup.Sohedecidedtomakebettercarhimself,butin1904heproducedhisfirstnewmodel.CharlesRolls,acarmaker,wasveryinterestinginRoyce’scar,andsoonRollsandRoycegointobusinesstogether.OneoftheirfirstmodelwastheSilverGhost.In1907,aSilverGhostbroketheworld’srecordbydrive14,371mileswithoutbreakingdownonce.Afterthedrive,itwascostjustover￡2toputthecarbackintoperfectcondition.

ThisisnotsurprisingthattheSilverGhostwasregarded“thebestcarintheworld”.

（十五）

Howmuchtimesdoyouspendwithyourparents?

Whendidyoulasttellthemwhatisonyourmind?

Youparentsareyourdearestpeopleintheworldwhenyouareyoung.Andtheyalwayscareofyoudeep.Buteventhoughmanychildrenstilllovetheirmumanddad,familiesmaybecomemorecloseasyougetolder.Theendoftheyearisatimeforfamiliestogettogether.Haveyoueverthoughtwhatyoucanshowyourparentsthatyoulovethem?

Findchanceanddosomethingforthemortohaveasinceretalkwiththem.Ifyoucandothis,yourparentswillbeveryhappy.

（十六）

“Practicemakesperfect”wasanoldsaying.Ittellsusthatitdoesnotanymatterifweareslowatdoingsomething.Aslongaswekeepontryingandpractice,we’lldoagoodjobintheend.ThesayingisespecialusefulinEnglishstudy.Sinceastudentispooratspeaking,heshouldgraspeverychancetoopenmouthandspeakEnglish.HisoralEnglishmaybeexcellentonedayduetohishardworks.NotonlyisthesayingusefulinEnglishstudy,itisalsohelpfulinourdaylife.Toanextent,itisnoshortcutindoingeverythingsincekeytosuccessliesin“Practicemakesperfect”.

（十七）

AtaFridaynight,apooryoungartiststoodatthegateofthesubwaystationandplayedhisviolinwithlargep