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初三一模上海各区范文
2017-2018初三一模考作文汇编
专题一:
图画类
One静安区
94.In60-100words,writeastorybasedonthepicturesbelow.(展开合理想象,看图写一篇60-100个词的有趣的短文故事,标点符号不占格)
Thefollowingwordsandphrasesareforreferenceonly.(以下单词和短语仅供参考)
hoursofstudyingtakeabreakapairofskates
【分析】本篇作文题材是漫画类作文,根据题目要求,展开想象,描述这四幅图,因此文章体裁应为记叙文,需注意时间地点人物的介绍,以及整篇文章所使用的时态应为一般过去时。
文章重心应放在第三第四副图上,要做到详略得当。
【参考答案】
OneSundayafternoon,Tomstayedhome,preparingforthecomingexam.Afterseveralhours’study,hewastiredanddeterminedtotakeabreak.Sohetookoutapairofskates,enjoyinggoingskatingoncountryroads.SuddenlyalittlecatrushedoutfromthesidescaredTomalot,buttimewastooshortforTomtostop.Asaresult,Tomfelldownandthelittlecatwashurt.Seeingthislittlecat,Tomhurriedtosendittothehospitalnearby.Luckily,thelittlecatwasn’thurtbadly.Aftertreatment,Tomtookithomeandtookgoodcareofit.Theybecamegoodfriendsandlivedahappylife.
Two浦区
VII.Writing(作文)(共20分)
94.In60-120words,writeastorytogoalongwiththegivenpictures.(根据所给图片,合理发挥想象,用60-120个词写一个故事)
(注意:
短文中不得出现考生的、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。
)
Thefollowingwordsandexpressionsareforreference(以下词语仅供参考)
theft,handbag,bench,runaway,walkingstick,trip,arrest
94.参考文章:
Onacloudymorning,athefthappenedonalittleboywhenhewasshoppingwithabasket.Thethievetookthehandbagoutofthebasketquietly.Itwastoolatewhentheboyreactedtothisbehaviourbecausethethieveranawayasfastashecould.Hejustonlyaskedforhelp.Anoldmanheardthevoiceandrealizedwhathappenedimmediately,heusedhiswalkingsticktopreventtherobberfromescaping,luckilyitworked.Thethievewastrappedbythewalkingstickandfelldown.Thepolicemancameherequicklyandarrestedhim.Theoldmangavebackthehandbagtotheboyandtoldtheboyhecouldbecarefulwhenhecameoutalone.Theboyshowedhisgreatthankstothebraveman.
专题二:
憧憬,愿望类
One虹口区/松江区
VII.Writing(作文)(共20分)
94.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“I’mlookingforwardto…in2018”(以“2018,我期待……”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
每个人对生活都有憧憬和期待,2018年你的期待是什么?
请说说你的理由。
(注意:
短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。
)
参考文
AsfarasIamconcerned,themostthingIlookforwardtoistoentermyownidealkeyhighschool.
WhenIaminmyidealhighschool,Icanlearnmoreaboutstudyandmoreaboutthesocietyoutofclassinsteadofjustconcentratingonbookknowledge.IfIamadmittedtoaboardingschool,Iwillalsohaveachancetoliveinthedormitorywithmyclassmates,whichwillenablemetolearntocooperatewithothersandlearntobemoreindependentandmoremature.
Two奉贤区
VII.Writing(作文):
(共20分)
Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Imagine2020”(以“畅想2020年”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
未来已来,请发挥你的想象力,畅想2020年你的生活中会有哪些令人欣喜的变化。
(注意:
短文中不得出现任何人名。
校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。
)
Thefollowingisforreferenceonly(以下表达仅供参考)
enjoy
bemoreconvenient
not...anylonger
文
imagination 2020
Ihaveimaginedalotaboutlivesin2020.Iwanttosummarizemyimaginationintwoparts.
