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Teachers'salariesshouldbebasedontheacademicperformanceoftheirstudents.

Writearesponseinwhichyoudiscusstheextenttowhichyouagreeordisagreewiththerecommendationandexplainyourreasoningforthepositionyoutake.Indevelopingandsupportingyourposition,describespecificcircumstancesinwhichadoptingtherecommendationwouldorwouldnotbeadvantageousandexplainhowtheseexamplesshapeyourposition.

Ipartlyagreewithteachers’ssalaryshouldbebasedontneacademicperformanceoftheirstudents.Asateacher,it’shisorherdutytosparenoefforttoteachtheirstudenthowtothinkandhowtolearnbythemselvesOnlywiththehelpandrecommendationsfromtheteacherscanstudentsacquirtheabilitytosolvedifficultproblemstheyarefacing.Butitisteachers’mustdotomakethestudentsgetagoodgrades?

Idon’tthinkso,causeeveryonehashisorherpersonality,sotheunityofstudentswhowanttotrytheirbesttoendeavorfortheirdreamsaccordingtothedictationoftheirteacherscannotbeguaranteed.

Teachers’salaryaccountfortoomanythings:

hisorherabilitytokeepstudentsworkinghard,hisorhercontributiontothereseachintheirfiledandtheskillsthatmakestudentsgettinginvoledinthetheirclass.Soindecidingtheamountofthesalary,manyfactorsshouldbetakenintoaccount,it’spartialtodependonlyontheperformanceofthestudents.

Students’performanceatschoolaredifferent.Someofthemknowingthehardnesstheirparentsarefacingwhenearningmoneyworkhardtosatisfytheirconscience,somewhowanttorichtheirdailylifejusthangoutandenjoythemselves,whileothersjustdoodlingeverywhereanddoingnothingatall.It’sinevitablethateverystudenthashisownlife,thustheywon’tallperformconsiderableintheirstudy.Teachersjustcanwarnthemeverytimethemeet,butit’snotenoughtoinhibitthemtodootherthings,teacherscannotfollowthemandmurmuringallthetime.

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Itissafetosaythatitistheteachers’liabilityandvirtuewhichensuretheirstudentsapromisingfuture.

Thereisnoeasyjudgmentforthestandardofteachers’salaries.However,ifweconsiderthereasonsgivenabove,wedon’tneedtogotoofartoseewhystudents’academicperformanceisnottheonlypossiblejudgmentforateacher’ssalary.

ThefollowingappearedinamemofromtheownerofachainofcheesestoreslocatedthroughouttheUnitedStates.

"Formanyyearsallthestoresinourchainhavestockedawidevarietyofbothdomesticandimportedcheeses.Lastyear,however,allofthefivebest-sellingcheesesatourneweststoreweredomesticcheddarcheesesfromWisconsin.Furthermore,arecentsurveybyCheesesoftheWorldmagazineindicatesanincreasingpreferencefordomesticcheesesamongitssubscribers.Sinceourcompanycanreduceexpensesbylimitinginventory,thebestwaytoimproveprofitsinallofourstoresistodiscontinuestockingmanyofourvarietiesofimportedcheeseandconcentrateprimarilyondomesticcheeses."

Writearesponseinwhichyoudiscusswhatspecificevidenceisneededtoevaluatetheargumentandexplainhowtheevidencewouldweakenorstrengthentheargument.

Thearguersproposedtoeliminateimportedcheesestockinginordertoreduceexpense.Severalsurveyresultshavebeencitedintheargumenttosupporttheposition.However,afewmoreevidencesareneededtofinallyconfirmthefeasibilityoftheproposalthanthoselistedintheargument.

Onthecontrary,inadditionFurthermore

Thearguerquotedtheresultofarecentsurveyconductedbyamagazinepress.

Lastbutnotleast,theconclusiondrawnbythearguerseemsexclusive.

Beforetakingtherisk,theboardshouldhaveconsideredtheconsequencewellandexaminedallthepossibleevidencesandwhatpotentialeffectstheymightleadto.

Thecheesestorehavestockedalotofbothdomesticandimportedcheese.Andlastyear’sbest-sellingwenttodomesticcheddarcheeses.Butmaybethere’resomeotherreasons.

Firstly,thestatisticsfromitsneweststorecannotpresentallthesellingconditionsinitschain.Maybeconsumersusuallywentthereloveeatingthesekindofcheese.Thesejustpresentoneplaceandalittleamountofpeople.Andlastyear’ssituationcannotbetheusefulreasontopredictthisyear’sselling,thedemandofcosumersandtherunnningofthechainstoresarefluctuating.

Secondly,thedomesticcheesesfromWisconsinmaychangefromtimetotime,anditwon’tsatisfytheconsumersinsomeplacesanymoreowingtothechangesinmaterialsandtaste.

Then,thesurveyconductedbythemagzinearedoubtable.The

resultisnotconvincingenoughtoshowthatdomesticcheesesarereallythemostpopularkind.Itdoesn’tmentionwhenandwherethissurvyreferredto,andhowmanystoresdidthesurvyinclude.Maytheyjustaskthestoreswhosedomesticcheesesareverypopular.

