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2015届高三复读班英语------改错小卷11
命题人、审核人:
顾淑萍
1.ThreefriendsandIwasdrivingonahighway.Whileweweregoingatleast50milesperhour,wepassedoveracar.Ithadbrokendown,stoppedonthesideoftheroad.Myfriendslowsdown,andpulledbehindtheothercar.HegotoutofthecarimmediateandbeforeIknewithewashelpingtheotherpersonpushthecardowntheroadtoaspotwherewasn’tsoclosetothepassingcars.Fromthewaytheywerepushingthecar,itlookedasifmyfriendwaspushingthemallbyhimself.Ithoughtmyfriendhelpacompletestrangerlikethiswasagreatthing,butIwon’tforgethisgoodnatureorcharacter.
2.DearBrad,
I’mverygladtohearfromyou.Inyourlastletteryouaskaboutthepost-80sinChina.ActuallyIamtheboywhobelongstothisgroup.Comparingwithourparents,lifeforusisgettingmuchhard.Thejobmarketistoughandthehouseisexpensivelytoafford.Nowmanygirlsprefertomarrywithamanwhoownsahouseandacar.Therefore,Idon’tthinklovebuiltonhouseandcarsistruelove,andIdoubthowlongitwilllast.
Asamatteroffact,thoughsituationsaretoughtoday,alotofwepost-80saremakinggreateffortsliveagoodlife.Ibelievewewillhaveanicefuture.
LiHua
3.Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen,
Someofusarehavingproblemsaboutourparents,astheyoftenlookintoourschoolbagsorreadourdiaries.Ifullyunderstandwhywearecomfortableaboutit,butitisnoneedtofeeltoosadly.Ourparentsarecheckinginourbagsordiariestomakesurewe’renotgettingintotroubles.Theyhaveprobablyheardofsomehorriblestoriesaboutotherkidsandthinkingwemightdothesame.Orperhapstheyjustwanttoconnectwithusandaredoingitallwrong.Mysuggestionis:
Tellthemwewantthemtotrustusasmanyaswe’dliketotrustthem.Ifyoudon’tthinkyoucantalktothem,writethemaletterandleaveitliearound---theyareboundtoreadit.
Thankyou!
4.WespendtwoweeksinLondonlastyear.Wewentthereintheautumn.WethinkitisthebestseasontovisitEngland.Theweatherisusuallygoodbuttherearen’ttoomanytouristsinOctober.WestayedinasmallhotelintheWestEnd.Itwasconvenientaswedidmostofourtravelingbyfoot.Wewenttolookattheplaceswherealltouristssee.WesawBuckinghamPalaceandtheNationalGallery.WewenttoshoppinginOxfordStreetandspenttoomanymoney.Whatwelikedmost,though,wasgoingtotheatre.Wedon’thavethechancetoseesowonderfulplaysathome.AlotofpeoplesayEnglishfoodisverybadly.Wedidn’tthinkso.It’struethatmostoftherestaurantsareFrenchorItalianorChinese,butwehadsomeverygoodmeal.
5.Tomisaseniortwostudentswhodevoteshimselftohislessonseveryday.LastSaturday,asusual,hewenttoseveralcourses.Intheevening,hestudiesathomeuntildeepintothenight.Hewastoosleepyandtiredthathecouldn’tworkeffectively.InSundaymorning,Tomwasabouttostudywhenhisfathercameupandadvisedhimtohavebreak.Soontheyhadagoodidea.TheyboughtakitewhichtheylikeditverymuchandthenthefamilywenttothesuburbswhereTomenjoyedflythekitehimself.Thefamilyhadapicnictogetherbutfeltveryrelaxedintheopenair.OnMonday,Tomwasenergeticandactivelyinclass.Hesaiditwasonlywhyhehadabetterweekend.
6.Peopleoftenhavetroublesgettingusedtoanewculture.Theyareusuallycuriouswhentheyfirstarriveaforeigncountry.Therefore,iftheystayforalongtime,theymaystarttofeeldifferentstagesofcultureshock.Theycanfeelaloneorsadbecausehecan’tdealwiththelocalpeople.Howquickpeoplegetusedtoculturedifferencesmaybedependonthewaytheylearn.That’saproblemiftheycan’tspeakthelanguage.Onotherhand,somecanstudythesituationandmakegoodguessesabouttheculture.Whentheyfinallybegantounderstandsomeofthelanguageandmakesomenewfriends,theywillgraduallyenjoythemselvesandfeelsatisfying.
2015届高三复读班英语------改错小卷12
命题人、审核人:
顾淑萍
7.I’mtheonlydaughterofmyparents.SotheyworriedabouteverythingIdo.Forexample,whenIridemybike,myparentswon’tletmetoridebymyself.TheyareafraidImightfalloffmybikeandhurtmyself.Theyaretakinggreattroubletosupportabike,withmymotherevencarriedafirst-aidbox.I’mnotfreetorideandIoftensayangry,“Whynotletmeridealone?
”Now,mostfamilyhaveonechild.Parentswanttodoeverythingforhischildren.Thisdoesnogoodonthem.Toomanylovefromparentsmaypreventchildrenfromindependent.Inmyopinion,parentsshouldlettheirchildrendothattheyshoulddoalone.