Thefirstpartishighspeed.In2020,wewillhavequicker transportationmeans.It’llonlytake us afewhoursto go anywherearoundtheworld.Thesecondpartisconvenience.Duetotherapiddevelopmentofartificialintelligence,mostoftheworkcanbedonebycomputersorevenrobots.Wejustneedtogivesomesimpleinstructionstofinishcomplicatedtasks.
Ibelievemylifein2020willbemoreinterestingandwonderful.
专题三:
观点类
One普陀区
94.writeatleast60wordsonthetopic"myopinionongettingpayfordoinghousework【以“我对有偿做家务的看法”为题,写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格】
提示:
一些家长为奖励,你怎么看这件事?
可以了鼓励孩子参与家务活,便给么结合自身的
经历阐述观点和理t予孩子一定的报酬作为孩子承担家务的由。
(注意:
短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。
)
参考文
Myopinionongettingpayfordoinghousework
Ithasbeenonhotdiscussionwhetherchildrenshouldgetpayfordoinghousework.AsfarasIamconcerned,gettingpayfordoinghouseworkisreasonableandbeneficialtochildren’sgrowth.
Astheonlychildinmyfamily,Iamalwaysencouragedtodovariouskindsofhousework,suchaswashingclothesandmoppingthefloor.Inreturn,myparentsgivemepocketmoneyasrewards.Throughthisexperience,notonlydoIbecomemorediligentandhardworking,butalsoIamabletoaffordwhatIwanttobuy.Inaddition,astheoldsayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains”,Iamfullyawareofthevalueoflabourandhappinessintheprocessofdoinghousework.
Inconclusion,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthatitisessentialforchildrentogetpayfordoinghousework,whichcontributestoourall-rounddevelopment.
Two宝山区
.Writing(作文)(共20分)
Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“ArePiggyGoodforChildren”(以“储蓄罐对孩子有益吗?
”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。
)
Usethefollowingpointsasaguide:
Dochildrenstillneedpiggybanksnow?
Whatcanchildrenunderstandbysavingmoneyinthepiggybank?
(注意,短文中不得出现考生的、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。
)
参考文:
Arepiggybanksgoodforchildren?
Somepeoplethinkthatpiggybanksaretooold-fashionedforchildrentouse,butIthinktheyareagreatidea.Childrencannotunderstandwhatsavingisreallyallabout,butbysavinginpiggybanks,theycanslowlyunderstandit.Childrenmightnotunderstandwhat100yuanmeansuntiltheyseealotofcoins.Ifyouhave100yuanworthofcoins,youcanbetterunderstandthemeaningof100yuan.Savingbecomesfunwhenyoucanseeyourmoneyslowlybuildup.Forchildren,thepiggybankisstillbestwaytosavemoney.
Three黄浦区
VII.Writing
94.In60to120words,writeaboutthetopic“Lifeisnotalways…”.
作为一名初三学生,你的学习生活紧忙碌。
要想取得好的成绩,良好的心态很重要。
你是如何看待初三的学生生活,请谈谈你的体验或想法,分享自己的故事。
文:
Howtimeflies!
Ihavestudiedinmyschoolforthreeyears.AndIwillgraduatefrommiddleschoolinseveralmonths.Iameagertosharemyhappinessandsadnesswithyou.Ihadsomanymemoriesinthreeyears’life.Onofthemimpressedmeverymuch.Istillremember,whenIbegantolearnEnglish,Ifoundittoodifficult.NomatterhowhardItried,Istillcouldn’tdowellinitandalmostgaveitup.AssoonasmyEnglishteacherfoundmyproblem,shehadatalkwithmeabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.Sincethen,shehaskepthelpingme.Littlebylittle,I’vebecomeinterestedinEnglishandI’mgoodatit.IthinkIamsoluckytobecomeoneofherstudents.I’velearnedalotfromher.Iwilltrytohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.Ithinkitisahappythingtohelpothers.