Fromallofabove,,thecompany’sdecisiontodiscontinuestockingtheimportedcheeseandincreasedomesticcheesesarenotwise.Howcanthecompanydoagoogjobincuttingitsexpensesandalsosellingthecheeseswellremainedtobeseen.

Tobeaneffectiveleader,apublicofficialmustmaintainthehighestethicalandmoralstandards.

Writearesponseinwhichyoudiscusstheextenttowhichyouagreeordisagreewiththeclaim.Indevelopingandsupportingyourposition,besuretoaddressthemostcompellingreasonsand/orexamplesthatcouldbeusedtochallengeyourposition.

Asapublicofficial,likeaactoronthestage,whatishe/shedoingisundertheflashlight.It’shis/herdutytospareeveryefforttobesurethatwhathe/shehasdonemustbeshameless,that’stosay,he/shemustsacrificehimself/herselftokeeppeopleliveabetterlife.

Whendealingwiththecomplicatedcontroversies,thedifficultieshe/shewillfacingaredifinitelyconsiderable.Howcanhe/shecopewithsuchthingsprettywellisthekeytothesuccess.He/shewillbefacingthedilemasuchas:

shouldIgetthosemoney,becomericherandbythehelpafriendofmine?

Inthoseconditions,ethicalandmoralstandardswillplayaninportantrole.Thosewhosemoralstandardsarehighenoughtorefusethosetemptationandbecomeadisinterestedman/woman.Maybesomeofthoseuglythingscannotbenoticed,butasaofficerservingforyourpeople’shappaniess,youwilljustfindthosethingsareasdirtyasawitch’sheart.

Withahighethicalandmoralstandards,youcanbeaeffectiveleaderofyourgroup.Andyourintegritywillalsoinspireyourstufftodothesamethingsasyou.Theexampleyouhavejusterectedwillthereforehaveabighitinyourgroup.Everyonewilltakeitforgrantedtodotheirjobinjustice,thusthedisinterestnesstorchwillbepasseddownonebyoneinyourgroup,andtheatmosphereofworkinginjusticethereforewillcomeintobeing.

Fromallthegivenreasonsabove,itwillnotmakeyougotoofartofindthefactthatbecominganeffectiveleaderneedshighethicalandmoralstandards.Thewayyoudodailythingswillabsolutelydecidewhichpathyouwilltakeandwhichkindofpersonyouwillbe.

Gonearethosedayswhenpeople

Thereisnowevidencethattherelaxedpaceoflifeinsmalltownspromotesbetterhealthandgreaterlongevitythandoesthehecticpaceoflifeinbigcities.BusinessesinthesmalltownofLeevillereportfewerdaysofsickleavetakenbyindividualworkersthandobusinessesinthenearbylargecityofMasonton.Furthermore,Leevillehasonlyonephysicianforitsonethousandresidents,butinMasontontheproportionofphysicianstoresidentsisfivetimesashigh.Finally,theaverageageofLeevilleresidentsissignificantlyhigherthanthatofMasontonresidents.ThesefindingssuggestthattherelaxedpaceoflifeinLeevilleallowsresidentstolivelonger,healthierlives.

Writearesponseinwhichyoudiscussoneormorealternativeexplanationsthatcouldrivaltheproposedexplanationandexplainhowyourexplanation（s）canplausiblyaccountforthefactspresentedintheargument.

However,theseevidencesarenotnecessarilyleadingtothearguer’sconclusion.Therearealternativeexplanationsandmoreevidencesshouldbedisplayedtoenhancethepossibilityofthearguer’sinterpretation.

ThearguersaidthattherelaxedpaceoflifeinLeevilleallowsresidentsherelivealongerandhealthierlife.Butthereseemsthatheneedsafewmoreevidentsifhewantstocometotheaboveconclusion.

Inthefirstplace,thebusinessesinthesmalltownreportfewerdaysofsickleavetakenbyindividualworkers.Maybeworkerliveinthethesmalltownhaveabetterhealthconditionthanworkersinthebigcitybecauseofthefresherair.Furthermore,maybefactoriesinthesmalltownhavealimitofdaysofsickleaveowingtotheirlackofpeople.

Inthefirstplace,asforthereasonsofthedifferenceofsickleaves,severalalternativeexplanationscanbelisted.

Secondly,asforthenumberofthephisicians,it’sdependsontheconditionsoftheplace.Bigcitieshavemoreopportunitiesandmorebenefittoget,thereisnodoubtthatphisicianswillfirstchoosethiscitytoworkin.What’smore,becauseofthehugenumberofpeople,thepatienttherewillalsobemore,accordingtothelawsoftheneedanddemand,theremustbemorephisicianinthebigcity.

Thirdly,thearguersuggetthatsmalltown’sresidentshaveahigheragethanpeopleliveinbigcity.Thebadhabitsandthepoorqualityoftheaircanaccountforthelessaverageageinthebigcity.Inaddition,asthenumberofpeopleinbigcityisbigger,eveniftheyhavethesamedeathrate,peopledeadeveryyearwillalsobemuchmorethanpeopledeadinsmalltown.

Thearguerproposestodrawtheconclusionthatrelaxedpaceinsmalltownleadstoalongerandhealthierlife.It’sassert