8.MariawasafraidthatshewasgoingtohavetodeliverabadnewstoherfriendFreddy.Shewasupsettingaboutthenewsherself.Inthespring,Maria’smotherhadsaidMariamightbeallowedbringafriendalongonthefamilytwo-weekvacationatthebeach.Sincethen,MariaandFreddyhadbeendoingnothingandplanningallthethingtheywoulddotogether.BythetimeAugusthadarrived,Maria’smotherhadtotalforgottenherpromise.WhenMariaremindedher,shesaidthatshewassorrybutthatitwouldn’tbeenoughroomforFreddybecauseMaria’scousin,Theresa,wouldbegoingtotheshorewiththem.NowFreddywasinhiswaytoMaria’shouse.
9.Getagoodeducationismoreimportanttodaythaneverbefore.InCanadamostlychildrenattendpublicschools.Publicschoolsaremainlyfoundbygovernmentsthroughtaxincome.StudentsinCanadataughtinEnglishandinFrench.TherestsofCanadianchildrenattendprivateschools,thataresupportedmainlybyfeespayingbyparents.Bylaw,childrenmustattendtheschoolfromage5to16.ThereareseveraldifferentlevelsintheCanadianeducationsystem.ThefirstwascalledElementarySchools,whichincludeskindergartensthroughgrade7or8.
10.MyfriendDickwassevenyearsold,andhersisterKatherinewasfive.Onedaytheirmothertake
themtotheiraunt’stoplaywhileshewenttothecitybuysomenewclothes.Theyplayedforahour,andthentheiraunttookDickintothekitchen.Shegavehimanicelycakeandaknifeandsaid,“Dick,cutthiscakeinhalf,andgiveoneofthepiecetoyoursister.Butrememberingtodoitlikeagentleman.”“Howdogentlemendoit?
”Dickasked.“Theyalwaysgivethebiggeronepiecetotheotherperson,”answeredhisaunt.Dickthoughtupthisforafewseconds.Thenhetookthecaketohissisterbutsaidtoher,“Cutthiscakeinhalf,Katherine.”
11.Attentionplease,everyone.Ihaveannouncementtomake.YouwillpayavisittothemuseumonOctober1st.Ithinkwewillbeinterestinit.Inthecourseofthevisit,theguidewillgiveusanaccountofthepastorthedevelopmentofthecity.Shesaysomethingabouttheadvancedworkers,includedsometeachers.Wewillseemanypicturesthere.I’msureofthatwecanlearnalot.Afterthevisit,we’llhaveadiscussioningroupandeachofusmustwriteacomposition.Wearetostartoutasearlieras7:
00am.Wemustgatheragainsttimeattheschoolgate.That’sall.Thanks.
12.Ladiesandgentlemen,
Itisspecialpleasuretowelcomeournewstaffmember,MrTonyWhite,whohascomeheretoAmerica.MrWhitehasrecentlygraduatedfromtheUniversityofChicagowherehehasmajoredinEnglishLiteratureandminoredinTeachingEnglishastheSecondLanguage.Hewillworkingwithushereforatleasttwoyears.
Oneofthegoalsofourschoolaretopromoteunderstandingandcooperationbetweentheyoungpeopleofourtwocountries.ByhaveMrWhite,whoiswillingtosacrificethecomfortofhisfriendsandfamilytocometoastrangecountry,wefeelweareveryluckyandourgoalswillbeeasilyrealized.Onbehalfofthewholeschool,I’dliketoextendtoyou,MrWhite,yoursincerestwelcome.Weareindeedhappytohaveyouhere,andwewishyouallthebetterduringyourstayinChina.
13.AfewdaysagoIsawaninstructiveprogramonTV.Itwasaboutwhatthetrafficproblemincities.Itseemsthatagreatdealofdamagesisdonebytraffic.Allourcitiesaresufferingfromthis.Somebuildingsareactualfallingtopieces.It'softenfasttowalkthantogobycarandbybus.Theproblemhasbeengettingworsedaybyday.Thisisonlyoneofthethousandsproblemsinourcities.Allsortsofterriblethingswerehappeningtoourcities.Thequestionishowwecandoaboutit.0urroadswereneverdesigningforsuchheavytraffic.Itistimethegovernmentdoessomethingabouttheseproblems.
2015届高三复读班英语------改错小卷13
命题人、审核人:
顾淑萍
14.OnedayIpushedmycousinLiDonginwheelchaironanespecialnarrowsidewalk.Westruggledalongwithonewheelonthesidewalkortheotherontheroad.Suddenly,amanridinghismotorcyclepastusrapidly,missingLiDongbyseveralinch.Immediately,heturnedround,stoppedhismotorcycleandcameover.Wewereworriedshewouldblameusforhavestoodinhisway.Tooursurprise,hesaidnothingatallandhelpedoutpushthewheelchairuntilwereachedaslightlywidersidewalk.Thenheleftafterwecouldsaythankstohim.Wewereleavingashamedofwhatwethought.
15.Goodmorning,everyone.It’sgreathonorformetospeakhere.Myname’sLiXiaojun,borninaharmoniousfamily.Myfatherandmotherareallhighschoolteachers.Influencedbythem,Ireadwidelyduringmyearlyage,butI’vedevelopedagreatinterestinartsandsports.I’measy-going,getalongwellwithmyclassmates.
Itisthispersonalitywhichhelpsmewinoverallmyclassmates’friendships,andalsohelpmeovercomemanydifficultiesbothinacademicandpersonallife.Beingadmittedinyouruniversityhasalwaysbeenabeautifuldreamforme.IdreamconstantlythatI,alongwithmineclas