专题四:
书信类
One青浦区
VII.Writing(作文):
(共20分)
94.ReadthisletterfromKimandwritebackinatleast60words.(阅读下列书信,写一封给Kim的回信,不少于60词,标点符号不占格。
)
DearSarah,
IhaveaproblemthatIneedtotalkoverwithyoubecauseit’sdifficultformetotalktomyparents.Idon’tthinktheyunderstandme.Thereisonethingthatisimportanttomeatthemoment.Iwanttobehappier.Myparentsdon’tletmegooutwithmyfriendsveryoftenandIoftenfeelbored.Canyoupleasetellmewhattodo?
Yours,
Kim
书信大意:
Kim的父母不允许他经常与朋友们外出,为此他感到非常烦恼,希望得到Sarah的建议。
DearKim,
I’mgladtohearfromyouandIknowwhatbothersyounow.Accordingtowhatyousaidintheletter.Ihavesomeadvicewhichmayhelpyou.Firstly,ifyouwanttohangoutwithyourfriends,youshouldtellyourparentswhereyougoandwhenyouwillcomeback,theyneedtobesurethatyousafewithyourfriends.Besides,makesurethattheycancontactyouwhereveryougo,ortheymaybegocrazy,whichmayleadtothechancethatyouarenotallowedtogooutwithyourfriends.Moreover,thereasonwhyyourparentsforbidyoutogooutliesinthattheymaythinkitwilldistractyoufromstudy,soyouhavetoexplaintothemthathangingoutwithfriendsisagoodwaytoreliefthestressfromstudy,andnexttimeyourparentsmayunderstandyou.Inbrief,Ihopethesuggestionswillhelpyou.
专题五:
夹叙夹议类
One嘉定区
.Writing(作文)(共20分)
94.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“_______bringsmehappiness”(以“______为我带来快乐”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
我们的生活多姿多彩,在学习和生活中,总有一些经历,习惯,爱好或一些人为你带来快乐。
请结合自身经历,谈谈你的感想。
(注意:
短文中不得出现任何人名,学校及其他信息。
否则不予评分。
)
Thefollowingisonlyforreferenceonly(以下表达仅供参考)
※befullof
※make...happy
※befondof
Friendbringsmehappiness
Ibelievethateveryonecanliveahappylife.Inmyopinion,itisfriendthatbringsmehappiness.WhenI'mintrouble,myfriendsarealwaysaroundmeandreadytodomeafavor,whichmakesmehappy.However,friendshipisaroundwayticket.Ihavealreadyreceivedsomuchlove.Therefore,inordertokeepourfriendshipstrong,Ishoulddomoretohelpmyfriends.Ishouldlistentothempatientlywhenthey'reannoyedbysomething.Also,Ishouldgivemyshouldertothemwhentheyfeelsad.AndIshouldshareallmyhappinesswiththemsothatthehappinessistwicethanbefore.
Allinall,friendcanbringalotofhappiness.Whydon'tyoubuildawonderfulfriendshipforyourself,myfriend?
Two浦东区
VIIWriting
94.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Thebeautyinmylife”(以“我生活中的美”为题,写一篇不少于60字的短文,标点符号不占格)
生活中的美无处不在,如在学校活动中,与家人共处时,与朋友相聚时,与动物相处时。
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请选择一个方面,结合发生在你自己身上的一次经历,来写一写你发现的发生在家人或师生间的亲情之美,朋友或同学间的友谊之美,人与动物间的和谐之美。
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并说说理由。
(注意:
短文中不得出现任何人名,学校名或其他相关信息,否则不予评分)
Thebeautyinmylife
Peoplealwayssaythatwearelackingoftheeyesofrealizingthebeautyinlife.Ican’tagreewithitanymore.Lastweek,Iwokeupveryearlyinthemorning,soIdecidedtotakeawalk.Thestreetwasveryquietandthereweremanyoldpeopledancinginthesquare.Withoutmanycars,Irealizedthecitylookedsocleanandbeautiful.Somecoffeeshopsdecoratessowell,whichattractedmyeyes.Thecitywascoveredbythegreentrees,whichmadeitagreencity.Ilikedthisfeelingsomuch.Atthismoment,Ifoundthecitywassolovely,Ijustignoreditsbeautyusually.
Three徐汇区
VII.Writing(作文):
(共20分)
Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Myhappymomen